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四、书面表达(本题有1小题,共20分)
假如你是张华,你的英国笔友Jane对你们家的周末活动很感兴趣。请根据以下相关信息,选择其中一次行程,写一封邮件与她分享。
注意:1.必须包含所选行程的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3.词数80左右,邮件的开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
假如你是张华,你的英国笔友Jane对你们家的周末活动很感兴趣。请根据以下相关信息,选择其中一次行程,写一封邮件与她分享。
注意:1.必须包含所选行程的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3.词数80左右,邮件的开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
答案
Possible version 1:
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. My family went to the Happy Farm, a good place to have a day out. And we had a great time there. When we arrived there, we helped the farmers water the plants. The plants looked so happy after getting fresh water. I also picked some red and juicy strawberries with my sister. They were so sweet and delicious. Dad told us about how the vegetables and fruits go from the fields to our tables. Mum shot videos of our activities to record all the wonderful moments.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. My parents took my sister and me to the science museum in the city centre and had a wonderful day there. There was a space exhibition. We could go inside some special rooms like parts of a space station and see how astronauts live and work. That was amazing! We also saw robots there. I asked a robot some questions and it answered me smartly. That made me more interested in science and I decided to work harder on it.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. My family went to the Happy Farm, a good place to have a day out. And we had a great time there. When we arrived there, we helped the farmers water the plants. The plants looked so happy after getting fresh water. I also picked some red and juicy strawberries with my sister. They were so sweet and delicious. Dad told us about how the vegetables and fruits go from the fields to our tables. Mum shot videos of our activities to record all the wonderful moments.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. My parents took my sister and me to the science museum in the city centre and had a wonderful day there. There was a space exhibition. We could go inside some special rooms like parts of a space station and see how astronauts live and work. That was amazing! We also saw robots there. I asked a robot some questions and it answered me smartly. That made me more interested in science and I decided to work harder on it.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以张华的身份给英国笔友Jane写一封邮件，分享家庭周末活动，需从给定行程中选其一，包含所有要点，词数80左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 明确邮件格式，使用合适的称呼、问候语及结尾；2. 选定行程（如Happy Farm），梳理该行程的所有要点（浇植物、摘草莓、爸爸讲解蔬果流程、妈妈拍视频）；3. 用一般过去时组织语言，使内容连贯自然，符合邮件的亲切语气；4. 结尾询问对方家庭旅行情况，完成交际目的，同时控制词数，避免出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头：沿用已给的“Dear Jane,”，用“Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend.”引出分享主题；2. 主体部分：围绕选定的Happy Farm行程，依次描述：到达后帮农民浇水植物，和姐姐摘草莓（描述草莓的特点），爸爸讲解蔬果从田间到餐桌的过程，妈妈拍摄活动视频记录瞬间；3. 结尾：询问Jane的家庭旅行情况，用“Please write to me soon.”收尾，署名“Yours, Zhang Hua”；4. 检查：确保包含所有要点，词数约80，无真实信息，时态正确，语言通顺。
【答案】
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. My family went to the Happy Farm, a good place to have a day out. And we had a great time there. When we arrived there, we helped the farmers water the plants. The plants looked so happy after getting fresh water. I also picked some red and juicy strawberries with my sister. They were so sweet and delicious. Dad told us about how the vegetables and fruits go from the fields to our tables. Mum shot videos of our activities to record all the wonderful moments.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般过去时运用、要点整合写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合给定信息完成邮件写作，贴近学生生活场景，需掌握邮件格式、时态运用及要点整合能力，难度适中，能有效考察学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以张华的身份给英国笔友Jane写一封邮件，分享家庭周末活动，需从给定行程中选其一，包含所有要点，词数80左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 明确邮件格式，使用合适的称呼、问候语及结尾；2. 选定行程（如Happy Farm），梳理该行程的所有要点（浇植物、摘草莓、爸爸讲解蔬果流程、妈妈拍视频）；3. 用一般过去时组织语言，使内容连贯自然，符合邮件的亲切语气；4. 结尾询问对方家庭旅行情况，完成交际目的，同时控制词数，避免出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头：沿用已给的“Dear Jane,”，用“Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend.”引出分享主题；2. 主体部分：围绕选定的Happy Farm行程，依次描述：到达后帮农民浇水植物，和姐姐摘草莓（描述草莓的特点），爸爸讲解蔬果从田间到餐桌的过程，妈妈拍摄活动视频记录瞬间；3. 结尾：询问Jane的家庭旅行情况，用“Please write to me soon.”收尾，署名“Yours, Zhang Hua”；4. 检查：确保包含所有要点，词数约80，无真实信息，时态正确，语言通顺。
【答案】
Dear Jane,
Happy to share with you what my family did last weekend. My family went to the Happy Farm, a good place to have a day out. And we had a great time there. When we arrived there, we helped the farmers water the plants. The plants looked so happy after getting fresh water. I also picked some red and juicy strawberries with my sister. They were so sweet and delicious. Dad told us about how the vegetables and fruits go from the fields to our tables. Mum shot videos of our activities to record all the wonderful moments.
What is your family trip like? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、一般过去时运用、要点整合写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合给定信息完成邮件写作，贴近学生生活场景，需掌握邮件格式、时态运用及要点整合能力，难度适中，能有效考察学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
