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七、书面表达20分
假设你是韩梅,刚搬进新家,请你向同学们介绍你的新家并邀请他们来你家玩。根据下面提示内容,以"Welcome to My New Flat"为题,用英语写一篇短文,词数100左右。
Welcome to My New Flat
Hello! I am Han Mei.
假设你是韩梅,刚搬进新家,请你向同学们介绍你的新家并邀请他们来你家玩。根据下面提示内容,以"Welcome to My New Flat"为题,用英语写一篇短文,词数100左右。
Welcome to My New Flat
Hello! I am Han Mei.
My new home is not far away from the centre of the city. It takes about 20 minutes to get there by bus. There is a park near my home. There are many trees, lakes and green hills there.
My new flat has five floors. My house is on the third floor. I have my own bedroom. I like playing computer games or listening to music best, because it can make me relax.
The neighbours are kind and helpful. They always help people with all kinds of problems. After school, I often go to the community centre with my friends to help others with their homework.
Welcome to my new flat. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
答案
七、One possible version:
Welcome to My New Flat
Hello! I am Han Mei. My new home is not far away from the centre of the city. It takes about 20 minutes to get there by bus. There is a park near my home. There are many trees, lakes and green hills there.
My new flat has five floors. My house is on the third floor. I have my own bedroom. I like playing computer games or listening to music best, because it can make me relax. The neighbours are kind and helpful. They always help people with all kinds of problems. After school, I often go to the community centre with my friends to help others with their homework.
Welcome to my new flat. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Welcome to My New Flat
Hello! I am Han Mei. My new home is not far away from the centre of the city. It takes about 20 minutes to get there by bus. There is a park near my home. There are many trees, lakes and green hills there.
My new flat has five floors. My house is on the third floor. I have my own bedroom. I like playing computer games or listening to music best, because it can make me relax. The neighbours are kind and helpful. They always help people with all kinds of problems. After school, I often go to the community centre with my friends to help others with their homework.
Welcome to my new flat. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以韩梅的身份向同学介绍新家并发出邀请，解题思路：1. 明确需涵盖的要点：新家位置、周围环境、新家情况、邻居特点、个人感受及邀请内容；2. 结合表格提示补充合理细节，让内容更充实；3. 用连贯的英语表达，控制词数在100左右，结尾自然发出邀请。
【解析】
1. 开头介绍身份与新家位置：说明新家离市中心不远，乘公交约20分钟，对应表格“位置”；
2. 描述周围环境：补充附近公园的细节（有树、湖、青山），对应“周围环境”；
3. 介绍新家：说明公寓共五层，自己在三层，有卧室，说明喜欢的活动及原因，对应“新家”；
4. 介绍邻居：说明邻居善良乐于助人，举例子（去社区中心帮同学做作业），对应“邻居”；
5. 结尾发出邀请，表达期待，完成写作要求。
【答案】
Welcome to My New Flat
Hello! I am Han Mei. My new home is not far away from the centre of the city. It takes about 20 minutes to get there by bus. There is a park near my home. There are many trees, lakes and green hills there.
My new flat has five floors. My house is on the third floor. I have my own bedroom. I like playing computer games or listening to music best, because it can make me relax. The neighbours are kind and helpful. They always help people with all kinds of problems. After school, I often go to the community centre with my friends to help others with their homework.
Welcome to my new flat. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；介绍类话题；邀请类表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容连贯自然，语言流畅准确，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，结尾邀请表达得体，很好完成了介绍新家并邀请同学的任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以韩梅的身份向同学介绍新家并发出邀请，解题思路：1. 明确需涵盖的要点：新家位置、周围环境、新家情况、邻居特点、个人感受及邀请内容；2. 结合表格提示补充合理细节，让内容更充实；3. 用连贯的英语表达，控制词数在100左右，结尾自然发出邀请。
【解析】
1. 开头介绍身份与新家位置：说明新家离市中心不远，乘公交约20分钟，对应表格“位置”；
2. 描述周围环境：补充附近公园的细节（有树、湖、青山），对应“周围环境”；
3. 介绍新家：说明公寓共五层，自己在三层，有卧室，说明喜欢的活动及原因，对应“新家”；
4. 介绍邻居：说明邻居善良乐于助人，举例子（去社区中心帮同学做作业），对应“邻居”；
5. 结尾发出邀请，表达期待，完成写作要求。
【答案】
Welcome to My New Flat
Hello! I am Han Mei. My new home is not far away from the centre of the city. It takes about 20 minutes to get there by bus. There is a park near my home. There are many trees, lakes and green hills there.
My new flat has five floors. My house is on the third floor. I have my own bedroom. I like playing computer games or listening to music best, because it can make me relax. The neighbours are kind and helpful. They always help people with all kinds of problems. After school, I often go to the community centre with my friends to help others with their homework.
Welcome to my new flat. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；介绍类话题；邀请类表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容连贯自然，语言流畅准确，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，结尾邀请表达得体，很好完成了介绍新家并邀请同学的任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
