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第一步:定基调。主题:旅游观光。人称:第三人称。时态:一般现在时。
第二步:列提纲
引出话题 I am here to talk about the importance of protecting Qinghai Lake.
主体内容
Where is it?
In the northeast of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau.
What is it like?
It covers an area of about 4,650 square kilometres.
The water shines brightly under the sun and there are different kinds of blue in the water.
Beautiful grasslands and snow mountains are around it.
From April to July, hundreds of thousands of birds gather here.
What problems does it face?
There is serious waste pollution.
The grasslands are becoming smaller and smaller and many animals are losing their homes and food.
What should we do to protect it?
Stop littering when travelling there.
Protect the grasslands.
总结点题 Let's work together to keep Qinghai Lake clean and beautiful for everyone!
范文展示
Hello everyone!
I am here to talk about the importance of protecting Qinghai Lake.
Qinghai Lake is in the northeast of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. As the largest inland saltwater lake in China, it covers an area of about 4,650 square kilometres. The water shines brightly under the sun and there are different kinds of blue in the water. Around the lake, there are beautiful grasslands and snow mountains. What's more, from April to July every year, hundreds of thousands of birds gather here. It's a really great place to watch birds.
However, Qinghai Lake faces some problems now. Many tourists visit it every year. As a result, there is serious waste pollution. Even worse, the grasslands are becoming smaller and smaller and many animals are losing their homes and food.
To protect the lake, we must take action right now. We should stop littering everywhere. And don't run, ride or drive on the grasslands. Let's work together to keep Qinghai Lake clean and beautiful for everyone!
Thank you for listening!
(152 words)
话题好句
1.运用“as+名词”结构翻译“作为学生，我们应上课专心听讲。”
2.运用“what's more”结构翻译“另外，我们必须努力训练。”
3.运用“as a result”翻译“结果，她获得了金牌。”
4.运用“even worse”翻译“更糟的是，我生病了。”
第二步:列提纲
引出话题 I am here to talk about the importance of protecting Qinghai Lake.
主体内容
Where is it?
In the northeast of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau.
What is it like?
It covers an area of about 4,650 square kilometres.
The water shines brightly under the sun and there are different kinds of blue in the water.
Beautiful grasslands and snow mountains are around it.
From April to July, hundreds of thousands of birds gather here.
What problems does it face?
There is serious waste pollution.
The grasslands are becoming smaller and smaller and many animals are losing their homes and food.
What should we do to protect it?
Stop littering when travelling there.
Protect the grasslands.
总结点题 Let's work together to keep Qinghai Lake clean and beautiful for everyone!
范文展示
Hello everyone!
I am here to talk about the importance of protecting Qinghai Lake.
Qinghai Lake is in the northeast of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. As the largest inland saltwater lake in China, it covers an area of about 4,650 square kilometres. The water shines brightly under the sun and there are different kinds of blue in the water. Around the lake, there are beautiful grasslands and snow mountains. What's more, from April to July every year, hundreds of thousands of birds gather here. It's a really great place to watch birds.
However, Qinghai Lake faces some problems now. Many tourists visit it every year. As a result, there is serious waste pollution. Even worse, the grasslands are becoming smaller and smaller and many animals are losing their homes and food.
To protect the lake, we must take action right now. We should stop littering everywhere. And don't run, ride or drive on the grasslands. Let's work together to keep Qinghai Lake clean and beautiful for everyone!
Thank you for listening!
(152 words)
话题好句
1.运用“as+名词”结构翻译“作为学生，我们应上课专心听讲。”
As students, we should listen to the teachers carefully in class.
2.运用“what's more”结构翻译“另外，我们必须努力训练。”
What's more, we must train hard.
3.运用“as a result”翻译“结果，她获得了金牌。”
As a result, she got the gold medal.
4.运用“even worse”翻译“更糟的是，我生病了。”
Even worse, I got ill.
答案
1. As students, we should listen to the teachers carefully in class.
2. What's more, we must train hard.
3. As a result, she got the gold medal.
4. Even worse, I got ill.
2. What's more, we must train hard.
3. As a result, she got the gold medal.
4. Even worse, I got ill.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语汉译英题，要求运用指定的英语结构（as+名词结构、what's more、as a result、even worse）完成翻译。解题思路：先明确各指定结构的用法（as+名词作状语，what's more等短语多作句首衔接语），再准确理解中文语义，确定合适的词汇与时态，最后将结构与内容结合，确保语法正确、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 第一题用“as+名词”结构，“作为学生”对应as students，“应上课专心听讲”译为we should listen to the teachers carefully in class，组合得：As students, we should listen to the teachers carefully in class。
2. 第二题用“what's more”结构，该短语用于补充说明，“另外，我们必须努力训练”译为：What's more, we must train hard。
3. 第三题用“as a result”结构，表结果，“获得金牌”为已发生动作，用过去式got，译为：As a result, she got the gold medal。
4. 第四题用“even worse”结构，表更糟情况，“生病”用过去式got ill，译为：Even worse, I got ill。
【答案】
1. As students, we should listen to the teachers carefully in class.
2. What's more, we must train hard.
3. As a result, she got the gold medal.
4. Even worse, I got ill.
【知识点】
英语常用衔接结构、汉译英
【点评】
本题考察英语写作中常用衔接表达的运用，是提升句子连贯性的基础知识点，需掌握各结构的位置搭配与时态选择，整体难度较低，适合基础阶段学生巩固练习。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语汉译英题，要求运用指定的英语结构（as+名词结构、what's more、as a result、even worse）完成翻译。解题思路：先明确各指定结构的用法（as+名词作状语，what's more等短语多作句首衔接语），再准确理解中文语义，确定合适的词汇与时态，最后将结构与内容结合，确保语法正确、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 第一题用“as+名词”结构，“作为学生”对应as students，“应上课专心听讲”译为we should listen to the teachers carefully in class，组合得：As students, we should listen to the teachers carefully in class。
2. 第二题用“what's more”结构，该短语用于补充说明，“另外，我们必须努力训练”译为：What's more, we must train hard。
3. 第三题用“as a result”结构，表结果，“获得金牌”为已发生动作，用过去式got，译为：As a result, she got the gold medal。
4. 第四题用“even worse”结构，表更糟情况，“生病”用过去式got ill，译为：Even worse, I got ill。
【答案】
1. As students, we should listen to the teachers carefully in class.
2. What's more, we must train hard.
3. As a result, she got the gold medal.
4. Even worse, I got ill.
【知识点】
英语常用衔接结构、汉译英
【点评】
本题考察英语写作中常用衔接表达的运用，是提升句子连贯性的基础知识点，需掌握各结构的位置搭配与时态选择，整体难度较低，适合基础阶段学生巩固练习。
【难度系数】
0.3
