五、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
[2025 大庆中考改编]假定你是红星中学的学生小娜,毕业在即,学校摄影社团和英语社团拟合作制作“成长印记·青春映像”毕业纪念视频,现面向全体同学征集拍摄建议。请你用英语写一封邮件,对视频录制内容提出建议。
写作提示:
1. 校园之美:校园风景、建筑等;
2. 温暖瞬间:老师耐心答疑、真诚帮助等;同学间讨论问题、互帮互助等;
3. 成长祝福:……
参考词汇:shoot a video campus scenery explain questions patiently express sincere wishes
写作要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
2. 词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Dear Photography Club and English Club,
I am Xiaona. Knowing that the clubs are collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions.




Yours,
Xiaona

Dear Photography Club and English Club,
I am Xiaona. Knowing that the clubs are collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions.
First, I suggest including beautiful campus scenery, such as the playground, the library and the classroom buildings. These places hold many memories for us. Second, it would be great to shoot some warm moments. We can show teachers explaining questions to us patiently and helping us sincerely. Also, we shouldn't forget classmates discussing problems and helping each other. Finally, for the wishes part, teachers and students could express sincere wishes for everyone's bright future. This will be very meaningful.
I hope my ideas are helpful. I'm looking forward to seeing the wonderful video!
Yours,
Xiaona

【分析】本题要求以红星中学学生小娜的身份，给摄影社团和英语社团写一封关于毕业纪念视频拍摄建议的英语应用文邮件。需以第一人称、一般现在时为主，写作时要紧扣三个要点：一是承接开头明确提建议的意图；二是针对视频内容分点提出具体建议，涵盖校园之美、温暖瞬间、成长祝福三个提示方向；三是最后书写结语并表达期待。需确保覆盖所有提示信息，行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】写作时，先承接开头，分层次提出建议：① 建议加入校园风景，如操场、图书馆、教学楼，这些地方承载着学生的校园回忆；② 建议拍摄温暖瞬间，包括老师耐心答疑、真诚帮助，同学间讨论问题、互帮互助的场景；③ 建议加入成长祝福环节，让师生表达对大家美好未来的祝愿。最后补充结语，说明希望建议有用，并表达对视频的期待，确保行文连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Photography Club and English Club,
I am Xiaona. Knowing that the clubs are collecting advice about our graduation video, I am writing to offer my suggestions.
First, I suggest including beautiful campus scenery, such as the playground, the library and the classroom buildings. These places hold many memories for us. Second, it would be great to shoot some warm moments. We can show teachers explaining questions to us patiently and helping us sincerely. Also, we shouldn't forget classmates discussing problems and helping each other. Finally, for the wishes part, teachers and students could express sincere wishes for everyone's bright future. This will be very meaningful.
I hope my ideas are helpful. I'm looking forward to seeing the wonderful video!
Yours,
Xiaona
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时、要点式写作
【点评】本题为中考英语应用文写作题，围绕“多彩的学校生活”主题，要求学生根据给定的写作思路和提示完成邮件，贴近学生校园生活，考查学生的语言组织、要点覆盖和连贯表达能力，符合中考写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】0.5