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五、书面表达
亲爱的同学，你想成为一个快乐的人吗？如何才能快乐呢？请你根据图中的提示，以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，写一篇英语作文。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80—100词。
How to Be a Happy Student
亲爱的同学，你想成为一个快乐的人吗？如何才能快乐呢？请你根据图中的提示，以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，写一篇英语作文。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80—100词。
How to Be a Happy Student
答案
One possible version:
How to Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to be happy. As students, what can we do to be happy? Here is my advice.
It's necessary for us to have learning goals. The goals can make us be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life. So first of all, we should have good schoolwork. Study is the most important thing. We are supposed to study happily every day and try to help each other. To be healthy is to be happy. So remember to have good life habits and do more exercise. We can do some sports, such as running or playing basketball.
Also, we should have plenty of good hobbies. In our spare time, we can do some reading to calm down. We can also do some housework to help our parents. And we can play our favourite instruments to relax.
Besides, the most important thing is to stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. We should have a positive attitude and be ready to help others.
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
How to Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to be happy. As students, what can we do to be happy? Here is my advice.
It's necessary for us to have learning goals. The goals can make us be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life. So first of all, we should have good schoolwork. Study is the most important thing. We are supposed to study happily every day and try to help each other. To be healthy is to be happy. So remember to have good life habits and do more exercise. We can do some sports, such as running or playing basketball.
Also, we should have plenty of good hobbies. In our spare time, we can do some reading to calm down. We can also do some housework to help our parents. And we can play our favourite instruments to relax.
Besides, the most important thing is to stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. We should have a positive attitude and be ready to help others.
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为“How to Be a Happy Student”，需结合图片中的提示要点：良好的学业（对应快乐学习、同学互助）、健康的身体（对应运动锻炼）、有益的爱好（对应阅读、做家务、演奏乐器）。解题思路为：开头引出“如何成为快乐学生”的话题；中间分点阐述具体做法，紧扣图片提示的各要点，确保语言连贯；结尾总结，表达积极观点，同时控制字数在80-100词，避免出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点明学生想要快乐，引出“如何成为快乐学生”的核心问题；
2. 主体部分：
围绕good schoolwork：说明要设定学习目标，快乐学习，同学间互相帮助，强调学业的重要性；
围绕good health：指出健康是快乐的基础，可通过跑步、做运动等方式保持健康；
围绕good hobbies：列举阅读、做家务、演奏乐器等爱好，丰富课余生活；
围绕心态：保持好心情，积极向上；
3. 结尾：总结全文，表达做到这些就能拥有快乐生活的观点，符合字数要求，语言通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to be happy. As students, what can we do to be happy? Here is my advice.
It's necessary for us to have learning goals. The goals can make us be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life. So first of all, we should have good schoolwork. Study is the most important thing. We are supposed to study happily every day and try to help each other. To be healthy is to be happy. So remember to have good life habits and do more exercise. We can do some sports, such as running or playing basketball.
Also, we should have plenty of good hobbies. In our spare time, we can do some reading to calm down. We can also do some housework to help our parents. And we can play our favourite instruments to relax.
Besides, the most important thing is to stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. We should have a positive attitude and be ready to help others.
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、要点写作
【点评】
这篇作文紧扣图片提示的核心要点，结构清晰，从学业、健康、爱好、心态四个维度展开，语言通顺，逻辑连贯，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，要点齐全，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作主题为“How to Be a Happy Student”，需结合图片中的提示要点：良好的学业（对应快乐学习、同学互助）、健康的身体（对应运动锻炼）、有益的爱好（对应阅读、做家务、演奏乐器）。解题思路为：开头引出“如何成为快乐学生”的话题；中间分点阐述具体做法，紧扣图片提示的各要点，确保语言连贯；结尾总结，表达积极观点，同时控制字数在80-100词，避免出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点明学生想要快乐，引出“如何成为快乐学生”的核心问题；
2. 主体部分：
围绕good schoolwork：说明要设定学习目标，快乐学习，同学间互相帮助，强调学业的重要性；
围绕good health：指出健康是快乐的基础，可通过跑步、做运动等方式保持健康；
围绕good hobbies：列举阅读、做家务、演奏乐器等爱好，丰富课余生活；
围绕心态：保持好心情，积极向上；
3. 结尾：总结全文，表达做到这些就能拥有快乐生活的观点，符合字数要求，语言通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to be happy. As students, what can we do to be happy? Here is my advice.
It's necessary for us to have learning goals. The goals can make us be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life. So first of all, we should have good schoolwork. Study is the most important thing. We are supposed to study happily every day and try to help each other. To be healthy is to be happy. So remember to have good life habits and do more exercise. We can do some sports, such as running or playing basketball.
Also, we should have plenty of good hobbies. In our spare time, we can do some reading to calm down. We can also do some housework to help our parents. And we can play our favourite instruments to relax.
Besides, the most important thing is to stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. We should have a positive attitude and be ready to help others.
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、要点写作
【点评】
这篇作文紧扣图片提示的核心要点，结构清晰，从学业、健康、爱好、心态四个维度展开，语言通顺，逻辑连贯，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，要点齐全，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
