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学校英文校刊主编发起主题为“What Does Music Bring to Me?”的征文，你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下表所示的笔记内容，并适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。
要求:1. 文中需包含提示中的3个要点，可适当进行拓展；
2. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写工整规范；
3. 词数100左右。(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)
What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a valuable key, which opens a door to the world for me.
学校英文校刊主编发起主题为“What Does Music Bring to Me?”的征文，你和同学就此进行了讨论。请综合下表所示的笔记内容，并适当拓展，写一篇短文投稿。
要求:1. 文中需包含提示中的3个要点，可适当进行拓展；
2. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写工整规范；
3. 词数100左右。(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)
What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a valuable key, which opens a door to the world for me.
Firstly, music gives me hope and strength. When I feel tired from studying, singing along to my favourite songs always lifts my spirits.
Secondly, music helps me build good relationships. Through joining the school choir, I've made friends with other schoolmates who share the same love for music.
Finally, music opens my eyes to different cultures. Listening to African drumming or French chansons teaches me about traditions across the world.
Music brings people together, young and old. Music is not just sounds—it's a colourful journey that makes my life richer and more meaningful. Hats off to all who create and share it!
答案
Firstly, music gives me hope and strength. When I feel tired from studying, singing along to my favourite songs always lifts my spirits. Secondly, music helps me build good relationships. Through joining the school choir, I've made friends with other schoolmates who share the same love for music. Finally, music opens my eyes to different cultures. Listening to African drumming or French chansons teaches me about traditions across the world.
Music brings people together, young and old. Music is not just sounds—it's a colourful journey that makes my life richer and more meaningful. Hats off to all who create and share it!
Music brings people together, young and old. Music is not just sounds—it's a colourful journey that makes my life richer and more meaningful. Hats off to all who create and share it!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语征文写作题，主题为“What Does Music Bring to Me?”，要求包含表格中的三个核心要点（给希望与力量、建立良好关系、开阔眼界），需适当拓展，衔接已给开头，词数约100词。解题思路：1. 承接开头的比喻，先围绕“音乐给希望和力量”补充具体场景（如学习疲惫时听歌提振精神）；2. 围绕“音乐帮助建立良好关系”补充实际经历（如加入学校合唱团结识同好）；3. 围绕“音乐开阔眼界”补充多元文化相关例子；4. 收尾升华主题，确保语句连贯、要点齐全，符合征文要求。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣三个指定要点，结合合理拓展：1. 针对“音乐给希望和力量”，加入学习疲惫时听喜爱的歌曲提振情绪的细节；2. 针对“音乐帮助建立良好关系”，补充加入学校合唱团结识有共同音乐爱好的朋友的经历；3. 针对“音乐开阔眼界”，补充聆听不同国家音乐了解多元文化的例子；最后总结音乐的意义，使文章结构完整、逻辑连贯，满足词数要求。
【答案】
Firstly, music gives me hope and strength. When I feel tired from studying, singing along to my favourite songs always lifts my spirits. Secondly, music helps me build good relationships. Through joining the school choir, I've made friends with other schoolmates who share the same love for music. Finally, music opens my eyes to different cultures. Listening to African drumming or French chansons teaches me about traditions across the world.
Music brings people together, young and old. Music is not just sounds—it's a colourful journey that makes my life richer and more meaningful. Hats off to all who create and share it!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点拓展写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要求要点，拓展内容贴合实际，语句连贯自然，结构清晰，准确表达了音乐对个人的积极意义，符合征文的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语征文写作题，主题为“What Does Music Bring to Me?”，要求包含表格中的三个核心要点（给希望与力量、建立良好关系、开阔眼界），需适当拓展，衔接已给开头，词数约100词。解题思路：1. 承接开头的比喻，先围绕“音乐给希望和力量”补充具体场景（如学习疲惫时听歌提振精神）；2. 围绕“音乐帮助建立良好关系”补充实际经历（如加入学校合唱团结识同好）；3. 围绕“音乐开阔眼界”补充多元文化相关例子；4. 收尾升华主题，确保语句连贯、要点齐全，符合征文要求。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣三个指定要点，结合合理拓展：1. 针对“音乐给希望和力量”，加入学习疲惫时听喜爱的歌曲提振情绪的细节；2. 针对“音乐帮助建立良好关系”，补充加入学校合唱团结识有共同音乐爱好的朋友的经历；3. 针对“音乐开阔眼界”，补充聆听不同国家音乐了解多元文化的例子；最后总结音乐的意义，使文章结构完整、逻辑连贯，满足词数要求。
【答案】
Firstly, music gives me hope and strength. When I feel tired from studying, singing along to my favourite songs always lifts my spirits. Secondly, music helps me build good relationships. Through joining the school choir, I've made friends with other schoolmates who share the same love for music. Finally, music opens my eyes to different cultures. Listening to African drumming or French chansons teaches me about traditions across the world.
Music brings people together, young and old. Music is not just sounds—it's a colourful journey that makes my life richer and more meaningful. Hats off to all who create and share it!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点拓展写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要求要点，拓展内容贴合实际，语句连贯自然，结构清晰，准确表达了音乐对个人的积极意义，符合征文的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
