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假如你叫李华，请你根据下面的要点，以“My Family”为题，写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一下你的家庭。
要点：
1.介绍自己(姓名、年龄、爱好……)及家人(职业、爱好、活动……)；
2.讲述和家人经常一起做的事情；
3.表达你对家庭的热爱和感受。
要求：
1.文中须包含所有的要点，可以适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不少于80词。
书写区域 Good writing makes your article better.
My Family
（请把作文写到自己的练习本上吧！）
假如你叫李华，请你根据下面的要点，以“My Family”为题，写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一下你的家庭。
要点：
1.介绍自己(姓名、年龄、爱好……)及家人(职业、爱好、活动……)；
2.讲述和家人经常一起做的事情；
3.表达你对家庭的热爱和感受。
要求：
1.文中须包含所有的要点，可以适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不少于80词。
书写区域 Good writing makes your article better.
My Family
（请把作文写到自己的练习本上吧！）
答案
写作指导与评价
[图1 第1题图]
One possible version:
My Family
My name is Li Hua. I am 14 years old and I enjoy reading and playing basketball. There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister and me.
My father is a doctor. He likes cooking delicious meals for us. My mother is a teacher. She often helps me with my homework. My sister is 8 years old and she loves dancing.
We often watch movies together on weekends. Sometimes we go to the park for a picnic. I feel very happy because my family is warm and loving. I love my family very much.
[图1 第1题图]
One possible version:
My Family
My name is Li Hua. I am 14 years old and I enjoy reading and playing basketball. There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister and me.
My father is a doctor. He likes cooking delicious meals for us. My mother is a teacher. She often helps me with my homework. My sister is 8 years old and she loves dancing.
We often watch movies together on weekends. Sometimes we go to the park for a picnic. I feel very happy because my family is warm and loving. I love my family very much.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语话题写作题，要求以“My Family”为题介绍家庭，需先明确写作要点：1. 介绍自身及家人的基本信息（姓名、年龄、职业、爱好）；2. 描述和家人的共同活动；3. 表达对家庭的热爱。写作时需采用第一人称、一般现在时，结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，适当发挥，同时满足字数和信息真实性要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇：点明主题，介绍自己的姓名、年龄、爱好，以及家庭总人数和成员构成；
2. 主体：分别描述父母、妹妹的职业、爱好，补充具体细节（如爸爸做饭、妈妈辅导作业、妹妹跳舞）；
3. 中间段：列举和家人的共同活动（如周末看电影、野餐）；
4. 结尾：抒发对家庭的热爱与温暖的感受，确保内容连贯，字数达标。
【答案】
My Family
My name is Li Hua. I am 14 years old and I enjoy reading and playing basketball. There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister and me.
My father is a doctor. He likes cooking delicious meals for us. My mother is a teacher. She often helps me with my homework. My sister is 8 years old and she loves dancing.
We often watch movies together on weekends. Sometimes we go to the park for a picnic. I feel very happy because my family is warm and loving. I love my family very much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、家庭话题写作
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础话题写作题，考查学生整合信息、运用英语表达个人情况及情感的能力，要求覆盖所有要点并适当拓展，符合基础阶段写作的考查方向，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题是英语话题写作题，要求以“My Family”为题介绍家庭，需先明确写作要点：1. 介绍自身及家人的基本信息（姓名、年龄、职业、爱好）；2. 描述和家人的共同活动；3. 表达对家庭的热爱。写作时需采用第一人称、一般现在时，结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，适当发挥，同时满足字数和信息真实性要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇：点明主题，介绍自己的姓名、年龄、爱好，以及家庭总人数和成员构成；
2. 主体：分别描述父母、妹妹的职业、爱好，补充具体细节（如爸爸做饭、妈妈辅导作业、妹妹跳舞）；
3. 中间段：列举和家人的共同活动（如周末看电影、野餐）；
4. 结尾：抒发对家庭的热爱与温暖的感受，确保内容连贯，字数达标。
【答案】
My Family
My name is Li Hua. I am 14 years old and I enjoy reading and playing basketball. There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister and me.
My father is a doctor. He likes cooking delicious meals for us. My mother is a teacher. She often helps me with my homework. My sister is 8 years old and she loves dancing.
We often watch movies together on weekends. Sometimes we go to the park for a picnic. I feel very happy because my family is warm and loving. I love my family very much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、家庭话题写作
【点评】
本题为初中英语基础话题写作题，考查学生整合信息、运用英语表达个人情况及情感的能力，要求覆盖所有要点并适当拓展，符合基础阶段写作的考查方向，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.7
