七、书面表达。
英语课上,同学们正在讨论自己最喜欢的电影。假如你是李华,请你根据所给提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你最喜欢的电影。
提示:1. What is your favourite movie?
2. Why do you like it?
3. What can you learn from it?
要求:1. 短文必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名)。若文中出现人名,请选择使用 Mr Liu、Ms Wang、Ma Li 或 Wang Gang;
4. 词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I have seen many famous movies. Among them,
英语课上,同学们正在讨论自己最喜欢的电影。假如你是李华,请你根据所给提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你最喜欢的电影。
提示:1. What is your favourite movie?
2. Why do you like it?
3. What can you learn from it?
要求:1. 短文必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名)。若文中出现人名,请选择使用 Mr Liu、Ms Wang、Ma Li 或 Wang Gang;
4. 词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I have seen many famous movies. Among them,
答案
One possible version:
I have seen many famous movies. Among them, my favourite is The Lion King. It tells the story of Simba, a brave lion cub. I like it because the music is wonderful and the characters are lovely. Also, the movie teaches me an important lesson: we should face difficulties bravely. From Simba, I learn that true courage means never giving up.
This movie not only brings me joy but also gives me strength. I will always remember its meaningful story.
I have seen many famous movies. Among them, my favourite is The Lion King. It tells the story of Simba, a brave lion cub. I like it because the music is wonderful and the characters are lovely. Also, the movie teaches me an important lesson: we should face difficulties bravely. From Simba, I learn that true courage means never giving up.
This movie not only brings me joy but also gives me strength. I will always remember its meaningful story.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语话题书面表达题,要求以李华的身份介绍自己最喜欢的电影,需覆盖三个提示要点(电影名称、喜欢的原因、学到的内容),同时满足词数、无真实信息等要求。解题思路为:先确定具体电影名称,接着简要介绍电影核心内容,再从音乐、角色等角度说明喜欢的原因,最后阐述从电影中获得的感悟,确保语句通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 承接已给开头,明确最喜欢的电影(如《狮子王》);2. 简要介绍电影核心剧情(辛巴的故事);3. 说明喜欢的原因(音乐美妙、角色可爱);4. 阐述从电影中学习到的道理(勇敢面对困难、永不放弃);5. 收尾升华,表达电影带来的积极影响,确保词数达标、无真实个人信息、语句连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
I have seen many famous movies. Among them, my favourite is The Lion King. It tells the story of Simba, a brave lion cub. I like it because the music is wonderful and the characters are lovely. Also, the movie teaches me an important lesson: we should face difficulties bravely. From Simba, I learn that true courage means never giving up.
This movie not only brings me joy but also gives me strength. I will always remember its meaningful story.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、英语应用文表达、电影主题英语写作
【点评】
本题是初中英语常见的话题写作题,贴近学生日常学习生活,要求明确,要点清晰,能有效考察学生的英语语言组织和综合运用能力,只要紧扣提示、语句通顺即可完成,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语话题书面表达题,要求以李华的身份介绍自己最喜欢的电影,需覆盖三个提示要点(电影名称、喜欢的原因、学到的内容),同时满足词数、无真实信息等要求。解题思路为:先确定具体电影名称,接着简要介绍电影核心内容,再从音乐、角色等角度说明喜欢的原因,最后阐述从电影中获得的感悟,确保语句通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 承接已给开头,明确最喜欢的电影(如《狮子王》);2. 简要介绍电影核心剧情(辛巴的故事);3. 说明喜欢的原因(音乐美妙、角色可爱);4. 阐述从电影中学习到的道理(勇敢面对困难、永不放弃);5. 收尾升华,表达电影带来的积极影响,确保词数达标、无真实个人信息、语句连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
I have seen many famous movies. Among them, my favourite is The Lion King. It tells the story of Simba, a brave lion cub. I like it because the music is wonderful and the characters are lovely. Also, the movie teaches me an important lesson: we should face difficulties bravely. From Simba, I learn that true courage means never giving up.
This movie not only brings me joy but also gives me strength. I will always remember its meaningful story.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、英语应用文表达、电影主题英语写作
【点评】
本题是初中英语常见的话题写作题,贴近学生日常学习生活,要求明确,要点清晰,能有效考察学生的英语语言组织和综合运用能力,只要紧扣提示、语句通顺即可完成,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
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