七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计20分)(真题·台州温岭)
76.八年级生活即将结束,你会迎来一个轻松且漫长的暑假。这是一个放松身心、探索兴趣、承担责任,并为即将到来的九年级冲刺积蓄力量的黄金时期。你有什么暑期计划呢?请根据下图提示,以“My Summer Vacation”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你将如何安排假期,丰富你的暑假生活。
My Summer Vacation
Health:
• eating habits
• enough sleep
• ...
Hobbies:
• read books
• watch movies
• ...
Housework:
• do the dishes
• sweep the floor
• ...
要求:(1)短文须包含图中至少两方面信息以及所选择方面的所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80词左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Summer Vacation
Summer vacation has always been a perfect time for me to explore new things.

76. One possible version:
My Summer Vacation
Summer vacation has always been a perfect time for me to explore new things.
In terms of health, I'll develop good eating habits, like eating more fruits and vegetables. Also, I'll make sure to get enough sleep, at least 8 hours every night. For hobbies, I plan to read two interesting books and watch some wonderful movies. I think reading can open my mind and movies can bring me fun. When it comes to housework, I'll help my mum do the dishes after meals and sweep the floor on weekends. It's a good way to learn life skills and show my love to my family.
I'm sure this summer vacation will be colourful and meaningful.
（101 words）
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本文是一篇计划类记叙文,主题为“我的暑假安排”,需围绕“暑假的不同维度计划(健康、爱好、家务)”展开,突出“充实且有意义”的核心。写作需覆盖“what(具体计划)、why(计划的意义)”两个维度；时态以一般将来时(描述计划)为主；需分模块(健康、爱好、家务)呈现内容,每个模块补充具体细节与价值,使计划更具体、有说服力。
【提纲演示】
开篇:点明暑假的定位
示例:Summer vacation has always been a perfect time for me to explore new things.
主体:分模块阐述暑假计划
健康计划:
示例:In terms of health, I'll develop good eating habits ... Also, I'll make sure to get enough sleep.
爱好计划:
示例:For hobbies, I plan to read two interesting books and watch some wonderful movies ...
家务计划:
示例:When it comes to housework, I'll help my mum do the dishes ... It's a good way to learn life skills.
结尾:展望暑假的效果
示例:I'm sure this summer vacation will be colourful and meaningful.
【写作要点】
分类逻辑:
用 in terms of/for/when it comes to 划分不同计划模块,使结构清晰
细节具象化:
将计划具体为“eat more fruits and vegetables”“read two books”“do the dishes”,避免空泛
价值关联:
为每个计划补充意义(如“reading can open my mind”“learn life skills”),提升内容深度
【主题拓展】
此类“假期计划”主题可延伸至寒假、小长假,核心逻辑为“分维度列计划＋说明计划价值”,可替换模块(如“学习计划”“旅行计划”),通过补充具体任务(如“预习数学章节”“去海边旅行”)适配不同假期场景。

【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，需围绕“我的暑假计划”展开。解题思路：①审题：明确写作要求（主题为My Summer Vacation，需包含至少两个给定维度的所有要点，时态用一般将来时，80词左右，不得出现真实信息）；②选维度：可选取健康、爱好两个维度（易覆盖所有要点）；③补细节：每个维度需包含给定要点（健康：饮食习惯、充足睡眠；爱好：读书、看电影），并补充具体内容与计划意义；④搭结构：用连接词划分模块，使结构清晰，结尾展望假期，确保符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 确定时态：全文采用一般将来时（will+动词原形）描述计划；2. 选择维度：选取健康、爱好两个维度，覆盖所有要求要点；3. 组织内容：开头接给定句，主体分两部分：①健康：说明养成良好饮食习惯（如多吃果蔬）、保证至少8小时睡眠，补充计划意义；②爱好：计划读两本有趣的书、看精彩电影，补充计划意义；4. 结尾：展望假期多彩有意义；5. 检查：确保无真实信息，词数符合要求。
【答案】My Summer Vacation
Summer vacation has always been a perfect time for me to explore new things.
In terms of health, I'll develop good eating habits, like eating more fruits and vegetables. Also, I'll make sure to get enough sleep, at least 8 hours every night. For hobbies, I plan to read two interesting books and watch some wonderful movies. I think reading can open my mind and movies can bring me fun. I'm sure this summer vacation will be colourful and meaningful.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般将来时应用、短文结构搭建
【点评】本题为初中英语常规写作题，贴近学生生活实际，给定明确要点提示，既考查学生的语言组织、时态运用能力，又引导学生合理规划假期，难度适中，能有效检测学生的基础写作水平。
【难度系数】0.3