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七、书面表达
假如你们学校正在招募学生会主席,请你根据下图提示,从以下几个方面简单介绍你心目
中的最佳人选,并写一篇不少于90词的推荐信。
Dear all,
I'd like to recommend
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
61
假如你们学校正在招募学生会主席,请你根据下图提示,从以下几个方面简单介绍你心目
中的最佳人选,并写一篇不少于90词的推荐信。
Dear all,
I'd like to recommend
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
61
答案
Dear all,
I'd like to recommend Zhang Li as the chairperson of the Students' Union.
Zhang Li studies very hard and she has gone far beyond all her classmates in study. She
is very modest and never shows off before others. She is also creative. She often comes up
with good ideas. She is so helpful that she always helps the classmates with their
schoolwork. Last week, I failed the Maths exam and felt very sad. She advised me to
achieve a balance between schoolwork and rest and encouraged me not to give up easily.
I think Zhang Li has all the qualities to be the chairperson and she will be a good
leader.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
I'd like to recommend Zhang Li as the chairperson of the Students' Union.
Zhang Li studies very hard and she has gone far beyond all her classmates in study. She
is very modest and never shows off before others. She is also creative. She often comes up
with good ideas. She is so helpful that she always helps the classmates with their
schoolwork. Last week, I failed the Maths exam and felt very sad. She advised me to
achieve a balance between schoolwork and rest and encouraged me not to give up easily.
I think Zhang Li has all the qualities to be the chairperson and she will be a good
leader.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
解析
【分析】
首先，这是一篇学生会主席推荐信的书面表达，需紧扣图示的三个核心部分展开：
1. 第一步：开篇明确推荐人选，直接点明写作目的，让读者清晰了解核心内容。
2. 第二步：介绍候选人的学习情况与性格特点，要选取贴合学生会主席特质的品质，比如学习优异、谦虚、有创造力、乐于助人等，为后续推荐做铺垫。
3. 第三步：选取一个具体事例来体现最打动你的点，比如同学考试失利时的帮助，用真实的小事增强说服力，避免空泛描述。
4. 第四步：总结推荐理由，结合前文的介绍和事例，说明候选人具备学生会主席的必备素质，收尾呼应主题。
【解析】
1. 开头：开门见山，用“I'd like to recommend...as the chairperson of the Students' Union.”点明推荐对象与职位，符合书信的直接性要求。
2. 人物介绍部分：从学习（studies very hard, gone far beyond classmates）和性格（modest, creative, helpful）两个维度展开，全面展现候选人的优秀特质，为推荐提供依据。
3. 具体事例：选取“上周我数学考试失利，她安慰并给我建议”的小事，用细节化的描述（advised me to achieve a balance...encouraged me not to give up）让人物形象更鲜活，也呼应“Things that impress you most”的要求。
4. 结尾：用“I think Zhang Li has all the qualities to be the chairperson and she will be a good leader.”总结，强化推荐理由，完成书信的收尾。
5. 整体格式：严格遵循书信的格式，开头称呼、正文分段、结尾署名，符合书面表达的规范。
【答案】
Dear all,
I'd like to recommend Zhang Li as the chairperson of the Students' Union.
Zhang Li studies very hard and she has gone far beyond all her classmates in study. She is very modest and never shows off before others. She is also creative. She often comes up with good ideas. She is so helpful that she always helps the classmates with their schoolwork. Last week, I failed the Maths exam and felt very sad. She advised me to achieve a balance between schoolwork and rest and encouraged me not to give up easily.
I think Zhang Li has all the qualities to be the chairperson and she will be a good leader.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
【知识点】
推荐信写作、人物品质描述、书信格式规范
【点评】
本文结构清晰，完全贴合题目给出的写作框架，从人物介绍、具体事例到推荐理由层层递进，用真实的小事增强了内容的说服力；语言表达流畅，词汇和句式丰富，符合初中书面表达的要求；严格遵循书信格式，是一篇优秀的推荐信范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，这是一篇学生会主席推荐信的书面表达，需紧扣图示的三个核心部分展开：
1. 第一步：开篇明确推荐人选，直接点明写作目的，让读者清晰了解核心内容。
2. 第二步：介绍候选人的学习情况与性格特点，要选取贴合学生会主席特质的品质，比如学习优异、谦虚、有创造力、乐于助人等，为后续推荐做铺垫。
3. 第三步：选取一个具体事例来体现最打动你的点，比如同学考试失利时的帮助，用真实的小事增强说服力，避免空泛描述。
4. 第四步：总结推荐理由，结合前文的介绍和事例，说明候选人具备学生会主席的必备素质，收尾呼应主题。
【解析】
1. 开头：开门见山，用“I'd like to recommend...as the chairperson of the Students' Union.”点明推荐对象与职位，符合书信的直接性要求。
2. 人物介绍部分：从学习（studies very hard, gone far beyond classmates）和性格（modest, creative, helpful）两个维度展开，全面展现候选人的优秀特质，为推荐提供依据。
3. 具体事例：选取“上周我数学考试失利，她安慰并给我建议”的小事，用细节化的描述（advised me to achieve a balance...encouraged me not to give up）让人物形象更鲜活，也呼应“Things that impress you most”的要求。
4. 结尾：用“I think Zhang Li has all the qualities to be the chairperson and she will be a good leader.”总结，强化推荐理由，完成书信的收尾。
5. 整体格式：严格遵循书信的格式，开头称呼、正文分段、结尾署名，符合书面表达的规范。
【答案】
Dear all,
I'd like to recommend Zhang Li as the chairperson of the Students' Union.
Zhang Li studies very hard and she has gone far beyond all her classmates in study. She is very modest and never shows off before others. She is also creative. She often comes up with good ideas. She is so helpful that she always helps the classmates with their schoolwork. Last week, I failed the Maths exam and felt very sad. She advised me to achieve a balance between schoolwork and rest and encouraged me not to give up easily.
I think Zhang Li has all the qualities to be the chairperson and she will be a good leader.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
【知识点】
推荐信写作、人物品质描述、书信格式规范
【点评】
本文结构清晰，完全贴合题目给出的写作框架，从人物介绍、具体事例到推荐理由层层递进，用真实的小事增强了内容的说服力；语言表达流畅，词汇和句式丰富，符合初中书面表达的要求；严格遵循书信格式，是一篇优秀的推荐信范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
