写作目标
本单元的写作话题是“家庭关系”，属于新课标“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群，涉及的子主题有“和谐家庭与社区生活”。常见的写作任务是介绍家人，描述家庭成员之间发生的事情，体现家人之间的爱和相互支持，并能表达对家人的情感，对家庭意义的认识。
素材积累
[短语]
1. 做饭
2. 长大
3. 互相，彼此
4. 解决问题
5. 在……的帮助下
6. 缺席
7. 感到孤独
8. ……的记忆
[句型]
＞＞ 开头句
1. The photo reminds me of my grandfather.
这张照片使我想起了我的爷爷。
2. I want to show my thanks to my mother.
我想向我的妈妈表达我的感谢。
＞＞ 中间句
1. With the help of my parents, I solved the problem quickly.
在我父母的帮助下，我很快解决了那个问题。
2. When I'm sick, you always look after me carefully.
当我生病的时候，你总是细心照顾我。
＞＞ 结尾句
1. I hope you are healthy and happy all the time.
我希望你一直健康、快乐。
2. I love my family because it is full of love and happiness.
我爱我的家，因为它充满了爱和幸福。
作48 全品学练考 英语 七年级上册 外研版

1. cook meals
2. grow up
3. each other
4. solve problems
5. with the help of…
6. be absent from
7. feel lonely
8. the memory of…

【分析】本题是英语短语汉译英的基础积累题，需结合七年级上册外研版的常用固定搭配，准确对应每个中文短语的英文表达，注意短语的正确形式，比如动词短语的搭配、介词的使用等。
【解析】根据七年级英语常用固定搭配，逐一对应翻译：1. 做饭对应cook meals；2. 长大对应grow up；3. 互相，彼此对应each other；4. 解决问题对应solve problems；5. 在……的帮助下对应with the help of…；6. 缺席对应be absent from；7. 感到孤独对应feel lonely；8. ……的记忆对应the memory of…
【答案】1. cook meals
2. grow up
3. each other
4. solve problems
5. with the help of…
6. be absent from
7. feel lonely
8. the memory of…
【知识点】英语固定短语、汉译英
【点评】本题是单元写作话题“家庭关系”的素材积累，核心是掌握常用英语短语，为写作打基础，属于基础知识点积累，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.7

典例探究
母爱情深,母爱无价;学会感恩,学会回报。某英语网站正在举办以“My Mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图,写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍你的母亲和你的真情故事。

提示:短文应包括导图中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明。
My Mother


[审题指导]
1. 体裁:记叙文;人称:第一人称和第三人称;时态:一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。
2. 写作要点:①重点介绍母亲的基本信息及母亲为自己做过的事情;②表达自己将来对母亲的回报。
[谋篇布局]

[润色成篇]
初级范文 高分范文
My Mother My Mother
My mother is 41 years old. She is not very tall with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. ①She can cook delicious food. My mother is 41 years old. She is not very tall with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. ①. (使用 be good at doing sth 升格)
She did a lot for me when I was a child. She didn't have much money. However, ②when I needed anything for my study, she would buy it for me. She took me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She did a lot for me when I was a child. She didn't have much money. However, ②she would buy anything that I needed for my study. She took me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.
When I grow up, I will try my best to make mnother happy. I'll save money to buy beautiful clothes for my mother. I'll take her to some famous cities all over China. Most importantly, I think ③staying with her is very important when I have free time. When I grow up, I will try my best to make my mother happy. I'll save money to buy beautiful clothes for my mother. I'll take her to some famous cities all over China. Most importantly, I think ③ when I have free time. (使用“It is+adj. +to do sth. ”句型升格)
名师指导:
一、高分范文中,①使用 be good at doing sth 升格,避免了句式单一;②使用 that 引导的关系从句升格,显示了作者深厚的英语功底;③使用“It is+adj. +to do sth. ”句型升格,丰富了文章的句式,同时表达了作者对母亲深深的爱。
二、两篇范文都正确使用了一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时介绍母亲的年龄、职业、外貌、能力和爱好,同时讲述了母亲对自己的辛苦付出,文章条理清晰,包含了所有的要点。

①is good at cooking delicious food
③it is very important to stay with her

【分析】本题为英语写作的句式升格题，需按照要求用指定句型替换原句，提升表达的丰富性。①处原句表达“她会做美味的食物”，要求使用be good at doing sth结构；③处原句是动名词作主语的句子，要求转换为“It is+adj. +to do sth.”句型，只需对应调整结构即可完成升格。
【解析】①处，主语为第三人称单数she，be good at后接动名词，cook的动名词形式为cooking，故填is good at cooking delicious food；③处，将动名词短语staying with her转换为不定式短语to stay with her作真正主语，用it作形式主语，符合要求，故填it is very important to stay with her。
【答案】①is good at cooking delicious food；③it is very important to stay with her
【知识点】英语写作、固定句型运用
【点评】本题考查英语写作中句式升格的技巧，要求运用指定固定句型优化表达，提升文章的句式多样性，侧重对基础句型的灵活运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5