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情境5 最后一天，老师要求我们每个人分享自己最钦佩的人。
任务五 [2026 江苏常州模拟] 书面表达（15分）
假如你校英语报“The Person You Admire Most”栏目中有如下征稿通知，请你写一篇英语文章投稿。
Many great people have devoted themselves to the whole world in many different ways. We are touched by their spirits and contributions. At the same time, their deeds(事迹) encourage us to study hard. Share your ideas about the following topics.
1. Who is the person you admire most?
2. Why do you admire her/him so much?
3. How do her/his deeds encourage you to study hard?
要求：词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Person I Admire Most
There are many people in our life who have an influence on us, such as doctors, nurses, teachers and firemen. Among them, I admire
任务五 [2026 江苏常州模拟] 书面表达（15分）
假如你校英语报“The Person You Admire Most”栏目中有如下征稿通知，请你写一篇英语文章投稿。
Many great people have devoted themselves to the whole world in many different ways. We are touched by their spirits and contributions. At the same time, their deeds(事迹) encourage us to study hard. Share your ideas about the following topics.
1. Who is the person you admire most?
2. Why do you admire her/him so much?
3. How do her/his deeds encourage you to study hard?
要求：词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Person I Admire Most
There are many people in our life who have an influence on us, such as doctors, nurses, teachers and firemen. Among them, I admire
Albert Einstein most.
答案
任务五 范文：
The Person I Admire Most
There are many people in our life who have an influence on us, such as doctors, nurses, teachers and firemen. Among them, I admire Albert Einstein most.
Albert Einstein was a famous scientist from Germany. I admire him because he made many important discoveries, like how light and energy work. He won the Nobel Prize in Physics. Einstein was not only smart but also kind. He always asked questions and loved learning.
His deeds encourage me to study hard. I want to learn knowledge like him, use what I’ve learned to make contributions to society, and bravely face difficulties in the process of pursuing dreams, just as he overcame various challenges in scientific research.
The Person I Admire Most
There are many people in our life who have an influence on us, such as doctors, nurses, teachers and firemen. Among them, I admire Albert Einstein most.
Albert Einstein was a famous scientist from Germany. I admire him because he made many important discoveries, like how light and energy work. He won the Nobel Prize in Physics. Einstein was not only smart but also kind. He always asked questions and loved learning.
His deeds encourage me to study hard. I want to learn knowledge like him, use what I’ve learned to make contributions to society, and bravely face difficulties in the process of pursuing dreams, just as he overcame various challenges in scientific research.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达征稿题，需围绕三个核心要点写作：①明确最钦佩的人物；②说明钦佩的原因（可从成就、品质等角度）；③阐述人物事迹对自身学习的激励作用。需注意词数要求，开头已给出，写作时要衔接自然，语言准确流畅，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
首先确定写作对象，选择大众熟知且事迹丰富的人物（如范文中的爱因斯坦）；接着围绕钦佩原因展开：介绍人物身份、主要科学成就（如重要发现、获诺贝尔奖）及优秀品质（爱提问、好学等）；最后结合自身，说明人物事迹如何激励自己努力学习，树立贡献社会、克服困难的目标，确保涵盖所有要求要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】
The Person I Admire Most
There are many people in our life who have an influence on us, such as doctors, nurses, teachers and firemen. Among them, I admire Albert Einstein most.
Albert Einstein was a famous scientist from Germany. I admire him because he made many important discoveries, like how light and energy work. He won the Nobel Prize in Physics. Einstein was not only smart but also kind. He always asked questions and loved learning.
His deeds encourage me to study hard. I want to learn knowledge like him, use what I’ve learned to make contributions to society, and bravely face difficulties in the process of pursuing dreams, just as he overcame various challenges in scientific research.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣征稿要求，完整覆盖三个指定要点，人物选择典型，原因阐述清晰，激励内容结合自身实际，语言规范，词数达标，结构完整，符合英语写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达征稿题，需围绕三个核心要点写作：①明确最钦佩的人物；②说明钦佩的原因（可从成就、品质等角度）；③阐述人物事迹对自身学习的激励作用。需注意词数要求，开头已给出，写作时要衔接自然，语言准确流畅，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
首先确定写作对象，选择大众熟知且事迹丰富的人物（如范文中的爱因斯坦）；接着围绕钦佩原因展开：介绍人物身份、主要科学成就（如重要发现、获诺贝尔奖）及优秀品质（爱提问、好学等）；最后结合自身，说明人物事迹如何激励自己努力学习，树立贡献社会、克服困难的目标，确保涵盖所有要求要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】
The Person I Admire Most
There are many people in our life who have an influence on us, such as doctors, nurses, teachers and firemen. Among them, I admire Albert Einstein most.
Albert Einstein was a famous scientist from Germany. I admire him because he made many important discoveries, like how light and energy work. He won the Nobel Prize in Physics. Einstein was not only smart but also kind. He always asked questions and loved learning.
His deeds encourage me to study hard. I want to learn knowledge like him, use what I’ve learned to make contributions to society, and bravely face difficulties in the process of pursuing dreams, just as he overcame various challenges in scientific research.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣征稿要求，完整覆盖三个指定要点，人物选择典型，原因阐述清晰，激励内容结合自身实际，语言规范，词数达标，结构完整，符合英语写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
