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假设现在是星期六下午,你和家人正在人民广场。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍人民广场的热闹场景。词数80左右。
On the grass
sing and dance; fly a kite...
Around the flower bed
run; take photos...
Under a big tree
talk; draw pictures...
It's a sunny Saturday afternoon
假设现在是星期六下午,你和家人正在人民广场。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍人民广场的热闹场景。词数80左右。
On the grass
sing and dance; fly a kite...
Around the flower bed
run; take photos...
Under a big tree
talk; draw pictures...
It's a sunny Saturday afternoon
and I'm in the People's Square with my family.
There are so many people doing different things in the square. Some children are free to sing and dance on the grass. And a girl is flying a kite with her father near her. Around the flower bed, some young men are running while a woman is taking photos. Look there! Two old people are talking under a big tree, and beside them, some students are drawing pictures.
Everyone is having a great time in the square because it is really a good place to spend time with family.
答案
and I'm in the People's Square with my family.
There are so many people doing different things in the square. Some children are free to sing and dance on the grass. And a girl is flying a kite with her father near her. Around the flower bed, some young men are running while a woman is taking photos. Look there! Two old people are talking under a big tree, and beside them, some students are drawing pictures.
Everyone is having a great time in the square because it is really a good place to spend time with family.
There are so many people doing different things in the square. Some children are free to sing and dance on the grass. And a girl is flying a kite with her father near her. Around the flower bed, some young men are running while a woman is taking photos. Look there! Two old people are talking under a big tree, and beside them, some students are drawing pictures.
Everyone is having a great time in the square because it is really a good place to spend time with family.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语情景短文写作题,要求围绕周六下午人民广场的热闹场景完成80词左右的短文。解题思路为:① 承接题目给出的开头句,点明时间、地点与人物;② 按提示的三个区域(草地、花坛周围、大树下),用现在进行时描述对应人群的活动;③ 补充总结句体现热闹氛围,确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 直接承接题目开头句,引出广场的热闹氛围;2. 分三个场景用现在进行时描述活动:草地上有人唱歌跳舞、放风筝,花坛周围有人跑步、拍照,大树下有人聊天、画画;3. 最后补充总结句,说明大家玩得开心,呼应主题,控制词数在80左右,语言简洁自然。
【答案】
and I'm in the People's Square with my family.
There are so many people doing different things in the square. Some children are free to sing and dance on the grass. And a girl is flying a kite with her father near her. Around the flower bed, some young men are running while a woman is taking photos. Look there! Two old people are talking under a big tree, and beside them, some students are drawing pictures.
Everyone is having a great time in the square because it is really a good place to spend time with family.
【知识点】
英语情景短文写作、现在进行时运用、场景描述
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,以生动的现在进行时展现了人民广场的热闹场景,结构清晰,衔接自然,符合80词左右的词数要求,是一篇合格的情景写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语情景短文写作题,要求围绕周六下午人民广场的热闹场景完成80词左右的短文。解题思路为:① 承接题目给出的开头句,点明时间、地点与人物;② 按提示的三个区域(草地、花坛周围、大树下),用现在进行时描述对应人群的活动;③ 补充总结句体现热闹氛围,确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 直接承接题目开头句,引出广场的热闹氛围;2. 分三个场景用现在进行时描述活动:草地上有人唱歌跳舞、放风筝,花坛周围有人跑步、拍照,大树下有人聊天、画画;3. 最后补充总结句,说明大家玩得开心,呼应主题,控制词数在80左右,语言简洁自然。
【答案】
and I'm in the People's Square with my family.
There are so many people doing different things in the square. Some children are free to sing and dance on the grass. And a girl is flying a kite with her father near her. Around the flower bed, some young men are running while a woman is taking photos. Look there! Two old people are talking under a big tree, and beside them, some students are drawing pictures.
Everyone is having a great time in the square because it is really a good place to spend time with family.
【知识点】
英语情景短文写作、现在进行时运用、场景描述
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,以生动的现在进行时展现了人民广场的热闹场景,结构清晰,衔接自然,符合80词左右的词数要求,是一篇合格的情景写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.5
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