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21世纪报(21st Century Teens)正在举行以“My Dream Job”为题的征文活动,请根据报纸的征文启事,用英语写一篇文章参加征文活动。

注意事项:词数80-100,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总数。
My Dream Job
When I grow up, I want to be
21世纪报(21st Century Teens)正在举行以“My Dream Job”为题的征文活动,请根据报纸的征文启事,用英语写一篇文章参加征文活动。
注意事项:词数80-100,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总数。
My Dream Job
When I grow up, I want to be
a doctor
答案
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My Dream Job
When I grow up, I want to be a doctor.
I'm caring and patient, which I think are essential qualities for a doctor. I'm always ready to help others in need, and I can stay calm under pressure. My mother has greatly influenced my choice. She is a nurse and often tells me stories about saving lives. Her kindness inspires me a lot. To achieve my dream, I'll study hard to get good grades in science. After graduating from high school, I'll go to a medical college.
I believe with my efforts, I can make my dream come true.
My Dream Job
When I grow up, I want to be a doctor.
I'm caring and patient, which I think are essential qualities for a doctor. I'm always ready to help others in need, and I can stay calm under pressure. My mother has greatly influenced my choice. She is a nurse and often tells me stories about saving lives. Her kindness inspires me a lot. To achieve my dream, I'll study hard to get good grades in science. After graduating from high school, I'll go to a medical college.
I believe with my efforts, I can make my dream come true.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:需完成以“My Dream Job”为题的英语征文,要包含三个核心要点:梦想职业及对应品质、影响职业选择的人、实现梦想的计划,词数80-100,开头已给出。解题时先确定具体的梦想职业,再围绕该职业匹配自身具备的品质,接着说明影响选择的人物及缘由,最后制定可操作的实现计划,确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】按照题目要求分步骤写作:1. 确定梦想职业(如医生),描述自身适合该职业的品质(有爱心、耐心,能在压力下保持冷静);2. 写出影响选择的人(护士妈妈,她救死扶伤的故事激励自己);3. 制定实现计划(努力学好理科,考医学院),注意语言通顺,词数控制在80-100之间。
【答案】My Dream Job
When I grow up, I want to be a doctor.
I'm caring and patient, which I think are essential qualities for a doctor. I'm always ready to help others in need, and I can stay calm under pressure. My mother has greatly influenced my choice. She is a nurse and often tells me stories about saving lives. Her kindness inspires me a lot. To achieve my dream, I'll study hard to get good grades in science. After graduating from high school, I'll go to a medical college.
I believe with my efforts, I can make my dream come true.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语话题写作
【点评】本题为英语征文写作题,考查学生围绕指定话题整合信息、涵盖写作要点的能力,需结合自身实际完成内容,语言需准确通顺,符合英语表达规范。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照题目要求分步骤写作:1. 确定梦想职业(如医生),描述自身适合该职业的品质(有爱心、耐心,能在压力下保持冷静);2. 写出影响选择的人(护士妈妈,她救死扶伤的故事激励自己);3. 制定实现计划(努力学好理科,考医学院),注意语言通顺,词数控制在80-100之间。
【答案】My Dream Job
When I grow up, I want to be a doctor.
I'm caring and patient, which I think are essential qualities for a doctor. I'm always ready to help others in need, and I can stay calm under pressure. My mother has greatly influenced my choice. She is a nurse and often tells me stories about saving lives. Her kindness inspires me a lot. To achieve my dream, I'll study hard to get good grades in science. After graduating from high school, I'll go to a medical college.
I believe with my efforts, I can make my dream come true.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语话题写作
【点评】本题为英语征文写作题,考查学生围绕指定话题整合信息、涵盖写作要点的能力,需结合自身实际完成内容,语言需准确通顺,符合英语表达规范。
【难度系数】0.5
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