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十、书面表达(共1小题,满分10分)
人无礼则不立,请以"How to be a person with good manners"为题,根据以下要点为学校的英语演讲比赛写一篇演讲稿。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,条理清楚,表达准确,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 适当发挥,80词左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
How to be a person with good manners
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." A person with good manners behaves politely. As teenagers, what should we do to show good manners?
Let's practise good manners to make ourselves better people!
人无礼则不立,请以"How to be a person with good manners"为题,根据以下要点为学校的英语演讲比赛写一篇演讲稿。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,条理清楚,表达准确,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 适当发挥,80词左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
How to be a person with good manners
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." A person with good manners behaves politely. As teenagers, what should we do to show good manners?
Let's practise good manners to make ourselves better people!
答案
十、One possible version:
How to be a person with good manners
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." A person
with good manners behaves politely. As teenagers, what
should we do to show good manners?
Above all, when in public places, it's polite of us to keep
our voices down. We should be patient enough to queue for
our turns.
What's more, it's important for us to have good table
manners. When we are sitting at the table, we shouldn't start
eating until everyone is ready. It's polite to wait for everyone
to finish before we leave the table.
At school, we must follow all the school rules. It's a
good habit to greet teachers with a warm smile. We should
respect our classmates.
Let's practise good manners to make ourselves better
people!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿。②时态:一般现在
时。③提示:写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏信息提示，
可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出好的礼仪习惯的话题；第二步，介绍具体的公
共场合、餐桌和学校礼仪；第三步，呼吁人们行动起来，让自
己成为更好的人。
[亮点词汇]
①above all最重要的是 ②queue for our turns排队等候轮
到我们 ③ respect our classmates尊重我们的同学们
[高分句型]
It's polite to wait for everyone to finish before we leave the
table. (before引导时间状语从句)
How to be a person with good manners
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." A person
with good manners behaves politely. As teenagers, what
should we do to show good manners?
Above all, when in public places, it's polite of us to keep
our voices down. We should be patient enough to queue for
our turns.
What's more, it's important for us to have good table
manners. When we are sitting at the table, we shouldn't start
eating until everyone is ready. It's polite to wait for everyone
to finish before we leave the table.
At school, we must follow all the school rules. It's a
good habit to greet teachers with a warm smile. We should
respect our classmates.
Let's practise good manners to make ourselves better
people!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿。②时态:一般现在
时。③提示:写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏信息提示，
可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出好的礼仪习惯的话题；第二步，介绍具体的公
共场合、餐桌和学校礼仪；第三步，呼吁人们行动起来，让自
己成为更好的人。
[亮点词汇]
①above all最重要的是 ②queue for our turns排队等候轮
到我们 ③ respect our classmates尊重我们的同学们
[高分句型]
It's polite to wait for everyone to finish before we leave the
table. (before引导时间状语从句)
解析
【分析】本题要求写一篇以“How to be a person with good manners”为题的英语演讲稿，需结合给定的公共场合、餐桌、校园礼仪要点完成写作。首先明确体裁为应用文（演讲稿），时态用一般现在时；接着梳理写作结构：开头引出话题，中间分三部分阐述具体礼仪要求，结尾发出呼吁；写作时要确保要点齐全，语句通顺，符合字数要求，适当运用连接词使条理清晰。
【解析】首先承接已给开头，用“Above all”引出公共场合礼仪：“when in public places, it's polite of us to keep our voices down. We should be patient enough to queue for our turns.”；再用“What's more”过渡到餐桌礼仪：“it's important for us to have good table manners. When we are sitting at the table, we shouldn't start eating until everyone is ready. It's polite to wait for everyone to finish before we leave the table.”；最后用“At school”说明校园礼仪：“we must follow all the school rules. It's a good habit to greet teachers with a warm smile. We should respect our classmates.”；最后接已给结尾，确保要点完整，语句连贯，符合要求。
【答案】How to be a person with good manners
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." A person with good manners behaves politely. As teenagers, what should we do to show good manners?
Above all, when in public places, it's polite of us to keep our voices down. We should be patient enough to queue for our turns.
What's more, it's important for us to have good table manners. When we are sitting at the table, we shouldn't start eating until everyone is ready. It's polite to wait for everyone to finish before we leave the table.
At school, we must follow all the school rules. It's a good habit to greet teachers with a warm smile. We should respect our classmates.
Let's practise good manners to make ourselves better people!
【知识点】英语书面表达；应用文写作；礼仪主题表达
【点评】本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，条理清晰，运用了合适的连接词使文章结构分明，句型准确规范，符合演讲稿的写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】首先承接已给开头，用“Above all”引出公共场合礼仪：“when in public places, it's polite of us to keep our voices down. We should be patient enough to queue for our turns.”；再用“What's more”过渡到餐桌礼仪：“it's important for us to have good table manners. When we are sitting at the table, we shouldn't start eating until everyone is ready. It's polite to wait for everyone to finish before we leave the table.”；最后用“At school”说明校园礼仪：“we must follow all the school rules. It's a good habit to greet teachers with a warm smile. We should respect our classmates.”；最后接已给结尾，确保要点完整，语句连贯，符合要求。
【答案】How to be a person with good manners
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." A person with good manners behaves politely. As teenagers, what should we do to show good manners?
Above all, when in public places, it's polite of us to keep our voices down. We should be patient enough to queue for our turns.
What's more, it's important for us to have good table manners. When we are sitting at the table, we shouldn't start eating until everyone is ready. It's polite to wait for everyone to finish before we leave the table.
At school, we must follow all the school rules. It's a good habit to greet teachers with a warm smile. We should respect our classmates.
Let's practise good manners to make ourselves better people!
【知识点】英语书面表达；应用文写作；礼仪主题表达
【点评】本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，条理清晰，运用了合适的连接词使文章结构分明，句型准确规范，符合演讲稿的写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.3
