一 方法指导
描述自己喜欢的节日,可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步,开头,描述自己喜欢的节日;第二步,正文,具体介绍节日时间、喜欢的原因和节日中的活动安排;第三步,结尾,表达自己的感受。
二 素材积累

三 以读促写(阅读范文,补全思维导图,体悟写法)
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China. It’s on August 15th of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. I like it. Because we have a holiday and we can eat delicious food. On that day, my grandparents usually make moon cakes. My mother cooks dinner for us. My father cleans the rooms. My brother and I guess lantern riddles. We are so happy on that day.

描述自己喜欢的节日,可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步,开头,描述自己喜欢的节日;第二步,正文,具体介绍节日时间、喜欢的原因和节日中的活动安排;第三步,结尾,表达自己的感受。
二 素材积累
三 以读促写(阅读范文,补全思维导图,体悟写法)
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China. It’s on August 15th of the Chinese Lunar Calendar. I like it. Because we have a holiday and we can eat delicious food. On that day, my grandparents usually make moon cakes. My mother cooks dinner for us. My father cleans the rooms. My brother and I guess lantern riddles. We are so happy on that day.
答案
1. make moon cakes
2. cooks dinner for us
3. cleans the rooms
2. cooks dinner for us
3. cleans the rooms
解析
【分析】本题要求阅读范文补全思维导图,需先定位范文中描述中秋节家人活动的语句,从中提取对应的关键动作短语,即可完成补全。
【解析】阅读给定范文,找到描述家人在中秋节当天活动的相关句子:①“my grandparents usually make moon cakes.”提取出活动短语make moon cakes;②“My mother cooks dinner for us.”提取出cooks dinner for us;③“My father cleans the rooms.”提取出cleans the rooms,即为需补全的内容。
【答案】make moon cakes;cooks dinner for us;cleans the rooms
【知识点】英语阅读信息提取;节日活动表达
【点评】本题侧重考查学生从阅读文本中精准提取关键信息的能力,结合范文内容即可完成作答,难度较低。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】阅读给定范文,找到描述家人在中秋节当天活动的相关句子:①“my grandparents usually make moon cakes.”提取出活动短语make moon cakes;②“My mother cooks dinner for us.”提取出cooks dinner for us;③“My father cleans the rooms.”提取出cleans the rooms,即为需补全的内容。
【答案】make moon cakes;cooks dinner for us;cleans the rooms
【知识点】英语阅读信息提取;节日活动表达
【点评】本题侧重考查学生从阅读文本中精准提取关键信息的能力,结合范文内容即可完成作答,难度较低。
【难度系数】0.6
四 小试身手(参照以上范文,自己动手写一写吧)
假如你是李华,根据下面的思维导图,描述你们一家人在端午节的活动吧。

假如你是李华,根据下面的思维导图,描述你们一家人在端午节的活动吧。
I'm Li Hua. My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is important in China. On that day, my grandma often makes zongzi . It is very delicious. My mother cooks lunch for us. The house is cleaned by my father. The most interesting part for me is watching dragon boat races with my grandpa. We are happy on that day.
答案
四 范文:
I'm Li Hua. My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is important in China. On that day, my grandma often makes zongzi . It is very delicious. My mother cooks lunch for us. The house is cleaned by my father. The most interesting part for me is watching dragon boat races with my grandpa. We are happy on that day.
I'm Li Hua. My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is important in China. On that day, my grandma often makes zongzi . It is very delicious. My mother cooks lunch for us. The house is cleaned by my father. The most interesting part for me is watching dragon boat races with my grandpa. We are happy on that day.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:以李华的身份,根据思维导图的信息(端午节、奶奶包粽子、妈妈做午饭、爸爸打扫房子、爷爷和“我”看龙舟赛)写一篇描述家人端午节活动的短文。解题思路:1. 开头点明身份和节日,引出主题;2. 依次对应思维导图信息,介绍每个家人的活动,使用一般现在时描述日常活动;3. 结尾补充感受,让短文完整通顺。
【解析】按照写作思路,整合思维导图的所有要点,用正确的英语句型串联内容,确保语法准确、语句连贯,符合节日话题的表达习惯。
【答案】四 范文:
I'm Li Hua. My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is important in China. On that day, my grandma often makes zongzi. It is very delicious. My mother cooks lunch for us. The house is cleaned by my father. The most interesting part for me is watching dragon boat races with my grandpa. We are happy on that day.
【知识点】英语节日话题写作;一般现在时;家庭成员相关表达
【点评】本题考查学生对节日类英语词汇、句型的运用能力,以及信息整合与书面表达能力,要求根据给定思维导图的要点完成短文,难度适中,适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作思路,整合思维导图的所有要点,用正确的英语句型串联内容,确保语法准确、语句连贯,符合节日话题的表达习惯。
【答案】四 范文:
I'm Li Hua. My favourite festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is important in China. On that day, my grandma often makes zongzi. It is very delicious. My mother cooks lunch for us. The house is cleaned by my father. The most interesting part for me is watching dragon boat races with my grandpa. We are happy on that day.
【知识点】英语节日话题写作;一般现在时;家庭成员相关表达
【点评】本题考查学生对节日类英语词汇、句型的运用能力,以及信息整合与书面表达能力,要求根据给定思维导图的要点完成短文,难度适中,适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
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