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六、书面表达
49.某英文杂志想了解中学生的运动喜好情况,通过征文的方式向大家做调查。假如你是李华,请你根据下面的思维导图提示,以“I Love Sports”为题,写一篇英语短文。
注意:(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现任何真实信息；
(3)不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I Love Sports
I think it’s very important for everyone to do sports.
49.某英文杂志想了解中学生的运动喜好情况,通过征文的方式向大家做调查。假如你是李华,请你根据下面的思维导图提示,以“I Love Sports”为题,写一篇英语短文。
注意:(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现任何真实信息；
(3)不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I Love Sports
I think it’s very important for everyone to do sports.
Doing sports has many benefits. It can not only help us to keep fit but also help us relax. What's more, it can also help us be full of energy and improve our studying efficiency. My favourite sport is swimming because swimming is very beneficial to our body. It can help us keep slim and reduce the pain of the knees at the same time. I usually swim twice a week and every time I swim for at least fifty minutes. Swimming is interesting and I love keeping this habit. I hope all of us can keep doing sports and have a healthy body.
答案
49. One possible version:
I Love Sports
I think it's very important for everyone to do sports. Doing sports has many benefits. It can not only help us to keep fit but also help us relax. What's more, it can also help us be full of energy and improve our studying efficiency. My favourite sport is swimming because swimming is very beneficial to our body. It can help us keep slim and reduce the pain of the knees at the same time.
I usually swim twice a week and every time I swim for at least fifty minutes. Swimming is interesting and I love keeping this habit.
I hope all of us can keep doing sports and have a healthy body.
I Love Sports
I think it's very important for everyone to do sports. Doing sports has many benefits. It can not only help us to keep fit but also help us relax. What's more, it can also help us be full of energy and improve our studying efficiency. My favourite sport is swimming because swimming is very beneficial to our body. It can help us keep slim and reduce the pain of the knees at the same time.
I usually swim twice a week and every time I swim for at least fifty minutes. Swimming is interesting and I love keeping this habit.
I hope all of us can keep doing sports and have a healthy body.
解析
【分析】
本题是根据思维导图提示的英语书面表达题，解题思路为：先明确思维导图围绕“Sports”分为益处、最喜欢的运动、运动习惯三个核心模块；接着承接已给开头，先阐述运动的益处，结合思维导图中“帮助保持健康”“帮助放松”的提示，适当补充合理益处；再说明自己最喜欢的运动及原因；然后介绍运动习惯，包含频率和时长；最后收尾呼吁坚持运动，满足词数要求，不出现真实信息，适当发挥内容。
【解析】
按照思维导图结构分步写作：1. 承接开头，说明运动的益处，结合提示补充合理内容；2. 介绍自己最喜欢的运动，说明喜欢的原因；3. 说明运动习惯，包括频率和每次时长；4. 结尾呼吁大家坚持运动，保持健康。注意符合词数要求，语言通顺，不出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
I Love Sports
I think it's very important for everyone to do sports. Doing sports has many benefits. It can not only help us to keep fit but also help us relax. What's more, it can also help us be full of energy and improve our studying efficiency. My favourite sport is swimming because swimming is very beneficial to our body. It can help us keep slim and reduce the pain of the knees at the same time.
I usually swim twice a week and every time I swim for at least fifty minutes. Swimming is interesting and I love keeping this habit.
I hope all of us can keep doing sports and have a healthy body.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、思维导图写作
【点评】
本题围绕思维导图展开英语写作，要求学生梳理结构、覆盖要点，兼顾语言通顺与内容完整，符合中学生英语写作的考查方向，需学生具备基础的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是根据思维导图提示的英语书面表达题，解题思路为：先明确思维导图围绕“Sports”分为益处、最喜欢的运动、运动习惯三个核心模块；接着承接已给开头，先阐述运动的益处，结合思维导图中“帮助保持健康”“帮助放松”的提示，适当补充合理益处；再说明自己最喜欢的运动及原因；然后介绍运动习惯，包含频率和时长；最后收尾呼吁坚持运动，满足词数要求，不出现真实信息，适当发挥内容。
【解析】
按照思维导图结构分步写作：1. 承接开头，说明运动的益处，结合提示补充合理内容；2. 介绍自己最喜欢的运动，说明喜欢的原因；3. 说明运动习惯，包括频率和每次时长；4. 结尾呼吁大家坚持运动，保持健康。注意符合词数要求，语言通顺，不出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
I Love Sports
I think it's very important for everyone to do sports. Doing sports has many benefits. It can not only help us to keep fit but also help us relax. What's more, it can also help us be full of energy and improve our studying efficiency. My favourite sport is swimming because swimming is very beneficial to our body. It can help us keep slim and reduce the pain of the knees at the same time.
I usually swim twice a week and every time I swim for at least fifty minutes. Swimming is interesting and I love keeping this habit.
I hope all of us can keep doing sports and have a healthy body.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、思维导图写作
【点评】
本题围绕思维导图展开英语写作，要求学生梳理结构、覆盖要点，兼顾语言通顺与内容完整，符合中学生英语写作的考查方向，需学生具备基础的语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
