(F)(重庆綦江区期末)
你在假期参加了志愿者工作,深刻感受到积极乐观的心态在日常学习、工作和生活中对人们起着至关重要的作用。请按照思维导图提示用英语写一篇小短文,参加某国际社区志愿者网站以“A letter to residents(居民)”为主题发起的征文活动。(15分)
参考词汇:useful, tired, cheer up, hobby, relaxed

Dear Residents,
Sometimes we may have bad feelings. What can we do?
Feeling good is important to our daily life. Let's try to be active and stay away from bad feelings.
Best regards,
A volunteer
你在假期参加了志愿者工作,深刻感受到积极乐观的心态在日常学习、工作和生活中对人们起着至关重要的作用。请按照思维导图提示用英语写一篇小短文,参加某国际社区志愿者网站以“A letter to residents(居民)”为主题发起的征文活动。(15分)
参考词汇:useful, tired, cheer up, hobby, relaxed
Dear Residents,
Sometimes we may have bad feelings. What can we do?
Listening to music is a useful and quick way to relax. It can cheer you up when you feel down. Talking to parents or close friends about your worries is also very helpful. They can give you support and good advice.
If you don't want to talk with others, you can also pick up a hobby. Reading books can help you forget troubles for a while, and travelling can help you see new things. Find what makes you happy and do it regularly(定期地).
Feeling good is important to our daily life. Let's try to be active and stay away from bad feelings.
Best regards,
A volunteer
答案
Listening to music is a useful and quick way to relax. It can cheer you up when you feel down. Talking to parents or close friends about your worries is also very helpful. They can give you support and good advice.
If you don't want to talk with others, you can also pick up a hobby. Reading books can help you forget troubles for a while, and travelling can help you see new things. Find what makes you happy and do it regularly(定期地).
If you don't want to talk with others, you can also pick up a hobby. Reading books can help you forget troubles for a while, and travelling can help you see new things. Find what makes you happy and do it regularly(定期地).
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语书信类征文,主题是向居民介绍应对坏情绪的方法。解题思路:首先承接题目给出的开头,引出处理坏情绪的话题;接着结合思维导图中的应对方式(听音乐、和亲友倾诉、阅读、旅行),运用给定参考词汇,分点阐述每种方法的作用;最后总结积极心态的重要性,呼应征文主题。
【解析】
写作时,先承接开头的问题“What can we do?”,说明听音乐是有用的放松方式,能在情绪低落时让人振作;再提到和父母或朋友倾诉烦恼,能获得支持与建议;还可培养爱好,比如阅读能暂时忘记烦恼,旅行能开阔视野;最后呼吁大家找到让自己开心的事,定期去做,保持积极心态。
【答案】
Listening to music is a useful and quick way to relax. It can cheer you up when you feel down. Talking to parents or close friends about your worries is also very helpful. They can give you support and good advice.
If you don't want to talk with others, you can also pick up a hobby. Reading books can help you forget troubles for a while, and travelling can help you see new things. Find what makes you happy and do it regularly(定期地).
【知识点】
英语书信写作,话题作文,情绪词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,结合思维导图核心要点,合理运用参考词汇,结构清晰,内容具体,符合书信格式要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.4
这是一篇英语书信类征文,主题是向居民介绍应对坏情绪的方法。解题思路:首先承接题目给出的开头,引出处理坏情绪的话题;接着结合思维导图中的应对方式(听音乐、和亲友倾诉、阅读、旅行),运用给定参考词汇,分点阐述每种方法的作用;最后总结积极心态的重要性,呼应征文主题。
【解析】
写作时,先承接开头的问题“What can we do?”,说明听音乐是有用的放松方式,能在情绪低落时让人振作;再提到和父母或朋友倾诉烦恼,能获得支持与建议;还可培养爱好,比如阅读能暂时忘记烦恼,旅行能开阔视野;最后呼吁大家找到让自己开心的事,定期去做,保持积极心态。
【答案】
Listening to music is a useful and quick way to relax. It can cheer you up when you feel down. Talking to parents or close friends about your worries is also very helpful. They can give you support and good advice.
If you don't want to talk with others, you can also pick up a hobby. Reading books can help you forget troubles for a while, and travelling can help you see new things. Find what makes you happy and do it regularly(定期地).
