【写作导引】
本单元以“拥抱新生活”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“学习活动”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①谈论初中的回忆;②反思你的学校生活与学习;③分享对未来的计划与希望;④发表毕业演讲;⑤探索毕业的意义。
【写作任务】
假如你是李华,你即将毕业,学校向全体毕业生征集主题为“情系同窗·致敬青春”的毕业班会创意方案,请你根据下面的提示和要求,写一篇文章参加。
方案要求包含三个方面:
1.2个互动活动;2.活动的意义;3.个人青春感悟。
要求:1.词数80-100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当增加细节使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear classmates,
To celebrate our youth and memories, here’s my plan for the graduation party.
I hope our graduation party will be a great success.
本单元以“拥抱新生活”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“学习活动”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①谈论初中的回忆;②反思你的学校生活与学习;③分享对未来的计划与希望;④发表毕业演讲;⑤探索毕业的意义。
【写作任务】
假如你是李华,你即将毕业,学校向全体毕业生征集主题为“情系同窗·致敬青春”的毕业班会创意方案,请你根据下面的提示和要求,写一篇文章参加。
方案要求包含三个方面:
1.2个互动活动;2.活动的意义;3.个人青春感悟。
要求:1.词数80-100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当增加细节使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear classmates,
To celebrate our youth and memories, here’s my plan for the graduation party.
First, we’ll have a “Memory Sharing” activity. Everyone can share funny or touching stories about our school days. This helps us bear invaluable friendship in mind and deepens our friendship. Second, we’ll have a “Dream-writing” activity. We will write our future dreams on cards and exchange them. It not only shows our best wishes for the future but also encourages us to study harder. These years with you will be the most valuable part of my youth. Although we’ll go on our separate ways, our friendship will last. Let’s meet the future with courage.
I hope our graduation party will be a great success.
答案
1. First, we’ll have a “Memory Sharing” activity. Everyone can share funny or touching stories about our school days. This helps us bear invaluable friendship in mind and deepens our friendship. Second, we’ll have a “Dream-writing” activity. We will write our future dreams on cards and exchange them. It not only shows our best wishes for the future but also encourages us to study harder.
2. These years with you will be the most valuable part of my youth. Although we’ll go on our separate ways, our friendship will last. Let’s meet the future with courage.
亮点词块
① invaluable friendship 珍贵的友谊
② deepens our friendship 加深我们的友谊
③ meet the future with courage 勇敢地迎接未来
高分句子
④ It not only shows our best wishes for the future but also encourages us to study harder.(not only... but also...)
⑤ Although we’ll go on our separate ways, our friendship will last.(Although 引导的让步状语从句)
2. These years with you will be the most valuable part of my youth. Although we’ll go on our separate ways, our friendship will last. Let’s meet the future with courage.
亮点词块
① invaluable friendship 珍贵的友谊
② deepens our friendship 加深我们的友谊
③ meet the future with courage 勇敢地迎接未来
高分句子
④ It not only shows our best wishes for the future but also encourages us to study harder.(not only... but also...)
⑤ Although we’ll go on our separate ways, our friendship will last.(Although 引导的让步状语从句)
解析
【分析】
本题要求撰写“情系同窗·致敬青春”的毕业班会创意方案,属于英语应用文写作。解题思路:首先紧扣毕业主题设计2个贴合校园场景的互动活动,分别说明活动内容与意义;再结合自身经历抒发青春感悟,运用常用句式增强表达效果;需控制词数,不出现真实姓名和学校,确保要点齐全。
【解析】
补充开头与结尾间的内容:First, we’ll have a “Memory Sharing” activity. Everyone can share funny or touching stories about our school days. This helps us bear invaluable friendship in mind and deepens our friendship. Second, we’ll have a “Dream-writing” activity. We will write our future dreams on cards and exchange them. It not only shows our best wishes for the future but also encourages us to study harder. These years with you will be the most valuable part of my youth. Although we’ll go on our separate ways, our friendship will last. Let’s meet the future with courage.
