六 书面表达。(8分)
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mike 很难过,因为他的父母不给他买喜欢的船模。请你根据以下提示给他写一封信,讲述你攒钱买电子阅读器(e-reader)的经历和感受。不少于60词。


How you feel:
...
Dear Mike,
I can understand your sadness.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mike 很难过,因为他的父母不给他买喜欢的船模。请你根据以下提示给他写一封信,讲述你攒钱买电子阅读器(e-reader)的经历和感受。不少于60词。
How you feel:
...
Dear Mike,
I can understand your sadness.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
示例:
Dear Mike,
I can understand your sadness. I want an e-reader. It's a good tool for reading and easy to carry everywhere. Instead of asking my parents for it, I make a budget first and save all my pocket money for months. I also help my neighbours walk the dog to earn more money. When I finally buy it myself, I feel so proud and happy. You can also try your best to work for it. I'm sure you'll get the model ship soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I can understand your sadness. I want an e-reader. It's a good tool for reading and easy to carry everywhere. Instead of asking my parents for it, I make a budget first and save all my pocket money for months. I also help my neighbours walk the dog to earn more money. When I finally buy it myself, I feel so proud and happy. You can also try your best to work for it. I'm sure you'll get the model ship soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达中的书信写作题,要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Mike写信,核心是分享自己攒钱购买电子阅读器(e-reader)的经历与感受,以此安慰因父母不给买船模而难过的Mike。解题思路:1. 承接给定的开头句,引出自身类似的需求(想要e-reader);2. 说明e-reader的优势;3. 具体讲述攒钱的具体方式;4. 表达买到后的感受;5. 鼓励Mike通过自身努力获得船模,同时要符合书信格式和不少于60词的要求。
【解析】Dear Mike,
I can understand your sadness. I want an e-reader. It's a good tool for reading and easy to carry everywhere. Instead of asking my parents for it, I make a budget first and save all my pocket money for months. I also help my neighbours walk the dog to earn more money. When I finally buy it myself, I feel so proud and happy. You can also try your best to work for it. I'm sure you'll get the model ship soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I can understand your sadness. I want an e-reader. It's a good tool for reading and easy to carry everywhere. Instead of asking my parents for it, I make a budget first and save all my pocket money for months. I also help my neighbours walk the dog to earn more money. When I finally buy it myself, I feel so proud and happy. You can also try your best to work for it. I'm sure you'll get the model ship soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题作文(个人经历分享)
【点评】本题结合学生真实生活场景,考查书信写作的格式规范与内容组织能力,要求分享个人经历并传递鼓励,既贴近学生生活,又能有效锻炼语言表达能力,是常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】Dear Mike,
I can understand your sadness. I want an e-reader. It's a good tool for reading and easy to carry everywhere. Instead of asking my parents for it, I make a budget first and save all my pocket money for months. I also help my neighbours walk the dog to earn more money. When I finally buy it myself, I feel so proud and happy. You can also try your best to work for it. I'm sure you'll get the model ship soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I can understand your sadness. I want an e-reader. It's a good tool for reading and easy to carry everywhere. Instead of asking my parents for it, I make a budget first and save all my pocket money for months. I also help my neighbours walk the dog to earn more money. When I finally buy it myself, I feel so proud and happy. You can also try your best to work for it. I'm sure you'll get the model ship soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题作文(个人经历分享)
【点评】本题结合学生真实生活场景,考查书信写作的格式规范与内容组织能力,要求分享个人经历并传递鼓励,既贴近学生生活,又能有效锻炼语言表达能力,是常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.6
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