写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D4
在生活中，总会有一个人、一个物件或者一件事曾带给我们幸福和快乐。假如你校英语周报发起“_______ Brought Me Happiness”为题，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：1）What/Who brought you happiness?
2）Share your story or experience about it.
3）Why was it special to you?
写作要求：1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；2）词数80左右。
_______ Brought Me Happiness
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Unit 1 主题写作专项
基础版范文
A Kite Brought Me Happiness
I once got a kite from my mom. The kite brought me happiness. Let me share the story about this kite with you.
When I was little, my mom was busy and I always felt lonely. One day, she came home with a kite. I found my favourite cartoon on the kite. We went to the park and flew the kite there. I had so much fun! On our way home, my mom said she was sorry for not spending more time staying with me. She hoped that the kite could remind me of our fun time.
From then on, when I see the kite, I have a feeling of happiness.
进阶版范文
A Kite Brought Me Happiness
A kite from my mom is the most valuable gift I have ever received. The kite brought me happiness. Let me share the story of the kite with you.
When I was little, Mom was too busy to spend more time with me. As a result, I always felt lonely when I stayed at home alone. One day, she came home with a kite with my favourite cartoon on it. We went to the park and flew the kite there. I was very excited and happy when I saw the kite flying higher and higher. I had so much fun! On our way home, my mom said she was sorry for making me feel left out. She hoped that the kite could remind me of our fun time.
From then on, every time I saw the kite, I had a feeling of happiness.

【分析】
本题为英语半命题写作题，需先补全题目，再围绕“带来幸福的人/物/事”展开写作。解题思路：1. 补全题目，确定核心写作对象（如参考答案选“A Kite”）；2. 紧扣写作要点：明确带来幸福的对象、分享相关故事、说明其特别之处；3. 遵循写作要求：不出现真实信息、控制词数（80左右），保证语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
1. 补全题目为“A Kite Brought Me Happiness”；
2. 开篇点明核心：风筝是妈妈给的礼物，带来幸福；
3. 讲述故事：小时候妈妈忙碌，自己孤单，妈妈带回印有喜欢卡通的风筝，一起去公园放风筝，收获快乐；
4. 说明特别之处：妈妈借风筝表达歉意，希望用它留存美好时光，每次看到风筝都能感受到幸福；
5. 控制词数，避免真实信息，确保语句符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
A Kite Brought Me Happiness
I once got a kite from my mom. The kite brought me happiness. Let me share the story about this kite with you.
When I was little, my mom was busy and I always felt lonely. One day, she came home with a kite. I found my favourite cartoon on the kite. We went to the park and flew the kite there. I had so much fun! On our way home, my mom said she was sorry for not spending more time staying with me. She hoped that the kite could remind me of our fun time.
From then on, when I see the kite, I have a feeling of happiness.
【知识点】
英语半命题写作、记叙文写作、情感主题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语叙事能力与情感表达能力，要求结合要点清晰完成写作，既需掌握基本的英语句式结构，又要合理组织故事内容，符合初中英语写作的考查方向，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5