【答案】
First, we’ll have a “Memory Sharing” activity. Everyone can share funny or touching stories about our school days. This helps us bear invaluable friendship in mind and deepens our friendship. Second, we’ll have a “Dream-writing” activity. We will write our future dreams on cards and exchange them. It not only shows our best wishes for the future but also encourages us to study harder. These years with you will be the most valuable part of my youth. Although we’ll go on our separate ways, our friendship will last. Let’s meet the future with courage.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、常用复合句式运用、主题式写作
【点评】
该写作紧扣毕业班会创意方案要求,涵盖2个互动活动及对应意义、个人青春感悟,语言简洁流畅,运用not only...but also等高分句式,符合词数要求,要点齐全,贴合主题。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求撰写“情系同窗·致敬青春”的毕业班会创意方案,属于英语应用文写作。解题思路:首先紧扣毕业主题设计2个贴合校园场景的互动活动,分别说明活动内容与意义;再结合自身经历抒发青春感悟,运用常用句式增强表达效果;需控制词数,不出现真实姓名和学校,确保要点齐全。
【解析】
补充开头与结尾间的内容:First, we’ll have a “Memory Sharing” activity. Everyone can share funny or touching stories about our school days. This helps us bear invaluable friendship in mind and deepens our friendship. Second, we’ll have a “Dream-writing” activity. We will write our future dreams on cards and exchange them. It not only shows our best wishes for the future but also encourages us to study harder. These years with you will be the most valuable part of my youth. Although we’ll go on our separate ways, our friendship will last. Let’s meet the future with courage.
【答案】
First, we’ll have a “Memory Sharing” activity. Everyone can share funny or touching stories about our school days. This helps us bear invaluable friendship in mind and deepens our friendship. Second, we’ll have a “Dream-writing” activity. We will write our future dreams on cards and exchange them. It not only shows our best wishes for the future but also encourages us to study harder. These years with you will be the most valuable part of my youth. Although we’ll go on our separate ways, our friendship will last. Let’s meet the future with courage.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、常用复合句式运用、主题式写作
【点评】
该写作紧扣毕业班会创意方案要求,涵盖2个互动活动及对应意义、个人青春感悟,语言简洁流畅,运用not only...but also等高分句式,符合词数要求,要点齐全,贴合主题。
【难度系数】
0.3
跟踪演练
初中三年校园生活即将结束了。近期你校英文报将举办毕业演讲比赛,请你根据提示和要求写一篇英语毕业演讲稿。
提示: 1. How have you changed since you started junior high school? 2. Who has helped you the most?
3. What will you do after you graduate? 4. What are you looking forward to?
要求: 1. 短文须包含所给提示要点,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,条理清楚,书写规范,词数不少于80;
3. 文中不要出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
初中三年校园生活即将结束了。近期你校英文报将举办毕业演讲比赛,请你根据提示和要求写一篇英语毕业演讲稿。
提示: 1. How have you changed since you started junior high school? 2. Who has helped you the most?
3. What will you do after you graduate? 4. What are you looking forward to?
要求: 1. 短文须包含所给提示要点,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,条理清楚,书写规范,词数不少于80;
3. 文中不要出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! As junior high school life comes to an end, I'm honored to stand here and share my growth with you.
Looking back, I have changed a lot. I have become more confident, responsible, and independent. I've also improved my learning skills and made many good friends. Among all the people who helped me, my English teacher has helped me the most. She always encouraged me when I had difficulties and gave me great advice on both study and life. I'm really thankful for her support.
After I graduate, I will work even harder in senior high school. I know the road ahead may be challenging, but I'm ready for it. I will keep chasing my dreams. I'm looking forward to meeting new classmates, learning new things, and becoming a better person. Junior high school is just the beginning, and I'm excited about what's next.
Thank you!
Good morning! As junior high school life comes to an end, I'm honored to stand here and share my growth with you.
Looking back, I have changed a lot. I have become more confident, responsible, and independent. I've also improved my learning skills and made many good friends. Among all the people who helped me, my English teacher has helped me the most. She always encouraged me when I had difficulties and gave me great advice on both study and life. I'm really thankful for her support.
After I graduate, I will work even harder in senior high school. I know the road ahead may be challenging, but I'm ready for it. I will keep chasing my dreams. I'm looking forward to meeting new classmates, learning new things, and becoming a better person. Junior high school is just the beginning, and I'm excited about what's next.
