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【实战演练】
在生活中,总有一份职业让你心生敬佩——可能是守护安全的消防员,可能是传递知识的老师,也可能是默默奉献的环卫工人。请你以“The Job I Admire”为题,写一篇短文,分享你敬佩的职业。
提示:
(1)What is the job you admire?
(2)Why do you admire the job?
(3)What influence does this job have on you? (such as your view of careers, your life attitude ... )
要求:(1)包括提示信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名,校名等信息;(3)80—120词。
【写作提示】
在生活中,总有一份职业让你心生敬佩——可能是守护安全的消防员,可能是传递知识的老师,也可能是默默奉献的环卫工人。请你以“The Job I Admire”为题,写一篇短文,分享你敬佩的职业。
提示:
(1)What is the job you admire?
(2)Why do you admire the job?
(3)What influence does this job have on you? (such as your view of careers, your life attitude ... )
要求:(1)包括提示信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名,校名等信息;(3)80—120词。
【写作提示】
答案
【实战演练】
One possible version:
The Job I Admire
The job I admire most is a street cleaner. Every winter morning, when I walk to school, I see them working in the cold wind—sweeping leaves, picking up rubbish, and making the streets clean.
I admire this job because street cleaners work hard but are often ignored. Last month, it rained heavily, and the road was covered with mud. A street cleaner spent two hours cleaning it with a small shovel, so we could walk safely. They don't get high pay, but they keep our city tidy every day.
This job teaches me that every job that serves others is great. It makes me want to keep our environment clean, like throwing rubbish into bins. I hope more people can respect street cleaners and their hard work.
One possible version:
The Job I Admire
The job I admire most is a street cleaner. Every winter morning, when I walk to school, I see them working in the cold wind—sweeping leaves, picking up rubbish, and making the streets clean.
I admire this job because street cleaners work hard but are often ignored. Last month, it rained heavily, and the road was covered with mud. A street cleaner spent two hours cleaning it with a small shovel, so we could walk safely. They don't get high pay, but they keep our city tidy every day.
This job teaches me that every job that serves others is great. It makes me want to keep our environment clean, like throwing rubbish into bins. I hope more people can respect street cleaners and their hard work.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语话题应用文写作，需围绕“The Job I Admire”完成。解题思路：首先确定敬佩的职业（如贴近生活的环卫工人，易结合事例）；开头用生活场景引入，让内容生动；接着阐述敬佩原因，聚焦职业的责任与付出，结合具体事例增强说服力；然后谈该职业对自身的影响，联系自身想法或行动；最后结尾表达对从业者的感谢或自身期许，让文章有温度。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 确定敬佩的职业：选择生活中常见的环卫工人，便于结合具体事例；
2. 开头：用生活场景引入，如“Every winter morning, when I walk to school, I see them working in the cold wind...”，引出职业；
3. 阐述敬佩原因：结合具体事例（如雨天清理道路），突出他们辛苦付出却常被忽视，体现职业的责任；
4. 谈影响：联系自身，表达对职业的看法，如“every job that serves others is great”，并落实到自身行动（如爱护环境）；
5. 结尾：表达期许，如希望大家尊重环卫工人，升华主题。
【答案】
The Job I Admire
The job I admire most is a street cleaner. Every winter morning, when I walk to school, I see them working in the cold wind—sweeping leaves, picking up rubbish, and making the streets clean.
I admire this job because street cleaners work hard but are often ignored. Last month, it rained heavily, and the road was covered with mud. A street cleaner spent two hours cleaning it with a small shovel, so we could walk safely. They don't get high pay, but they keep our city tidy every day.
This job teaches me that every job that serves others is great. It makes me want to keep our environment clean, like throwing rubbish into bins. I hope more people can respect street cleaners and their hard work.
【知识点】英语话题写作、应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，有具体事例支撑，语言流畅自然，传递了尊重劳动者的积极价值观，符合字数要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语话题应用文写作，需围绕“The Job I Admire”完成。解题思路：首先确定敬佩的职业（如贴近生活的环卫工人，易结合事例）；开头用生活场景引入，让内容生动；接着阐述敬佩原因，聚焦职业的责任与付出，结合具体事例增强说服力；然后谈该职业对自身的影响，联系自身想法或行动；最后结尾表达对从业者的感谢或自身期许，让文章有温度。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 确定敬佩的职业：选择生活中常见的环卫工人，便于结合具体事例；
2. 开头：用生活场景引入，如“Every winter morning, when I walk to school, I see them working in the cold wind...”，引出职业；
3. 阐述敬佩原因：结合具体事例（如雨天清理道路），突出他们辛苦付出却常被忽视，体现职业的责任；
4. 谈影响：联系自身，表达对职业的看法，如“every job that serves others is great”，并落实到自身行动（如爱护环境）；
5. 结尾：表达期许，如希望大家尊重环卫工人，升华主题。
【答案】
The Job I Admire
The job I admire most is a street cleaner. Every winter morning, when I walk to school, I see them working in the cold wind—sweeping leaves, picking up rubbish, and making the streets clean.
I admire this job because street cleaners work hard but are often ignored. Last month, it rained heavily, and the road was covered with mud. A street cleaner spent two hours cleaning it with a small shovel, so we could walk safely. They don't get high pay, but they keep our city tidy every day.
This job teaches me that every job that serves others is great. It makes me want to keep our environment clean, like throwing rubbish into bins. I hope more people can respect street cleaners and their hard work.
【知识点】英语话题写作、应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，有具体事例支撑，语言流畅自然，传递了尊重劳动者的积极价值观，符合字数要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
