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四、书面表达
尼克(Nick)的朋友斯通(Stone)下周将来南京游玩。请根据下表提示帮尼克给斯通写一封信,邀请他来南京时住在自己的家里。
注意：
1. 文中须包括表格中的要点,并作适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺,书写工整；
3. 词数70左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Stone,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Nanjing next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
尼克(Nick)的朋友斯通(Stone)下周将来南京游玩。请根据下表提示帮尼克给斯通写一封信,邀请他来南京时住在自己的家里。
注意：
1. 文中须包括表格中的要点,并作适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺,书写工整；
3. 词数70左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Stone,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Nanjing next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
My home is in the centre of Nanjing. It's near my school and there are some shopping malls around here. I live with my parents in a large flat on the ground floor.
We have a small beautiful garden in front of the flat. We have four bedrooms. Each bedroom has a balcony. You can have your own bedroom. There are two bathrooms and each of them has a shower and a toilet.
Our living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. We can share a study and read books together.
I hope I can see you soon. All the best.
Yours,
Nick
答案
四、One possible version:
Dear Stone,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Nanjing next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
My home is in the centre of Nanjing. It's near my school and there are some shopping malls around
here. I live with my parents in a large flat on the ground floor.
We have a small beautiful garden in front of the flat. We have four bedrooms. Each bedroom has a
balcony. You can have your own bedroom. There are two bathrooms and each of them has a shower and
a toilet. Our living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. We can share a study
and read books together.
I hope I can see you soon. All the best.
Yours,
Nick
Dear Stone,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Nanjing next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
My home is in the centre of Nanjing. It's near my school and there are some shopping malls around
here. I live with my parents in a large flat on the ground floor.
We have a small beautiful garden in front of the flat. We have four bedrooms. Each bedroom has a
balcony. You can have your own bedroom. There are two bathrooms and each of them has a shower and
a toilet. Our living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. We can share a study
and read books together.
I hope I can see you soon. All the best.
Yours,
Nick
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：这是一封朋友间的邀请信，核心目的是邀请来南京游玩的Stone住在自己家，需要完整覆盖表格给出的所有信息点，同时语气亲切自然，符合书信语境。解题时第一步先梳理所有必须包含的内容：先交代自己的家庭组成，再介绍家的地理位置优势，接着说明公寓的楼层和配套花园，最后逐一介绍屋内各个房间的配置，让朋友清楚居住的便利性，最后收尾表达期待见面的心意即可，串联内容时适当加少量衔接语句，避免生硬翻译表格内容，控制总词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接已给出的开头，首先介绍家庭住址：说明家在南京市中心，临近学校和购物中心，出行购物都很便利。
2. 接下来介绍居住的公寓：说明自己和父母同住，公寓位于一楼，还附带花园，居住环境舒适。
3. 随后逐一介绍屋内房间配置：共有四间带阳台的卧室，可以给你安排独立的卧室；两个卫生间都配有淋浴和马桶，使用很方便；客厅面积很大，可以一起坐在沙发上看电视；还有一间书房，我们可以一起在里面看书。
4. 最后补充书信常规的收尾问候，表达期待和朋友见面的心情，完成信件，确保所有表格要点全部覆盖，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
Dear Stone,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Nanjing next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
My home is in the centre of Nanjing. It's near my school and there are some shopping malls around here. I live with my parents in a large flat on the ground floor.
We have a small beautiful garden in front of the flat. We have four bedrooms. Each bedroom has a balcony. You can have your own bedroom. There are two bathrooms and each of them has a shower and a toilet. Our living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. We can share a study and read books together.
I hope I can see you soon. All the best.
Yours,
Nick
【知识点】
英语书信写作，家居场景表达，地点描述
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文写作，所有核心要点都通过表格明确给出，难度较低，主要考察学生对基础家居、地点相关词汇的掌握能力，以及信息整合、用通顺的英语语句串联要点的能力，写作时注意使用朋友间亲切的语气，不要生硬直译中文提示，适当补充少量衔接内容就能得到不错的效果。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确写作任务：这是一封朋友间的邀请信，核心目的是邀请来南京游玩的Stone住在自己家，需要完整覆盖表格给出的所有信息点，同时语气亲切自然，符合书信语境。解题时第一步先梳理所有必须包含的内容：先交代自己的家庭组成，再介绍家的地理位置优势，接着说明公寓的楼层和配套花园，最后逐一介绍屋内各个房间的配置，让朋友清楚居住的便利性，最后收尾表达期待见面的心意即可，串联内容时适当加少量衔接语句，避免生硬翻译表格内容，控制总词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接已给出的开头，首先介绍家庭住址：说明家在南京市中心，临近学校和购物中心，出行购物都很便利。
2. 接下来介绍居住的公寓：说明自己和父母同住，公寓位于一楼，还附带花园，居住环境舒适。
3. 随后逐一介绍屋内房间配置：共有四间带阳台的卧室，可以给你安排独立的卧室；两个卫生间都配有淋浴和马桶，使用很方便；客厅面积很大，可以一起坐在沙发上看电视；还有一间书房，我们可以一起在里面看书。
4. 最后补充书信常规的收尾问候，表达期待和朋友见面的心情，完成信件，确保所有表格要点全部覆盖，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
Dear Stone,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Nanjing next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
My home is in the centre of Nanjing. It's near my school and there are some shopping malls around here. I live with my parents in a large flat on the ground floor.
We have a small beautiful garden in front of the flat. We have four bedrooms. Each bedroom has a balcony. You can have your own bedroom. There are two bathrooms and each of them has a shower and a toilet. Our living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. We can share a study and read books together.
I hope I can see you soon. All the best.
Yours,
Nick
【知识点】
英语书信写作，家居场景表达，地点描述
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文写作，所有核心要点都通过表格明确给出，难度较低，主要考察学生对基础家居、地点相关词汇的掌握能力，以及信息整合、用通顺的英语语句串联要点的能力，写作时注意使用朋友间亲切的语气，不要生硬直译中文提示，适当补充少量衔接内容就能得到不错的效果。
【难度系数】
0.7
