2026年通城学典拔尖大试卷六年级英语上册译林版第102页答案
十二、书面表达。(共7分)
假设你是李乐,你正在给你的网友 Anna 写电子邮件,介绍你最喜欢的一位伟人。请根据思维导图的提示,完成这封电子邮件。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。2. 词数 50 左右。





答案

One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I want to tell you about my favourite great person. He is Yuan Longping. He was a great scientist. He spent many years working on hybrid rice. He helped feed millions of people around the world. I like him because he was hard-working and kind. I will learn from him and keep working hard at my lessons.
Yours,
Li Le

解析

【分析】
首先明确写作任务是给网友Anna写电子邮件介绍最喜欢的伟人,需紧扣思维导图的四个核心问题:Who(确定伟人身份)、What(介绍其身份与主要事迹)、Why(说明喜欢的原因)、What will you do(表达向其学习的决心),同时注意词数50左右,遵循电子邮件格式,确保语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
按照电子邮件的规范格式,先写称呼Dear Anna,接着点明要介绍自己最喜欢的伟人,依次对应思维导图的要点:Who确定为袁隆平;What介绍他是伟大的科学家,多年研究杂交水稻,帮助养活了全球数百万人;Why说明喜欢他的原因是勤奋且善良;What will you do表达要向他学习,努力学习功课,最后写落款Yours, Li Le,确保内容符合要求,词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I want to tell you about my favourite great person. He is Yuan Longping. He was a great scientist. He spent many years working on hybrid rice. He helped feed millions of people around the world. I like him because he was hard-working and kind. I will learn from him and keep working hard at my lessons.
Yours,
Li Le
【知识点】
英语书面表达、电子邮件写作、人物介绍
【点评】
本题考查学生根据思维导图提示完成英语写作的能力,要求紧扣要点,语言规范,是贴近学生日常的基础英语写作题型,能锻炼学生的信息整合与书面表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6