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51. 中国梦牵引航天梦，航天梦助推中国梦。为了更好地追求航天梦，我国专门将每年的4月24日定为中国航天日(Space Day of China)，就是为了纪念中国航天事业的卓越成就，不断发扬中国航天精神。假如你也有一个航天梦，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你的梦想。
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;(2)不得出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名;(3)词数:80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Do you have a space dream? I have one.
I am sure that I can make my dream come true!
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;(2)不得出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名;(3)词数:80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Do you have a space dream? I have one.
I am sure that I can make my dream come true!
答案
One possible version:
Do you have a space dream? I have one.My dream is to be an astronaut.
I'm very interested in everything in space.When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it.The space is full of things unknown to us and I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future.
Space travel can't be easy,so I must work hard to prepare myself.To begin with, I will keep exercising to build a strong body.What's more, I will read more books about space.
I am sure that I can make my dream come true!
Do you have a space dream? I have one.My dream is to be an astronaut.
I'm very interested in everything in space.When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it.The space is full of things unknown to us and I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future.
Space travel can't be easy,so I must work hard to prepare myself.To begin with, I will keep exercising to build a strong body.What's more, I will read more books about space.
I am sure that I can make my dream come true!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：根据给定的思维导图（航天梦简述、梦想成因、努力方向），结合已给出的开头结尾，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，不得出现真实信息。解题思路为：1. 对应思维导图“航天梦简述”，点明梦想是成为宇航员；2. 对应“为何有这个梦想”，在“对太空感兴趣”基础上拓展，补充空闲时喜欢阅读太空相关书籍、观看相关影视，希望未来帮助人们了解更多太空未知；3. 对应“将如何为梦想努力”，在“多做运动”基础上补充“多阅读太空相关书籍”，让内容充实，同时衔接开头结尾，确保结构完整。
【解析】
按照思维导图的三个模块组织内容：1. 简述梦想：My dream is to be an astronaut.；2. 说明梦想成因：I'm very interested in everything in space. When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it. The space is full of things unknown to us and I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future.；3. 说明努力方向：Space travel can't be easy, so I must work hard to prepare myself. To begin with, I will keep exercising to build a strong body. What's more, I will read more books about space. 内容紧扣要求，词数符合要求，语言准确。
【答案】
One possible version:
Do you have a space dream? I have one.
My dream is to be an astronaut.
I'm very interested in everything in space. When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it. The space is full of things unknown to us and I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future.
Space travel can't be easy, so I must work hard to prepare myself. To begin with, I will keep exercising to build a strong body. What's more, I will read more books about space.
I am sure that I can make my dream come true!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、信息整合
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，严格遵循思维导图的三个部分展开，内容适当拓展，符合词数要求，语言准确流畅，是一篇符合要求的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：根据给定的思维导图（航天梦简述、梦想成因、努力方向），结合已给出的开头结尾，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，不得出现真实信息。解题思路为：1. 对应思维导图“航天梦简述”，点明梦想是成为宇航员；2. 对应“为何有这个梦想”，在“对太空感兴趣”基础上拓展，补充空闲时喜欢阅读太空相关书籍、观看相关影视，希望未来帮助人们了解更多太空未知；3. 对应“将如何为梦想努力”，在“多做运动”基础上补充“多阅读太空相关书籍”，让内容充实，同时衔接开头结尾，确保结构完整。
【解析】
按照思维导图的三个模块组织内容：1. 简述梦想：My dream is to be an astronaut.；2. 说明梦想成因：I'm very interested in everything in space. When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it. The space is full of things unknown to us and I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future.；3. 说明努力方向：Space travel can't be easy, so I must work hard to prepare myself. To begin with, I will keep exercising to build a strong body. What's more, I will read more books about space. 内容紧扣要求，词数符合要求，语言准确。
【答案】
One possible version:
Do you have a space dream? I have one.
My dream is to be an astronaut.
I'm very interested in everything in space. When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it. The space is full of things unknown to us and I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future.
Space travel can't be easy, so I must work hard to prepare myself. To begin with, I will keep exercising to build a strong body. What's more, I will read more books about space.
I am sure that I can make my dream come true!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、信息整合
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，严格遵循思维导图的三个部分展开，内容适当拓展，符合词数要求，语言准确流畅，是一篇符合要求的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
