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假如你是李华，你校英语角正在举行以“防震减灾，守护生命”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，写一篇英文短文投稿，谈谈我们应该如何在地震中进行自我保护。
要求:①参考提示内容，可适当发挥。②语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。③文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)。④词数:不少于80词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
How to Protect Ourselves in An Earthquake
Earthquakes are very terrible. It is very important for us to know some ways to protect ourselves from the earthquakes.
假如你是李华，你校英语角正在举行以“防震减灾，守护生命”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，写一篇英文短文投稿，谈谈我们应该如何在地震中进行自我保护。
要求:①参考提示内容，可适当发挥。②语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。③文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)。④词数:不少于80词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
How to Protect Ourselves in An Earthquake
Earthquakes are very terrible. It is very important for us to know some ways to protect ourselves from the earthquakes.
答案
If you are inside when the earthquake happens, you should stay away from windows and heavy furniture. You can hide under a strong desk to protect your head. You mustn't jump from high buildings, or you will get hurt easily. And you can never take a lift to go downstairs, because the lift may stop working and trap you.
If you are outside, you should move to the clear open areas quickly. You need to keep away from tall buildings, as falling objects from them are very dangerous. You shouldn't stand under the trees either.
It's necessary for us to learn all these rules well, so that we can protect ourselves better when an earthquake comes.
If you are outside, you should move to the clear open areas quickly. You need to keep away from tall buildings, as falling objects from them are very dangerous. You shouldn't stand under the trees either.
It's necessary for us to learn all these rules well, so that we can protect ourselves better when an earthquake comes.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇话题类书面表达，要求围绕“地震中自我保护”主题写作，需结合给定表格提示内容。解题思路为：先承接已提供的开头，分室内、室外两种场景，对应表格中“should（应做）”和“shouldn't（不应做）”的内容，适当补充合理细节（如室内躲坚固桌下护头），最后总结学习防震规则的重要性，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，满足词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头后，先写室内防震措施：对应表格“should”项，说明要远离窗户和重家具，补充合理做法（躲在坚固桌子下保护头部）；对应表格“shouldn't”项，说明不能从高楼跳下、不能乘电梯，简单说明原因（易受伤、电梯可能故障被困）。2. 再写室外防震措施：对应表格“should”项，说明要快速移到空旷区域、远离高楼；对应表格“shouldn't”项，说明不能站在树下。3. 最后总结，强调学习这些防震规则的必要性，确保全文连贯，词数达标，无真实信息。
【答案】
If you are inside when the earthquake happens, you should stay away from windows and heavy furniture. You can hide under a strong desk to protect your head. You mustn't jump from high buildings, or you will get hurt easily. And you can never take a lift to go downstairs, because the lift may stop working and trap you.
If you are outside, you should move to the clear open areas quickly. You need to keep away from tall buildings, as falling objects from them are very dangerous. You shouldn't stand under the trees either.
It's necessary for us to learn all these rules well, so that we can protect ourselves better when an earthquake comes.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、实用话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结合表格提示分室内外场景清晰阐述防震方法，补充合理细节使内容充实，语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合写作要求，有效传达了防震自我保护的知识。
【难度系数】
0.3
这是一篇话题类书面表达，要求围绕“地震中自我保护”主题写作，需结合给定表格提示内容。解题思路为：先承接已提供的开头，分室内、室外两种场景，对应表格中“should（应做）”和“shouldn't（不应做）”的内容，适当补充合理细节（如室内躲坚固桌下护头），最后总结学习防震规则的重要性，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，满足词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头后，先写室内防震措施：对应表格“should”项，说明要远离窗户和重家具，补充合理做法（躲在坚固桌子下保护头部）；对应表格“shouldn't”项，说明不能从高楼跳下、不能乘电梯，简单说明原因（易受伤、电梯可能故障被困）。2. 再写室外防震措施：对应表格“should”项，说明要快速移到空旷区域、远离高楼；对应表格“shouldn't”项，说明不能站在树下。3. 最后总结，强调学习这些防震规则的必要性，确保全文连贯，词数达标，无真实信息。
【答案】
If you are inside when the earthquake happens, you should stay away from windows and heavy furniture. You can hide under a strong desk to protect your head. You mustn't jump from high buildings, or you will get hurt easily. And you can never take a lift to go downstairs, because the lift may stop working and trap you.
If you are outside, you should move to the clear open areas quickly. You need to keep away from tall buildings, as falling objects from them are very dangerous. You shouldn't stand under the trees either.
It's necessary for us to learn all these rules well, so that we can protect ourselves better when an earthquake comes.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、实用话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结合表格提示分室内外场景清晰阐述防震方法，补充合理细节使内容充实，语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合写作要求，有效传达了防震自我保护的知识。
【难度系数】
0.3
