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假如你是图中女孩，你与家人于4月27日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记，讲述你当天所见和所做之事。
写作要求：
1. 日记应包含图中所有信息；
2. 日记中须写出当天的一些感受；
3. 日记应格式正确，语句通顺，句式多样；
4. 词数：100左右。
写作佳句
1. 我在海滩上玩得愉快。
I
2. 天气很好，以至于我可以看到冉冉升起的太阳和飞翔的海鸟。
It was
3. 我看见一艘船在海上航行。
I saw
4. 我在海里放松了几个小时。
I
5. 我不仅亲近了大自然，还和家人分享了快乐。
I
思路导引
1. 人称：第
2. 时态：
3. 体裁：
4. 列提纲
写作范例
Sunny Sunday, April 27th
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach. It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying seabirds. I also saw a boat sailing on the sea. I lost myself in the beautiful scene.
Wearing my swimsuit, I spent a couple of hours relaxing myself in the sea. I felt like I was a fish. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sandcastle with some tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.
写作要求：
1. 日记应包含图中所有信息；
2. 日记中须写出当天的一些感受；
3. 日记应格式正确，语句通顺，句式多样；
4. 词数：100左右。
写作佳句
1. 我在海滩上玩得愉快。
I
had
a
good
time
on the beach.2. 天气很好，以至于我可以看到冉冉升起的太阳和飞翔的海鸟。
It was
so
fine
that
I could see the rising sun and flying seabirds.3. 我看见一艘船在海上航行。
I saw
a
boat
sailing
on the sea.4. 我在海里放松了几个小时。
I
spent
a couple of hours relaxing
myself
in the sea.5. 我不仅亲近了大自然，还和家人分享了快乐。
I
not
only
got close to nature but
also
shared happiness with my family.思路导引
1. 人称：第
一
人称2. 时态：
一般过去时
3. 体裁：
记叙
文4. 列提纲
写作范例
Sunny Sunday, April 27th
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach. It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying seabirds. I also saw a boat sailing on the sea. I lost myself in the beautiful scene.
Wearing my swimsuit, I spent a couple of hours relaxing myself in the sea. I felt like I was a fish. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sandcastle with some tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.
答案
【写作佳句】
1. had a good time 2. so fine that 3. a boat sailing
4. spent; relaxing myself 5. not only; but also
【思路导引】
1. 一 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙
1. had a good time 2. so fine that 3. a boat sailing
4. spent; relaxing myself 5. not only; but also
【思路导引】
1. 一 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙
解析
【分析】
本题为英语日记写作题，解题思路如下：首先明确写作核心要素：人称用第一人称，时态用一般过去时，体裁为记叙文，格式需符合日记要求；其次整合给定素材，要包含海滩游玩、看日出与海鸟、海上的船、海里放松、玩排球、做沙堡等所有图中信息；接着运用指定写作佳句，加入个人感受，确保语句通顺、句式多样，词数控制在100左右；最后完成符合要求的日记内容。
【解析】
1. 格式要求：日记开头需标注天气和日期，如“Sunny Sunday, April 27th”；
2. 时态要求：全程使用一般过去时，因为是回忆4月27日当天发生的事情；
3. 内容组织：先点明和家人在海滩的活动，再依次描述所见（日出、海鸟、海上的船）、所做（海里放松、玩排球、制作沙堡），最后用指定短语表达个人感受；
4. 写作佳句填空：对应素材的固定短语分别为：1. had a good time；2. so fine that；3. a boat sailing；4. spent; relaxing myself；5. not only; but also；
5. 思路导引答案：人称是第一人称，时态是一般过去时，体裁是记叙文。
【答案】
写作佳句：1. had a good time 2. so fine that 3. a boat sailing 4. spent; relaxing myself 5. not only; but also
思路导引：1. 一 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙
写作范例：Sunny Sunday, April 27th
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach. It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying seabirds. I also saw a boat sailing on the sea. I lost myself in the beautiful scene.
Wearing my swimsuit, I spent a couple of hours relaxing myself in the sea. I felt like I was a fish. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sandcastle with some tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.
【知识点】
英语日记写作、一般过去时、固定短语搭配
【点评】
本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求学生掌握日记格式、时态运用，能整合给定信息并运用指定短语完成写作，同时体现个人感受，是初中英语常见的写作考查题型，注重基础语言运用与信息整合能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语日记写作题，解题思路如下：首先明确写作核心要素：人称用第一人称，时态用一般过去时，体裁为记叙文，格式需符合日记要求；其次整合给定素材，要包含海滩游玩、看日出与海鸟、海上的船、海里放松、玩排球、做沙堡等所有图中信息；接着运用指定写作佳句，加入个人感受，确保语句通顺、句式多样，词数控制在100左右；最后完成符合要求的日记内容。
【解析】
1. 格式要求：日记开头需标注天气和日期，如“Sunny Sunday, April 27th”；
2. 时态要求：全程使用一般过去时，因为是回忆4月27日当天发生的事情；
3. 内容组织：先点明和家人在海滩的活动，再依次描述所见（日出、海鸟、海上的船）、所做（海里放松、玩排球、制作沙堡），最后用指定短语表达个人感受；
4. 写作佳句填空：对应素材的固定短语分别为：1. had a good time；2. so fine that；3. a boat sailing；4. spent; relaxing myself；5. not only; but also；
5. 思路导引答案：人称是第一人称，时态是一般过去时，体裁是记叙文。
【答案】
写作佳句：1. had a good time 2. so fine that 3. a boat sailing 4. spent; relaxing myself 5. not only; but also
思路导引：1. 一 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙
写作范例：Sunny Sunday, April 27th
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach. It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying seabirds. I also saw a boat sailing on the sea. I lost myself in the beautiful scene.
Wearing my swimsuit, I spent a couple of hours relaxing myself in the sea. I felt like I was a fish. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sandcastle with some tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.
【知识点】
英语日记写作、一般过去时、固定短语搭配
【点评】
本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求学生掌握日记格式、时态运用，能整合给定信息并运用指定短语完成写作，同时体现个人感受，是初中英语常见的写作考查题型，注重基础语言运用与信息整合能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
