九、书面表达。(共5分)
每个人的心中都有一颗梦想的种子。梦想是每个人前进的方向,你的梦想是什么?请以
"My dream"为题,写一篇小短文。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,标点正确,书写规范;
2. 不少于5句话(不包括已给出的句子)。
My dream
Everyone has a dream. Now I'm going to tell you about my dream.
每个人的心中都有一颗梦想的种子。梦想是每个人前进的方向,你的梦想是什么?请以
"My dream"为题,写一篇小短文。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,标点正确,书写规范;
2. 不少于5句话(不包括已给出的句子)。
My dream
Everyone has a dream. Now I'm going to tell you about my dream.
I want to be a teacher in the future.
I like children and I enjoy helping others.
I will study hard to make my dream come true.
I hope to teach English and make learning fun for my students.
I believe if I work hard, my dream will come true one day.
答案
One possible version:
My dream
Everyone has a dream. Now I'm going to
tell you about my dream.
I want to be a teacher in the future. I like
children and I enjoy helping others. I will study
hard to make my dream come true. I hope to
teach English and make learning fun for my
students. I believe if I work hard, my dream
will come true one day.
My dream
Everyone has a dream. Now I'm going to
tell you about my dream.
I want to be a teacher in the future. I like
children and I enjoy helping others. I will study
hard to make my dream come true. I hope to
teach English and make learning fun for my
students. I believe if I work hard, my dream
will come true one day.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题书面表达,要求以“My dream”为题,结合给出的开头续写短文。解题思路:1. 承接开头,明确自己的梦想职业;2. 说明选择该梦想的原因;3. 阐述实现梦想的具体行动;4. 表达对梦想实现的期望,确保语句通顺、不少于5句,符合书写规范。
【解析】承接开头后,先点明梦想为成为教师,再说明喜欢孩子、乐于助人的原因,接着提出努力学习的行动,最后表达梦想实现的期望,具体内容如下:I want to be a teacher in the future. I like children and I enjoy helping others. I will study hard to make my dream come true. I hope to teach English and make learning fun for my students. I believe if I work hard, my dream will come true one day.
【答案】My dream
Everyone has a dream. Now I'm going to tell you about my dream.
I want to be a teacher in the future. I like children and I enjoy helping others. I will study hard to make my dream come true. I hope to teach English and make learning fun for my students. I believe if I work hard, my dream will come true one day.
【知识点】英语话题写作、梦想主题表达
【点评】本题为初中英语常见的基础书面表达题,围绕“梦想”话题考查学生组织语句、连贯表达观点的能力,要求紧扣主题、符合格式,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】承接开头后,先点明梦想为成为教师,再说明喜欢孩子、乐于助人的原因,接着提出努力学习的行动,最后表达梦想实现的期望,具体内容如下:I want to be a teacher in the future. I like children and I enjoy helping others. I will study hard to make my dream come true. I hope to teach English and make learning fun for my students. I believe if I work hard, my dream will come true one day.
【答案】My dream
Everyone has a dream. Now I'm going to tell you about my dream.
I want to be a teacher in the future. I like children and I enjoy helping others. I will study hard to make my dream come true. I hope to teach English and make learning fun for my students. I believe if I work hard, my dream will come true one day.
【知识点】英语话题写作、梦想主题表达
【点评】本题为初中英语常见的基础书面表达题,围绕“梦想”话题考查学生组织语句、连贯表达观点的能力,要求紧扣主题、符合格式,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
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