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七、书面表达。
友谊就像花朵，在岁月里静静绽放。友谊就像风帆，在时间的长河里让我们远航。朋友是一种默契，是一种温暖，是迷茫时的明灯，是孤独时的陪伴。我们应该好好珍惜身边的朋友。假如你是李华，你们学校将举办以“珍惜友谊（Value Our Friendship）”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍谁是你最好的朋友，你们之间的相似点（similarity）和不同点，以及应该怎样珍惜朋友。
参考信息：
1. Who is your best friend?
2. What similarities or differences do you and your best friend have?
3. What should you do to value your friendship?
要求：
1. 100词左右；
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校名称。
友谊就像花朵，在岁月里静静绽放。友谊就像风帆，在时间的长河里让我们远航。朋友是一种默契，是一种温暖，是迷茫时的明灯，是孤独时的陪伴。我们应该好好珍惜身边的朋友。假如你是李华，你们学校将举办以“珍惜友谊（Value Our Friendship）”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍谁是你最好的朋友，你们之间的相似点（similarity）和不同点，以及应该怎样珍惜朋友。
参考信息：
1. Who is your best friend?
2. What similarities or differences do you and your best friend have?
3. What should you do to value your friendship?
要求：
1. 100词左右；
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校名称。
答案
One possible version:
Value Our Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in our life.
My best friend is Tom. He is tall and outgoing. He has black eyes and black hair. He is very thin. He is really more hard-working than me. I am good at English, but he does well in Maths. We like playing basketball. Both he and I like sports shows. Differences are not important in a friendship. We can respect and learn from each other.
Although we have some differences, we are good friends. When we are in trouble, we care about each other. We always encourage each other, so I cherish this friendship very much. I think he's a true friend.
Value Our Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in our life.
My best friend is Tom. He is tall and outgoing. He has black eyes and black hair. He is very thin. He is really more hard-working than me. I am good at English, but he does well in Maths. We like playing basketball. Both he and I like sports shows. Differences are not important in a friendship. We can respect and learn from each other.
Although we have some differences, we are good friends. When we are in trouble, we care about each other. We always encourage each other, so I cherish this friendship very much. I think he's a true friend.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达的演讲稿写作题，主题是“珍惜友谊”，需完成三个核心任务：介绍自己最好的朋友、说明与好友的异同点、阐述珍惜友谊的做法。解题思路为：1. 开篇点题，点明友谊的重要性；2. 介绍好友的基本情况；3. 清晰列举与好友的相似点和不同点；4. 说明珍惜友谊的具体方式，同时控制词数在100词左右，避免出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
写作时遵循演讲稿的简洁性，先以“Value Our Friendship”为标题开篇，点明友谊在生活中的重要性；接着介绍最好的朋友Tom，描述其外貌与性格；再列举异同：共同喜欢运动节目，他数学好、更勤奋，我擅长英语；最后说明珍惜友谊的做法：互相鼓励、关心，尊重差异，珍视这份友谊，确保内容紧扣要求，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Value Our Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in our life.
My best friend is Tom. He is tall and outgoing. He has black eyes and black hair. He is very thin. He is really more hard-working than me. I am good at English, but he does well in Maths. We like playing basketball. Both he and I like sports shows. Differences are not important in a friendship. We can respect and learn from each other.
Although we have some differences, we are good friends. When we are in trouble, we care about each other. We always encourage each other, so I cherish this friendship very much. I think he's a true friend.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、形容词比较级应用、话题类英语写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合100词左右的要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文，适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达的演讲稿写作题，主题是“珍惜友谊”，需完成三个核心任务：介绍自己最好的朋友、说明与好友的异同点、阐述珍惜友谊的做法。解题思路为：1. 开篇点题，点明友谊的重要性；2. 介绍好友的基本情况；3. 清晰列举与好友的相似点和不同点；4. 说明珍惜友谊的具体方式，同时控制词数在100词左右，避免出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
写作时遵循演讲稿的简洁性，先以“Value Our Friendship”为标题开篇，点明友谊在生活中的重要性；接着介绍最好的朋友Tom，描述其外貌与性格；再列举异同：共同喜欢运动节目，他数学好、更勤奋，我擅长英语；最后说明珍惜友谊的做法：互相鼓励、关心，尊重差异，珍视这份友谊，确保内容紧扣要求，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Value Our Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in our life.
My best friend is Tom. He is tall and outgoing. He has black eyes and black hair. He is very thin. He is really more hard-working than me. I am good at English, but he does well in Maths. We like playing basketball. Both he and I like sports shows. Differences are not important in a friendship. We can respect and learn from each other.
Although we have some differences, we are good friends. When we are in trouble, we care about each other. We always encourage each other, so I cherish this friendship very much. I think he's a true friend.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、形容词比较级应用、话题类英语写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合100词左右的要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文，适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】
0.5
