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学校网站正在进行征文活动。请你根据网站提出的问题,写一篇80词左右的英语日记,描述你的一次学校旅行经历。
Cloudy, 1 October
学校网站正在进行征文活动。请你根据网站提出的问题,写一篇80词左右的英语日记,描述你的一次学校旅行经历。
Cloudy, 1 October
答案
Last weekend, we went on a school trip to Sun Farm, where we enjoyed ourselves a lot.
In the morning, we took a car there and the farmer welcomed us warmly. Then, we went to the farm and saw lots of animals, so we decided to do some interesting activities, such as milking cows, feeding chickens and so on. Everyone felt excited like birds out of cage. After that, we picked and enjoyed apples. They were so sweet that we ate a lot. In the afternoon, we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants patiently.
Though we were tired, we learnt a lot and got closer to nature, which would be the best memory for us.
In the morning, we took a car there and the farmer welcomed us warmly. Then, we went to the farm and saw lots of animals, so we decided to do some interesting activities, such as milking cows, feeding chickens and so on. Everyone felt excited like birds out of cage. After that, we picked and enjoyed apples. They were so sweet that we ate a lot. In the afternoon, we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants patiently.
Though we were tired, we learnt a lot and got closer to nature, which would be the best memory for us.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇英语日记，描述学校旅行经历，需围绕“去哪里、做了什么、感受/学到什么”三个问题展开，还要符合日记格式（日期、天气），使用一般过去时叙述。解题思路：先确定旅行场景（如农场），按时间顺序组织内容，语言简洁流畅，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 先写日记的日期和天气，如“Cloudy, 1 October”；
2. 开头点明学校旅行的地点，引出经历；
3. 按时间顺序（上午、下午）叙述具体活动：到达农场、和农民互动、参与挤奶喂鸡、摘苹果、向农民学习种植；
4. 结尾表达感受与收获，呼应主题，使用一般过去时保证时态正确，内容贴合学校旅行的真实场景。
【答案】
Cloudy, 1 October
Last weekend, we went on a school trip to Sun Farm, where we enjoyed ourselves a lot. In the morning, we took a car there and the farmer welcomed us warmly. Then, we went to the farm and saw lots of animals, so we decided to do some interesting activities, such as milking cows, feeding chickens and so on. Everyone felt excited like birds out of cage. After that, we picked and enjoyed apples. They were so sweet that we ate a lot. In the afternoon, we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants patiently. Though we were tired, we learnt a lot and got closer to nature, which would be the best memory for us.
【知识点】
英语日记写作；一般过去时运用；话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，围绕三个核心问题展开，内容具体生动，时态准确，符合英语日记的写作规范，很好地完成了学校旅行经历的描述，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一篇英语日记，描述学校旅行经历，需围绕“去哪里、做了什么、感受/学到什么”三个问题展开，还要符合日记格式（日期、天气），使用一般过去时叙述。解题思路：先确定旅行场景（如农场），按时间顺序组织内容，语言简洁流畅，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 先写日记的日期和天气，如“Cloudy, 1 October”；
2. 开头点明学校旅行的地点，引出经历；
3. 按时间顺序（上午、下午）叙述具体活动：到达农场、和农民互动、参与挤奶喂鸡、摘苹果、向农民学习种植；
4. 结尾表达感受与收获，呼应主题，使用一般过去时保证时态正确，内容贴合学校旅行的真实场景。
【答案】
Cloudy, 1 October
Last weekend, we went on a school trip to Sun Farm, where we enjoyed ourselves a lot. In the morning, we took a car there and the farmer welcomed us warmly. Then, we went to the farm and saw lots of animals, so we decided to do some interesting activities, such as milking cows, feeding chickens and so on. Everyone felt excited like birds out of cage. After that, we picked and enjoyed apples. They were so sweet that we ate a lot. In the afternoon, we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants patiently. Though we were tired, we learnt a lot and got closer to nature, which would be the best memory for us.
【知识点】
英语日记写作；一般过去时运用；话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，围绕三个核心问题展开，内容具体生动，时态准确，符合英语日记的写作规范，很好地完成了学校旅行经历的描述，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
