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(2023·泰安中考改编)强国有我!作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人,青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面的提示,以"How to be good students in the new era"为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文,谈谈如何做一名新时代(era)的好学生。
How to be good students in the new era
题中题 234
(2023·泰安中考改编)强国有我!作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人,青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面的提示,以"How to be good students in the new era"为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文,谈谈如何做一名新时代(era)的好学生。
How to be good students in the new era
The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promises and be thankful to people who helped us. We should be friendly to our classmates. Second, we should study hard and be creative. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent.
As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.
题中题 234
答案
VIII. One possible version:
How to be good students in the new era
The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promises and be thankful to people who helped us. We should be friendly to our classmates. Second, we should study hard and be creative. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent.
As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.
思路梳理 审题:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;时态为"一般现在时";学生需要根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。写作步骤:第一步,从品德方面介绍如何成为好学生;第二步,从学业方面介绍如何成为好学生;第三步,从生活方面介绍如何成为好学生。
How to be good students in the new era
The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promises and be thankful to people who helped us. We should be friendly to our classmates. Second, we should study hard and be creative. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent.
As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.
思路梳理 审题:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;时态为"一般现在时";学生需要根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。写作步骤:第一步,从品德方面介绍如何成为好学生;第二步,从学业方面介绍如何成为好学生;第三步,从生活方面介绍如何成为好学生。
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先完成审题：明确文体是说明文，主题为“如何做新时代的好学生”，要求以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在100词左右。接着梳理给定的思维导图，发现内容已经清晰划分为品德、学业、生活三大模块，每个模块下都有明确的提示要点，我们可以按照“引入话题-分点阐述-收尾升华”的思路推进写作：开头先点明新时代的背景，引出做新时代好学生的重要性；之后用first、second、third这类逻辑连接词，依次对应三个模块覆盖所有提示要点，不要遗漏热爱祖国、诚实善良、努力学习、互助共进、强身健体、勤劳独立这些内容；最后收尾表达成长期许，让文章结构完整、逻辑通顺。
【解析】
写作按照三步规范完成：
1. 开篇引入：简要点明新时代充满机遇与挑战的背景，自然引出“分享做新时代好学生的方法”的核心话题，快速切入主题。
2. 主体分层阐述：
① 第一部分对应品德维度：点明我们要热爱祖国，同时做到诚实守信、待人友善，覆盖Morality模块的全部要点；
② 第二部分对应学业维度：说明学习上要刻苦努力，和同学互帮互助、互相学习，覆盖Schoolwork模块的全部提示；
③ 第三部分对应生活维度：提出要多锻炼增强体质，同时多做家务，养成勤劳独立的好习惯，覆盖Life模块的所有要点。
3. 结尾收尾：用简短语句表达只要坚持践行，就能成长为优秀的新时代学生，完成主题升华。最后通读全文，检查拼写、语法错误，确认所有提示要点无遗漏，词数符合要求。
【答案】
How to be good students in the new era
The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promises and be thankful to people who helped us. We should be friendly to our classmates. Second, we should study hard and be creative. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent.
As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般现在时运用
英语语篇逻辑构建
【点评】
本题是中考典型的提示类书面表达，给出的思维导图已经清晰划分了写作的三个核心维度，所有写作要点都明确给出，降低了审题构思的难度，既考查学生的基础英语表达、语句组织能力，也引导学生梳理自身成长的方向，树立符合新时代要求的学生行为准则，是兼具考察性和教育意义的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先完成审题：明确文体是说明文，主题为“如何做新时代的好学生”，要求以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在100词左右。接着梳理给定的思维导图，发现内容已经清晰划分为品德、学业、生活三大模块，每个模块下都有明确的提示要点，我们可以按照“引入话题-分点阐述-收尾升华”的思路推进写作：开头先点明新时代的背景，引出做新时代好学生的重要性；之后用first、second、third这类逻辑连接词，依次对应三个模块覆盖所有提示要点，不要遗漏热爱祖国、诚实善良、努力学习、互助共进、强身健体、勤劳独立这些内容；最后收尾表达成长期许，让文章结构完整、逻辑通顺。
【解析】
写作按照三步规范完成：
1. 开篇引入：简要点明新时代充满机遇与挑战的背景，自然引出“分享做新时代好学生的方法”的核心话题，快速切入主题。
2. 主体分层阐述：
① 第一部分对应品德维度：点明我们要热爱祖国，同时做到诚实守信、待人友善，覆盖Morality模块的全部要点；
② 第二部分对应学业维度：说明学习上要刻苦努力，和同学互帮互助、互相学习，覆盖Schoolwork模块的全部提示；
③ 第三部分对应生活维度：提出要多锻炼增强体质，同时多做家务，养成勤劳独立的好习惯，覆盖Life模块的所有要点。
3. 结尾收尾：用简短语句表达只要坚持践行，就能成长为优秀的新时代学生，完成主题升华。最后通读全文，检查拼写、语法错误，确认所有提示要点无遗漏，词数符合要求。
【答案】
How to be good students in the new era
The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promises and be thankful to people who helped us. We should be friendly to our classmates. Second, we should study hard and be creative. We should help each other and learn from each other. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent.
As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般现在时运用
英语语篇逻辑构建
【点评】
本题是中考典型的提示类书面表达，给出的思维导图已经清晰划分了写作的三个核心维度，所有写作要点都明确给出，降低了审题构思的难度，既考查学生的基础英语表达、语句组织能力，也引导学生梳理自身成长的方向，树立符合新时代要求的学生行为准则，是兼具考察性和教育意义的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.7
