十三、书面表达。(5分)
暑假夏令营的第一天,你见到了一群新的小伙伴,你能向他们介绍一下自己吗? 请结合下
面的思维导图用英语写一篇发言稿吧(首尾句已给)! 要求:条理清晰,语句通顺,书写美观,语
法正确,不少于50个词。

Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to stand here and introduce myself to you. My name is
Kerry.
Thank you!
暑假夏令营的第一天,你见到了一群新的小伙伴,你能向他们介绍一下自己吗? 请结合下
面的思维导图用英语写一篇发言稿吧(首尾句已给)! 要求:条理清晰,语句通顺,书写美观,语
法正确,不少于50个词。
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to stand here and introduce myself to you. My name is
Kerry.
Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to
stand here and introduce myself to you. My
name is Kerry. I'm thin with short hair. I
love reading and playing basketball. I have
good habits, like getting up early. My dream
is to be a writer. I have a lovely family.
There are 4 people in my family. They are my
mum, my dad, my brother and me. I have a
group of kind friends too. We often play
basketball together. That's all about me.
Thank you!
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to
stand here and introduce myself to you. My
name is Kerry. I'm thin with short hair. I
love reading and playing basketball. I have
good habits, like getting up early. My dream
is to be a writer. I have a lovely family.
There are 4 people in my family. They are my
mum, my dad, my brother and me. I have a
group of kind friends too. We often play
basketball together. That's all about me.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语书面表达题,要求以发言稿形式向新伙伴介绍自己,需结合思维导图的五个核心要点(外貌、爱好、习惯、梦想、家人/朋友)展开,首尾句已给出,需补充中间内容。解题时需先对应思维导图的每个模块,将要点转化为符合语法的英语句子,注意语句通顺、条理清晰,覆盖所有要点即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,先介绍外貌:I'm thin with short hair.;
2. 介绍爱好:I love reading and playing basketball.;
3. 说明习惯:I have good habits, like getting up early.;
4. 阐述梦想:My dream is to be a writer.;
5. 介绍家人:There are 4 people in my family: my mum, my dad, my brother and me.;
6. 提及朋友:I have a group of kind friends too. We often play basketball together.;
最后补充过渡句That's all about me.,对应给出的Thank you!,确保所有思维导图要点都覆盖,语句连贯,符合发言稿的语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to stand here and introduce myself to you. My name is Kerry. I'm thin with short hair. I love reading and playing basketball. I have good habits, like getting up early. My dream is to be a writer. I have a lovely family. There are 4 people in my family. They are my mum, my dad, my brother and me. I have a group of kind friends too. We often play basketball together. That's all about me. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、自我介绍类写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题借助思维导图明确写作要点,降低了写作难度,考查学生围绕指定话题组织语言、准确表达的能力,是初中英语常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.3
这是一道英语书面表达题,要求以发言稿形式向新伙伴介绍自己,需结合思维导图的五个核心要点(外貌、爱好、习惯、梦想、家人/朋友)展开,首尾句已给出,需补充中间内容。解题时需先对应思维导图的每个模块,将要点转化为符合语法的英语句子,注意语句通顺、条理清晰,覆盖所有要点即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,先介绍外貌:I'm thin with short hair.;
2. 介绍爱好:I love reading and playing basketball.;
3. 说明习惯:I have good habits, like getting up early.;
4. 阐述梦想:My dream is to be a writer.;
5. 介绍家人:There are 4 people in my family: my mum, my dad, my brother and me.;
6. 提及朋友:I have a group of kind friends too. We often play basketball together.;
最后补充过渡句That's all about me.,对应给出的Thank you!,确保所有思维导图要点都覆盖,语句连贯,符合发言稿的语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm very happy to stand here and introduce myself to you. My name is Kerry. I'm thin with short hair. I love reading and playing basketball. I have good habits, like getting up early. My dream is to be a writer. I have a lovely family. There are 4 people in my family. They are my mum, my dad, my brother and me. I have a group of kind friends too. We often play basketball together. That's all about me. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、自我介绍类写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题借助思维导图明确写作要点,降低了写作难度,考查学生围绕指定话题组织语言、准确表达的能力,是初中英语常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.3
登录