八、书面表达。6分
假如你是John,作文课Max老师请同学们介绍一下家庭成员里自己最敬佩的人,请根据思维导图提示及参考句型,写一篇英文短文向同学们介绍一下你的叔叔吧,不少于5句话。
参考句型:He is... He can... He works in... He likes...
He has a great job. I'd like to...

This is my uncle.
假如你是John,作文课Max老师请同学们介绍一下家庭成员里自己最敬佩的人,请根据思维导图提示及参考句型,写一篇英文短文向同学们介绍一下你的叔叔吧,不少于5句话。
参考句型:He is... He can... He works in... He likes...
He has a great job. I'd like to...
This is my uncle.
His name is Jack. He is a policeman.
He works in a police station. He is strong and kind.
He can keep us safe. He likes Chinese food.
He has a great job.
I'd like to be a policeman too.
答案
范文:
This is my uncle. His name is Jack. He is a policeman. He works in a police station. He is strong and kind. He can keep us safe. He likes Chinese food. He has a great job. I'd like to be a policeman too.
This is my uncle. His name is Jack. He is a policeman. He works in a police station. He is strong and kind. He can keep us safe. He likes Chinese food. He has a great job. I'd like to be a policeman too.
解析
【分析】
本题要求介绍自己最敬佩的家庭成员(叔叔),需结合思维导图的信息点(名字、职业、工作地点、性格、能力、爱好),运用题目给出的参考句型,写出不少于5句的英文短文。解题思路:先承接开头句,依次介绍叔叔的名字、职业、工作地点、性格、能力、爱好,最后用参考句型收尾,确保信息完整、语句通顺,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
根据思维导图提示和参考句型,按以下步骤写作:
1. 承接开头,介绍叔叔的名字:His name is Jack.
2. 说明叔叔的职业:He is a policeman.
3. 介绍叔叔的工作地点:He works in a police station.
4. 描述叔叔的性格:He is strong and kind.
5. 说明叔叔的能力:He can keep us safe.
6. 介绍叔叔的爱好:He likes Chinese food.
7. 运用参考句型收尾:He has a great job. I'd like to be a policeman too.
【答案】
This is my uncle. His name is Jack. He is a policeman. He works in a police station. He is strong and kind. He can keep us safe. He likes Chinese food. He has a great job. I'd like to be a policeman too.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍书面表达,常用句型运用,词汇运用
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生整合信息、运用英语句型进行人物介绍的能力,贴近生活实际,要求明确,学生只要梳理思维导图信息并结合参考句型即可完成,是基础的书面表达题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求介绍自己最敬佩的家庭成员(叔叔),需结合思维导图的信息点(名字、职业、工作地点、性格、能力、爱好),运用题目给出的参考句型,写出不少于5句的英文短文。解题思路:先承接开头句,依次介绍叔叔的名字、职业、工作地点、性格、能力、爱好,最后用参考句型收尾,确保信息完整、语句通顺,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
根据思维导图提示和参考句型,按以下步骤写作:
1. 承接开头,介绍叔叔的名字:His name is Jack.
2. 说明叔叔的职业:He is a policeman.
3. 介绍叔叔的工作地点:He works in a police station.
4. 描述叔叔的性格:He is strong and kind.
5. 说明叔叔的能力:He can keep us safe.
6. 介绍叔叔的爱好:He likes Chinese food.
7. 运用参考句型收尾:He has a great job. I'd like to be a policeman too.
【答案】
This is my uncle. His name is Jack. He is a policeman. He works in a police station. He is strong and kind. He can keep us safe. He likes Chinese food. He has a great job. I'd like to be a policeman too.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍书面表达,常用句型运用,词汇运用
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生整合信息、运用英语句型进行人物介绍的能力,贴近生活实际,要求明确,学生只要梳理思维导图信息并结合参考句型即可完成,是基础的书面表达题。
【难度系数】
0.6
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