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三、书面表达。
假如你是李华，饮食健康，身体强壮。你的美国笔友 Eric 因为不健康的饮食经常感到不适，请你根据以下图示信息用英文写一封电子邮件，谈谈你一日三餐都经常吃些什么、作息时间(timetable)如何、如何进行身体锻炼等。
要求:包含所有提示信息;词数 70 左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
I am sorry to know that you are not healthy. I want to tell you about my three meals and timetable a day.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，饮食健康，身体强壮。你的美国笔友 Eric 因为不健康的饮食经常感到不适，请你根据以下图示信息用英文写一封电子邮件，谈谈你一日三餐都经常吃些什么、作息时间(timetable)如何、如何进行身体锻炼等。
要求:包含所有提示信息;词数 70 左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
I am sorry to know that you are not healthy. I want to tell you about my three meals and timetable a day.
For breakfast, I usually have two eggs and milk. For lunch, I often have some meat and vegetables. For dinner, I usually eat noodles and vegetables. After dinner, I usually have some fruit. I never eat junk food, like hamburgers and ice cream.
I get up at six o'clock every morning. Then I go to the park to take exercise. I usually run in the park for 30 minutes. I think exercise is good for our bodies. At night, I usually go to bed before ten o'clock.
All in all, remember healthy food and exercise are important for us.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Eric,
I am sorry to know that you are not healthy. I want to tell you about my three meals and timetable a day.
For breakfast, I usually have two eggs and milk. For lunch, I often have some meat and vegetables. For dinner, I usually eat noodles and vegetables. After dinner, I usually have some fruit. I never eat junk food, like hamburgers and ice cream.
I get up at six o'clock every morning. Then I go to the park to take exercise. I usually run in the park for 30 minutes. I think exercise is good for our bodies. At night, I usually go to bed before ten o'clock.
All in all, remember healthy food and exercise are important for us.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Eric,
I am sorry to know that you are not healthy. I want to tell you about my three meals and timetable a day.
For breakfast, I usually have two eggs and milk. For lunch, I often have some meat and vegetables. For dinner, I usually eat noodles and vegetables. After dinner, I usually have some fruit. I never eat junk food, like hamburgers and ice cream.
I get up at six o'clock every morning. Then I go to the park to take exercise. I usually run in the park for 30 minutes. I think exercise is good for our bodies. At night, I usually go to bed before ten o'clock.
All in all, remember healthy food and exercise are important for us.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，需根据图示信息完成给Eric的邮件。解题思路：① 明确邮件结构，开头已给出，中间需涵盖三餐、作息、锻炼三部分内容；② 将图示中的饮食（早餐鸡蛋牛奶、午餐肉和蔬菜、晚餐面条蔬菜和水果）、作息（6点起床、10点前睡觉）、锻炼（起床后锻炼）转化为通顺的英文表达；③ 补充合理连接词使语句连贯，结尾点明健康饮食与锻炼的重要性，确保包含所有提示信息且词数符合要求。
【解析】1. 承接开头，依次描述三餐：早餐用“For breakfast, I usually have two eggs and milk.”，午餐对应“For lunch, I often have some meat and vegetables.”，晚餐补充“After dinner, I usually have some fruit.”，添加“never eat junk food”强化健康主题；2. 描述作息与锻炼：“I get up at six o'clock every morning. Then I take exercise. I usually run for 30 minutes. I go to bed before ten o'clock.”；3. 结尾总结健康的重要性，完成邮件。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Eric,
I am sorry to know that you are not healthy. I want to tell you about my three meals and timetable a day.
For breakfast, I usually have two eggs and milk. For lunch, I often have some meat and vegetables. For dinner, I usually eat noodles and vegetables. After dinner, I usually have some fruit. I never eat junk food, like hamburgers and ice cream.
I get up at six o'clock every morning. Then I go to the park to take exercise. I usually run in the park for 30 minutes. I think exercise is good for our bodies. At night, I usually go to bed before ten o'clock.
All in all, remember healthy food and exercise are important for us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生运用英语进行书面表达的能力，同时引导学生树立健康的生活观念，符合英语学科的育人目标。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 承接开头，依次描述三餐：早餐用“For breakfast, I usually have two eggs and milk.”，午餐对应“For lunch, I often have some meat and vegetables.”，晚餐补充“After dinner, I usually have some fruit.”，添加“never eat junk food”强化健康主题；2. 描述作息与锻炼：“I get up at six o'clock every morning. Then I take exercise. I usually run for 30 minutes. I go to bed before ten o'clock.”；3. 结尾总结健康的重要性，完成邮件。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Eric,
I am sorry to know that you are not healthy. I want to tell you about my three meals and timetable a day.
For breakfast, I usually have two eggs and milk. For lunch, I often have some meat and vegetables. For dinner, I usually eat noodles and vegetables. After dinner, I usually have some fruit. I never eat junk food, like hamburgers and ice cream.
I get up at six o'clock every morning. Then I go to the park to take exercise. I usually run in the park for 30 minutes. I think exercise is good for our bodies. At night, I usually go to bed before ten o'clock.
All in all, remember healthy food and exercise are important for us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生运用英语进行书面表达的能力，同时引导学生树立健康的生活观念，符合英语学科的育人目标。
【难度系数】0.5
