登录
六、书面表达。(共30分)
以"My best friend"为题,根据表格中的内容,写一篇短文。(不少于100词)
My best friend
以"My best friend"为题,根据表格中的内容,写一篇短文。(不少于100词)
My best friend
答案
One possible version:
My best friend
Jack Brown is my best friend. He is fifteen
years old. He is tall and strong. He has big eyes
and short hair. He likes wearing T-shirts and
shorts. He has a healthy diet. He likes
vegetables, fruit and eggs, because they are
good for health. He doesn't like salad or
chicken. When it comes to sport, he enjoys
playing volleyball and swimming. Jack is also
talented in music. He can play the guitar and
the drums, but he can't play the piano. We
often spend time together doing sport or playing
music, and we have a lot of fun.
My best friend
Jack Brown is my best friend. He is fifteen
years old. He is tall and strong. He has big eyes
and short hair. He likes wearing T-shirts and
shorts. He has a healthy diet. He likes
vegetables, fruit and eggs, because they are
good for health. He doesn't like salad or
chicken. When it comes to sport, he enjoys
playing volleyball and swimming. Jack is also
talented in music. He can play the guitar and
the drums, but he can't play the piano. We
often spend time together doing sport or playing
music, and we have a lot of fun.
解析
【分析】
要完成这篇以“My best friend”为题的书面表达，需先明确核心任务：整合表格中的所有关键信息（姓名、年龄、喜好食物、不喜欢食物、喜欢的运动、会的乐器、不会的乐器），同时补充合理细节（如外貌、与朋友的日常互动）让文章饱满，语句连贯，词数达标。需将表格信息自然融入短文，避免生硬罗列，符合英语写作逻辑。
【解析】
1. 开头点明写作对象：My best friend is Jack Brown. 并介绍年龄：He is fifteen years old.
2. 补充合理外貌细节（丰富内容）：He is tall and strong with big eyes and short hair.
3. 饮食部分：结合表格信息，说明喜好食物及原因、不喜欢的食物：He has a healthy diet, liking vegetables, fruit and eggs because they are good for health, while he doesn't like salad or chicken.
4. 运动部分：提取表格运动信息：He enjoys playing volleyball and swimming.
5. 音乐部分：整合表格才艺信息：He is talented in music, can play the guitar and drums, but can't play the piano.
6. 结尾呼应主题，补充相处细节：We often spend time together doing sports or playing music, having lots of fun. 确保总词数不少于100，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My best friend
Jack Brown is my best friend. He is fifteen years old. He is tall and strong. He has big eyes and short hair. He likes wearing T-shirts and shorts. He has a healthy diet. He likes vegetables, fruit and eggs, because they are good for health. He doesn't like salad or chicken. When it comes to sport, he enjoys playing volleyball and swimming. Jack is also talented in music. He can play the guitar and the drums, but he can't play the piano. We often spend time together doing sport or playing music, and we have a lot of fun.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、信息整合写作
【点评】
本题为信息整合类书面表达，既考查学生从表格提取关键信息的能力，又要求学生具备英语写作的连贯性和细节补充能力，符合初中英语写作考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.4
要完成这篇以“My best friend”为题的书面表达，需先明确核心任务：整合表格中的所有关键信息（姓名、年龄、喜好食物、不喜欢食物、喜欢的运动、会的乐器、不会的乐器），同时补充合理细节（如外貌、与朋友的日常互动）让文章饱满，语句连贯，词数达标。需将表格信息自然融入短文，避免生硬罗列，符合英语写作逻辑。
【解析】
1. 开头点明写作对象：My best friend is Jack Brown. 并介绍年龄：He is fifteen years old.
2. 补充合理外貌细节（丰富内容）：He is tall and strong with big eyes and short hair.
3. 饮食部分：结合表格信息，说明喜好食物及原因、不喜欢的食物：He has a healthy diet, liking vegetables, fruit and eggs because they are good for health, while he doesn't like salad or chicken.
4. 运动部分：提取表格运动信息：He enjoys playing volleyball and swimming.
5. 音乐部分：整合表格才艺信息：He is talented in music, can play the guitar and drums, but can't play the piano.
6. 结尾呼应主题，补充相处细节：We often spend time together doing sports or playing music, having lots of fun. 确保总词数不少于100，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My best friend
Jack Brown is my best friend. He is fifteen years old. He is tall and strong. He has big eyes and short hair. He likes wearing T-shirts and shorts. He has a healthy diet. He likes vegetables, fruit and eggs, because they are good for health. He doesn't like salad or chicken. When it comes to sport, he enjoys playing volleyball and swimming. Jack is also talented in music. He can play the guitar and the drums, but he can't play the piano. We often spend time together doing sport or playing music, and we have a lot of fun.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、信息整合写作
【点评】
本题为信息整合类书面表达，既考查学生从表格提取关键信息的能力，又要求学生具备英语写作的连贯性和细节补充能力，符合初中英语写作考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.4
