五、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
[2025 大庆中考改编]假定你是红星中学的学生小娜,毕业在即,学校摄影社团和英语社团拟合作制作“成长印记·青春映像”毕业纪念视频,现面向全体同学征集拍摄建议。请你用英语写一封邮件,对视频录制内容提出建议。
写作提示:
1. 校园之美:校园风景、建筑等;
2. 温暖瞬间:老师耐心答疑、真诚帮助等;同学间讨论问题、互帮互助等;
3. 成长祝福:……
参考词汇:shoot a video campus scenery explain questions patiently express sincere wishes
写作要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Dear Photography Club and English Club,
I am Xiaona. Knowing that the clubs are collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions.
Yours,
Xiaona
[2025 大庆中考改编]假定你是红星中学的学生小娜,毕业在即,学校摄影社团和英语社团拟合作制作“成长印记·青春映像”毕业纪念视频,现面向全体同学征集拍摄建议。请你用英语写一封邮件,对视频录制内容提出建议。
写作提示:
1. 校园之美:校园风景、建筑等;
2. 温暖瞬间:老师耐心答疑、真诚帮助等;同学间讨论问题、互帮互助等;
3. 成长祝福:……
参考词汇:shoot a video campus scenery explain questions patiently express sincere wishes
写作要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Dear Photography Club and English Club,
I am Xiaona. Knowing that the clubs are collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions.
First, I suggest including beautiful campus scenery, such as the playground, the library and the classroom buildings. These places hold many memories for us. Second, it would be great to shoot some warm moments. We can show teachers explaining questions to us patiently and helping us sincerely. Also, we shouldn't forget classmates discussing problems and helping each other. Finally, for the wishes part, teachers and students could express sincere wishes for everyone's bright future. This will be very meaningful.
I hope my ideas are helpful. I'm looking forward to seeing the wonderful video!
Yours,
Xiaona
答案
Dear Photography Club and English Club,
I am Xiaona. Knowing that the clubs are collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions.
First, I suggest including beautiful campus scenery, such as the playground, the library and the classroom buildings. These places hold many memories for us. Second, it would be great to shoot some warm moments. We can show teachers explaining questions to us patiently and helping us sincerely. Also, we shouldn't forget classmates discussing problems and helping each other. Finally, for the wishes part, teachers and students could express sincere wishes for everyone's bright future. This will be very meaningful.
I hope my ideas are helpful. I'm looking forward to seeing the wonderful video!
Yours,
Xiaona
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