【知识点】
英语书信写作,话题作文,情绪词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,结合思维导图核心要点,合理运用参考词汇,结构清晰,内容具体,符合书信格式要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.4
(G)(南通海门区期末)
为了丰富海门学子的课余生活,青少年活动中心推出“研学打卡”的活动,请完成打卡本去盖章吧!(15分)
要求:1. 写作的内容须包含图表中的所有信息,并适当增加细节;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;3. 不少于50词(不包括已给的开头)。

After-school fun
In Jianghai Museum, there are many nice things. We can learn a lot. In Rose Garden,
为了丰富海门学子的课余生活,青少年活动中心推出“研学打卡”的活动,请完成打卡本去盖章吧!(15分)
要求:1. 写作的内容须包含图表中的所有信息,并适当增加细节;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;3. 不少于50词(不包括已给的开头)。
After-school fun
In Jianghai Museum, there are many nice things. We can learn a lot. In Rose Garden,
there are many beautiful roses in different colours. The air smells sweet, and it's a great place to relax. We can also play fun games or take lovely photos with the flowers. In Dongzhou Park, there are many tall trees, green grass and a small lake. Families often go there to have picnics and fly kites. Sometimes, children ride bikes or play on the swings.
In Haimen Library, there are lots of books, from science to fairy tales. Students can do their homework and read books there. It's a quiet place to study. In Haimen Sports Centre, there is a big sports ground. People can play football, basketball or other ball games there.
This study tour activity is not only fun but also helps us learn new things and enjoy our free time in a meaningful way!
答案
there are many beautiful roses in different colours. The air smells sweet, and it's a great place to relax. We can also play fun games or take lovely photos with the flowers. In Dongzhou Park, there are many tall trees, green grass and a small lake. Families often go there to have picnics and fly kites. Sometimes, children ride bikes or play on the swings.
In Haimen Library, there are lots of books, from science to fairy tales. Students can do their homework and read books there. It's a quiet place to study. In Haimen Sports Centre, there is a big sports ground. People can play football, basketball or other ball games there.
This study tour activity is not only fun but also helps us learn new things and enjoy our free time in a meaningful way!
In Haimen Library, there are lots of books, from science to fairy tales. Students can do their homework and read books there. It's a quiet place to study. In Haimen Sports Centre, there is a big sports ground. People can play football, basketball or other ball games there.
This study tour activity is not only fun but also helps us learn new things and enjoy our free time in a meaningful way!
解析
【分析】
本题是话题写作题,要求根据给定的5个地点(江海博物馆、玫瑰园、东洲公园、海门图书馆、海门体育中心)的信息完成研学打卡写作。解题思路为:先梳理每个地点的核心信息,再围绕核心信息添加合理细节,确保包含所有图表内容,最后衔接上下文使语句通顺、逻辑连贯,满足词数要求。
【解析】
需依次续写玫瑰园、东洲公园、海门图书馆、海门体育中心的内容,补充细节丰富表达,确保涵盖所有给定信息,语句连贯。
【答案】
there are many beautiful roses in different colours. The air smells sweet, and it's a great place to relax. We can also play fun games or take lovely photos with the flowers. In Dongzhou Park, there are many tall trees, green grass and a small lake. Families often go there to have picnics and fly kites. Sometimes, children ride bikes or play on the swings.
In Haimen Library, there are lots of books, from science to fairy tales. Students can do their homework and read books there. It's a quiet place to study. In Haimen Sports Centre, there is a big sports ground. People can play football, basketball or other ball games there.
This study tour activity is not only fun but also helps us learn new things and enjoy our free time in a meaningful way!
【知识点】
英语话题写作、地点类表达、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣研学主题,完整涵盖所有地点的信息,添加了合理细节使内容更生动,语句通顺流畅,逻辑清晰,符合写作要求,是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是话题写作题,要求根据给定的5个地点(江海博物馆、玫瑰园、东洲公园、海门图书馆、海门体育中心)的信息完成研学打卡写作。解题思路为:先梳理每个地点的核心信息,再围绕核心信息添加合理细节,确保包含所有图表内容,最后衔接上下文使语句通顺、逻辑连贯,满足词数要求。
【解析】
需依次续写玫瑰园、东洲公园、海门图书馆、海门体育中心的内容,补充细节丰富表达,确保涵盖所有给定信息,语句连贯。
【答案】
there are many beautiful roses in different colours. The air smells sweet, and it's a great place to relax. We can also play fun games or take lovely photos with the flowers. In Dongzhou Park, there are many tall trees, green grass and a small lake. Families often go there to have picnics and fly kites. Sometimes, children ride bikes or play on the swings.
In Haimen Library, there are lots of books, from science to fairy tales. Students can do their homework and read books there. It's a quiet place to study. In Haimen Sports Centre, there is a big sports ground. People can play football, basketball or other ball games there.
This study tour activity is not only fun but also helps us learn new things and enjoy our free time in a meaningful way!
【知识点】
英语话题写作、地点类表达、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣研学主题,完整涵盖所有地点的信息,添加了合理细节使内容更生动,语句通顺流畅,逻辑清晰,符合写作要求,是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
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