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主题词网
优选词汇
· long/short/black/brown hair · medium height · a bright smile · short
· dark/brown/blue eyes · straight/curly hair · a round face · tall
· play the guitar · ride a bicycle · go swimming · dance
· play basketball · play football · paint pictures · read books
· hard-working · outgoing · helpful · caring · polite · funny
· understanding · confident · friendly · honest · patient · kind
写作实例
审主题：介绍朋友的演讲稿
审时态：一般现在时
审要点
审人称：以第三人称为主
假设你是李华，你将参加一个题为“My Best Friend”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示写出你的演讲稿。要点如下：(1) 你的朋友叫Mike，来自澳大利亚，个子很高，有金黄色的头发；(2) 他非常善良且乐于助人，经常帮助你；(3) 他擅长跳舞和唱歌。
参考词汇：金黄色的 blonde
要求：(1) 词数80左右；(2) 要点齐全，行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
My Best Friend
写作支架
开头 打招呼；介绍好友的基本信息及外貌 → Hello!
→ I have many
→ He is a
→ He is tall
中间 介绍好友的爱好和性格 → He is good at
→ We really like playing
结尾 表达对交朋友的感想 → It is wonderful to
智慧智囊
not only...but also...用于连接句子中两个并列且语法结构一致的成分，如单词、短语、从句。 如：He is not only a writer, but also an inventor. 他不仅是一位作家，还是一位发明家。
教材原文
P5 Li Hua is one of them.
P12 When I need help, she is always there for me.
P5 We really like doing things together.
P12 It is wonderful to have such a good friend.
优秀范文
My Best Friend
Hello! Everyone!¹ I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them. He is a 12-year-old boy who is from² Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
He is good at² dancing and singing, and he always teaches me modern dance. He is not only³ kind but also³ helpful. When I need help, he is always there for me. We really like playing together. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park.
It is wonderful to have such a good friend like Mike.
主题词网
优选词汇
· long/short/black/brown hair · medium height · a bright smile · short
· dark/brown/blue eyes · straight/curly hair · a round face · tall
· play the guitar · ride a bicycle · go swimming · dance
· play basketball · play football · paint pictures · read books
· hard-working · outgoing · helpful · caring · polite · funny
· understanding · confident · friendly · honest · patient · kind
写作实例
审主题：介绍朋友的演讲稿
审时态：一般现在时
审要点
审人称：以第三人称为主
假设你是李华，你将参加一个题为“My Best Friend”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示写出你的演讲稿。要点如下：(1) 你的朋友叫Mike，来自澳大利亚，个子很高，有金黄色的头发；(2) 他非常善良且乐于助人，经常帮助你；(3) 他擅长跳舞和唱歌。
参考词汇：金黄色的 blonde
要求：(1) 词数80左右；(2) 要点齐全，行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
My Best Friend
Hello! Everyone! I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them.
He is a 12-year-old boy who is from Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
He is good at dancing and singing, and he always teaches me modern dance. He is not only kind but also helpful. When I need help, he is always there for me. We really like playing together. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park.
It is wonderful to have such a good friend like Mike.
写作支架
开头 打招呼；介绍好友的基本信息及外貌 → Hello!
Everyone
!→ I have many
good friends in my life
. Mike is one of them
.→ He is a
12-year-old
boy who is from Australia
.→ He is tall
with blonde hair
.中间 介绍好友的爱好和性格 → He is good at
dancing and singing
, and he always teaches me modern dance
. He is not only kind
but also helpful
.（高分句式1）When I need help, he is always there for me
.→ We really like playing
together
. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park
.结尾 表达对交朋友的感想 → It is wonderful to
have such a good friend like Mike
.（高分句式2）智慧智囊
not only...but also...用于连接句子中两个并列且语法结构一致的成分，如单词、短语、从句。 如：He is not only a writer, but also an inventor. 他不仅是一位作家，还是一位发明家。
教材原文
P5 Li Hua is one of them.
P12 When I need help, she is always there for me.
P5 We really like doing things together.
P12 It is wonderful to have such a good friend.
