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Ⅱ. 书面表达。
动物园里有很多动物，大象Ally就是其中一员。请你参考上题中的短文，帮她写一则自我介绍。
要点提示：
(1)How much does she weigh?
(2)Where does she live?
(3)What food does she like eating?
(4)What can she do?
(5)Why is she so important?
(6)What problems does she face?
要求：
(1)涵盖以上提示内容，语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确；
(2)80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)可适当发挥，但内容要合情合理。
Hello everyone! My name is Ally.
动物园里有很多动物，大象Ally就是其中一员。请你参考上题中的短文，帮她写一则自我介绍。
要点提示：
(1)How much does she weigh?
(2)Where does she live?
(3)What food does she like eating?
(4)What can she do?
(5)Why is she so important?
(6)What problems does she face?
要求：
(1)涵盖以上提示内容，语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确；
(2)80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)可适当发挥，但内容要合情合理。
Hello everyone! My name is Ally.
答案
One possible version:
Hello everyone! My name is Ally. I'm from Africa. I am one of the heaviest animals on land. I weigh up to 5,400 kg. My favourite food is grass, leaves, fruit, and tree barks. Also, I am one of the cleverest animals. One fact is that I can remember things for a long time. Another interesting fact is that I can feel happy and sad like humans. I can not only help people carry heavy things but also work with them.
However, I am in danger because some people kill elephants like me for ivory. Please work together to protect me from being killed!
Hello everyone! My name is Ally. I'm from Africa. I am one of the heaviest animals on land. I weigh up to 5,400 kg. My favourite food is grass, leaves, fruit, and tree barks. Also, I am one of the cleverest animals. One fact is that I can remember things for a long time. Another interesting fact is that I can feel happy and sad like humans. I can not only help people carry heavy things but also work with them.
However, I am in danger because some people kill elephants like me for ivory. Please work together to protect me from being killed!
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以大象Ally的身份完成自我介绍，需覆盖6个要点：体重、居住地、食物、能力、重要性、面临的生存问题。解题思路：1. 沿用给定开头，采用第一人称叙述；2. 逐一对应要点，结合合理常识补充内容；3. 确保语句通顺、语法正确，控制词数在80左右，最后加入保护呼吁，使内容完整。
【解析】首先，开头已给出，接着按要点展开：①说明居住地：I'm from Africa；②介绍体重：I weigh up to 5,400 kg；③说明喜爱的食物：My favourite food is grass, leaves, fruit, and tree barks；④阐述能力：I'm clever, can remember things for a long time, can help people carry heavy things and work with them；⑤点明面临的问题：I'm in danger because people kill me for ivory，最后呼吁保护。整合内容时注意语句连贯，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello everyone! My name is Ally. I'm from Africa. I am one of the heaviest animals on land. I weigh up to 5,400 kg. My favourite food is grass, leaves, fruit, and tree barks. Also, I am one of the cleverest animals. One fact is that I can remember things for a long time. Another interesting fact is that I can feel happy and sad like humans. I can not only help people carry heavy things but also work with them.
However, I am in danger because some people kill elephants like me for ivory. Please work together to protect me from being killed!
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题考查学生整合信息、组织英语语言的能力，要求紧扣要点完成写作，同时渗透保护野生动物的意识，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先，开头已给出，接着按要点展开：①说明居住地：I'm from Africa；②介绍体重：I weigh up to 5,400 kg；③说明喜爱的食物：My favourite food is grass, leaves, fruit, and tree barks；④阐述能力：I'm clever, can remember things for a long time, can help people carry heavy things and work with them；⑤点明面临的问题：I'm in danger because people kill me for ivory，最后呼吁保护。整合内容时注意语句连贯，符合英语表达习惯，控制词数。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello everyone! My name is Ally. I'm from Africa. I am one of the heaviest animals on land. I weigh up to 5,400 kg. My favourite food is grass, leaves, fruit, and tree barks. Also, I am one of the cleverest animals. One fact is that I can remember things for a long time. Another interesting fact is that I can feel happy and sad like humans. I can not only help people carry heavy things but also work with them.
However, I am in danger because some people kill elephants like me for ivory. Please work together to protect me from being killed!
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题考查学生整合信息、组织英语语言的能力，要求紧扣要点完成写作，同时渗透保护野生动物的意识，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.6