Thank you!
答案
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! As junior high school life comes to an end, I'm honored to stand here and share my growth with you.
Looking back, I have changed a lot. I have become more confident, responsible, and independent. I've also improved my learning skills and made many good friends. Among all the people who helped me, my English teacher has helped me the most. She always encouraged me when I had difficulties and gave me great advice on both study and life. I'm really thankful for her support.
After I graduate, I will work even harder in senior high school. I know the road ahead may be challenging, but I'm ready for it. I will keep chasing my dreams. I'm looking forward to meeting new classmates, learning new things, and becoming a better person. Junior high school is just the beginning, and I'm excited about what's next.
Thank you!
Good morning! As junior high school life comes to an end, I'm honored to stand here and share my growth with you.
Looking back, I have changed a lot. I have become more confident, responsible, and independent. I've also improved my learning skills and made many good friends. Among all the people who helped me, my English teacher has helped me the most. She always encouraged me when I had difficulties and gave me great advice on both study and life. I'm really thankful for her support.
After I graduate, I will work even harder in senior high school. I know the road ahead may be challenging, but I'm ready for it. I will keep chasing my dreams. I'm looking forward to meeting new classmates, learning new things, and becoming a better person. Junior high school is just the beginning, and I'm excited about what's next.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求撰写毕业演讲稿,需遵循演讲稿格式,围绕提示的四个要点展开:1. 梳理初中三年的自身变化(如性格、能力等);2. 明确帮助最多的人并结合事例说明;3. 阐述毕业后的计划;4. 表达对未来的期待。写作时要注意语句通顺,不出现真实信息,词数达标,情感贴合毕业场景。
【解析】
按照演讲稿结构,先问候并点明毕业分享的主题;接着结合提示要点,依次说明初中三年的变化、帮助最多的人及事例、毕业后的学习计划、对未来的期待,最后收尾致谢,确保覆盖所有提示要点,符合初中英语写作规范。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! As junior high school life comes to an end, I'm honored to stand here and share my growth with you.
Looking back, I have changed a lot. I have become more confident, responsible, and independent. I've also improved my learning skills and made many good friends. Among all the people who helped me, my English teacher has helped me the most. She always encouraged me when I had difficulties and gave me great advice on both study and life. I'm really thankful for her support.
After I graduate, I will work even harder in senior high school. I know the road ahead may be challenging, but I'm ready for it. I will keep chasing my dreams. I'm looking forward to meeting new classmates, learning new things, and becoming a better person. Junior high school is just the beginning, and I'm excited about what's next.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、初中英语话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣毕业演讲语境,完整覆盖所有提示要点,情感真挚自然,语言通顺流畅,符合初中英语写作要求,是一篇合格的毕业演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求撰写毕业演讲稿,需遵循演讲稿格式,围绕提示的四个要点展开:1. 梳理初中三年的自身变化(如性格、能力等);2. 明确帮助最多的人并结合事例说明;3. 阐述毕业后的计划;4. 表达对未来的期待。写作时要注意语句通顺,不出现真实信息,词数达标,情感贴合毕业场景。
【解析】
按照演讲稿结构,先问候并点明毕业分享的主题;接着结合提示要点,依次说明初中三年的变化、帮助最多的人及事例、毕业后的学习计划、对未来的期待,最后收尾致谢,确保覆盖所有提示要点,符合初中英语写作规范。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! As junior high school life comes to an end, I'm honored to stand here and share my growth with you.
Looking back, I have changed a lot. I have become more confident, responsible, and independent. I've also improved my learning skills and made many good friends. Among all the people who helped me, my English teacher has helped me the most. She always encouraged me when I had difficulties and gave me great advice on both study and life. I'm really thankful for her support.
After I graduate, I will work even harder in senior high school. I know the road ahead may be challenging, but I'm ready for it. I will keep chasing my dreams. I'm looking forward to meeting new classmates, learning new things, and becoming a better person. Junior high school is just the beginning, and I'm excited about what's next.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、初中英语话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣毕业演讲语境,完整覆盖所有提示要点,情感真挚自然,语言通顺流畅,符合初中英语写作要求,是一篇合格的毕业演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.6
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