优秀范文
My Best Friend
Hello! Everyone!¹ I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them. He is a 12-year-old boy who is from² Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
He is good at² dancing and singing, and he always teaches me modern dance. He is not only³ kind but also³ helpful. When I need help, he is always there for me. We really like playing together. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park.
It is wonderful to have such a good friend like Mike.
答案
My Best Friend
Hello! Everyone!¹ I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them. He is a 12-year-old boy who is from² Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
He is good at² dancing and singing, and he always teaches me modern dance. He is not only³ kind but also³ helpful. When I need help, he is always there for me. We really like playing together. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park.
It is wonderful to have such a good friend like Mike.
亮点评析
①文章开头问好，引起读者的注意。
②文中使用所学固定短语对好朋友进行介绍。
③not only...but also...结构的使用提高了文章的档次。
Hello! Everyone!¹ I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them. He is a 12-year-old boy who is from² Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
He is good at² dancing and singing, and he always teaches me modern dance. He is not only³ kind but also³ helpful. When I need help, he is always there for me. We really like playing together. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park.
It is wonderful to have such a good friend like Mike.
亮点评析
①文章开头问好，引起读者的注意。
②文中使用所学固定短语对好朋友进行介绍。
③not only...but also...结构的使用提高了文章的档次。
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍好友的英语演讲稿，需使用一般现在时，以第一人称“我”和第三人称介绍Mike。写作思路：1. 开头：打招呼后，介绍好友的基本信息（名字、国籍）及外貌（身高、金发）；2. 中间：用高分句式not only...but also...介绍好友的爱好（擅长跳舞、唱歌）和性格（善良、乐于助人），结合教材例句补充细节，再说明周末活动；3. 结尾：用高分句式表达对交这样朋友的感想，确保要点齐全、行文连贯。
【解析】
确定时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称介绍Mike，第一人称叙述。根据写作支架和给定要点依次填充：
1. 开头：Hello! Everyone! I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them. He is a 12-year-old boy who is from Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
2. 中间：He is good at dancing and singing, and he always teaches me modern dance. He is not only kind but also helpful. When I need help, he is always there for me. We really like playing together. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park.
3. 结尾：It is wonderful to have such a good friend like Mike.
【答案】
My Best Friend
Hello! Everyone!
I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them. He is a 12-year-old boy who is from Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
He is good at dancing and singing, and he always teaches me modern dance. He is not only kind but also helpful. When I need help, he is always there for me. We really like playing together. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park.
It is wonderful to have such a good friend like Mike.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作；一般现在时运用；not only...but also...句型
【点评】
本文为符合要求的英语演讲稿，要点齐全，结构清晰，运用高分句式提升文章档次，结合教材例句丰富细节，语言连贯，词数合适，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
这是一篇介绍好友的英语演讲稿，需使用一般现在时，以第一人称“我”和第三人称介绍Mike。写作思路：1. 开头：打招呼后，介绍好友的基本信息（名字、国籍）及外貌（身高、金发）；2. 中间：用高分句式not only...but also...介绍好友的爱好（擅长跳舞、唱歌）和性格（善良、乐于助人），结合教材例句补充细节，再说明周末活动；3. 结尾：用高分句式表达对交这样朋友的感想，确保要点齐全、行文连贯。
【解析】
确定时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称介绍Mike，第一人称叙述。根据写作支架和给定要点依次填充：
1. 开头：Hello! Everyone! I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them. He is a 12-year-old boy who is from Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
2. 中间：He is good at dancing and singing, and he always teaches me modern dance. He is not only kind but also helpful. When I need help, he is always there for me. We really like playing together. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park.
3. 结尾：It is wonderful to have such a good friend like Mike.
【答案】
My Best Friend
Hello! Everyone!
I have many good friends in my life. Mike is one of them. He is a 12-year-old boy who is from Australia. He is tall with blonde hair.
He is good at dancing and singing, and he always teaches me modern dance. He is not only kind but also helpful. When I need help, he is always there for me. We really like playing together. On weekends, we often play soccer in the park.
It is wonderful to have such a good friend like Mike.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作；一般现在时运用；not only...but also...句型
【点评】
本文为符合要求的英语演讲稿，要点齐全，结构清晰，运用高分句式提升文章档次，结合教材例句丰富细节，语言连贯，词数合适，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
