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五、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
不断提升自我，才能成就更好的自己。你所在的学校决定开展“向榜样学习”英文主题演讲活动，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。根据过专项第二题阅读理解中世界著名的中国科学家颜宁的事迹，先简单介绍颜宁的基本信息，再谈谈她的优秀品质，最后谈谈作为一名中学生的你将如何向她学习。
写作要求：
1. Personal information
2. Personality：根据颜宁的基本信息概括（至少两个方面）
3. Your plans：① ② …
4. 演讲稿中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
5. 词数80 ~ 100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and classmates,
It is my great honor to stand here and give a speech. Today, I would like to share with you the inspiring story of Yan Ning, a world-renowned Chinese scientist.
不断提升自我，才能成就更好的自己。你所在的学校决定开展“向榜样学习”英文主题演讲活动，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。根据过专项第二题阅读理解中世界著名的中国科学家颜宁的事迹，先简单介绍颜宁的基本信息，再谈谈她的优秀品质，最后谈谈作为一名中学生的你将如何向她学习。
写作要求：
1. Personal information
2. Personality：根据颜宁的基本信息概括（至少两个方面）
3. Your plans：① ② …
4. 演讲稿中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
5. 词数80 ~ 100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and classmates,
It is my great honor to stand here and give a speech. Today, I would like to share with you the inspiring story of Yan Ning, a world-renowned Chinese scientist.
答案
Dear teachers and classmates,
It is my great honor to stand here and give a speech. Today, I would like to share with you the inspiring story of Yan Ning, a world-renowned Chinese scientist.
She was born in a small town in China and graduated from a famous university abroad. Later, she became a professor at a young age and eventually returned to China to contribute to scientific research.
Yan Ning is not only highly smart but also hard-working. Her love for science has made her a role model for many young people.
As a middle school student, I will learn from her by working harder in my studies and exploring my interests in science. Besides, I will develop perseverance and never give up when facing difficulties. Only by constantly improving myself can I achieve greater things in the future.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语主题演讲稿写作题，解题思路如下：1. 明确写作要求：主题为向榜样颜宁学习，属于应用文，需涵盖颜宁的基本信息与事迹、优秀品质、自身学习计划三部分；2. 确定时态与人称：介绍颜宁用一般过去时、第三人称，写自身计划用一般将来时、第一人称；3. 梳理结构：先承接开头介绍颜宁的基本情况与科研事迹，再提炼其优秀品质，最后结合中学生身份写具体学习计划，注意词数控制在80-100，避免真实信息。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 介绍颜宁的基本信息与事迹：如出生于中国小镇，毕业于国外名校，年少成为教授后回国投身科研；2. 提炼优秀品质：如聪明勤奋、热爱科学等；3. 阐述自身计划：如努力学习、培养毅力等；4. 补充结尾致谢，符合演讲稿格式，控制词数，确保语言通顺。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
It is my great honor to stand here and give a speech. Today, I would like to share with you the inspiring story of Yan Ning, a world-renowned Chinese scientist.
She was born in a small town in China and graduated from a famous university abroad. Later, she became a professor at a young age and eventually returned to China to contribute to scientific research.
Yan Ning is not only highly smart but also hard-working. Her love for science has made her a role model for many young people.
As a middle school student, I will learn from her by working harder in my studies and exploring my interests in science. Besides, I will develop perseverance and never give up when facing difficulties. Only by constantly improving myself can I achieve greater things in the future.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；人物介绍类写作；演讲稿写作
【点评】
本题结合榜样教育，考查学生英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣要点，体现榜样学习的主题，符合中学生英语写作的考查方向，能引导学生树立学习榜样的意识。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语主题演讲稿写作题，解题思路如下：1. 明确写作要求：主题为向榜样颜宁学习，属于应用文，需涵盖颜宁的基本信息与事迹、优秀品质、自身学习计划三部分；2. 确定时态与人称：介绍颜宁用一般过去时、第三人称，写自身计划用一般将来时、第一人称；3. 梳理结构：先承接开头介绍颜宁的基本情况与科研事迹，再提炼其优秀品质，最后结合中学生身份写具体学习计划，注意词数控制在80-100，避免真实信息。
【解析】
写作时需遵循以下步骤：1. 介绍颜宁的基本信息与事迹：如出生于中国小镇，毕业于国外名校，年少成为教授后回国投身科研；2. 提炼优秀品质：如聪明勤奋、热爱科学等；3. 阐述自身计划：如努力学习、培养毅力等；4. 补充结尾致谢，符合演讲稿格式，控制词数，确保语言通顺。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
It is my great honor to stand here and give a speech. Today, I would like to share with you the inspiring story of Yan Ning, a world-renowned Chinese scientist.
She was born in a small town in China and graduated from a famous university abroad. Later, she became a professor at a young age and eventually returned to China to contribute to scientific research.
Yan Ning is not only highly smart but also hard-working. Her love for science has made her a role model for many young people.
As a middle school student, I will learn from her by working harder in my studies and exploring my interests in science. Besides, I will develop perseverance and never give up when facing difficulties. Only by constantly improving myself can I achieve greater things in the future.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；人物介绍类写作；演讲稿写作
【点评】
本题结合榜样教育，考查学生英语应用文写作能力，要求紧扣要点，体现榜样学习的主题，符合中学生英语写作的考查方向，能引导学生树立学习榜样的意识。
【难度系数】
0.6
