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十一、书面表达(10分)
地球是我们赖以生存的家园，随着人类的需求不断增加，我们向自然界过度索取，导致环境日益恶化。请根据下面的思维导图，以“Protect Earth”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求:1. 语句通顺，表达规范，标点正确，书写工整;2. 不少于60词。
地球是我们赖以生存的家园，随着人类的需求不断增加，我们向自然界过度索取，导致环境日益恶化。请根据下面的思维导图，以“Protect Earth”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求:1. 语句通顺，表达规范，标点正确，书写工整;2. 不少于60词。
Protect Earth
Earth is our home. In the past, it was very beautiful. There was clean water in rivers and fresh air everywhere. There were many green trees and lovely animals. But now, it's in danger. The resources are running out. We must protect it. We can save water by reusing it. We can walk or ride bikes to school. Small actions can help a lot. Let's protect our Earth together!
答案
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Protect Earth
Earth is our home. In the past, it was very beautiful. There was clean water in rivers and fresh air everywhere. There were many green trees and lovely animals. But now, it's in danger. The resources are running out. We must protect it. We can save water by reusing it. We can walk or ride bikes to school. Small actions can help a lot. Let's protect our Earth together!
Protect Earth
Earth is our home. In the past, it was very beautiful. There was clean water in rivers and fresh air everywhere. There were many green trees and lovely animals. But now, it's in danger. The resources are running out. We must protect it. We can save water by reusing it. We can walk or ride bikes to school. Small actions can help a lot. Let's protect our Earth together!
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题，主题为“Protect Earth”。写作需紧扣思维导图的三个核心模块：①描述过去地球的美好状态；②说明现在地球面临的问题；③列举保护地球的具体措施。写作思路为：开篇点明地球是人类的家园，接着对比过去与现在的地球状况，最后提出具体保护行动，确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照写作思路，先引出主题，描述过去地球的美好（有干净的河水、新鲜空气、绿树和可爱动物），再转折说明现在地球资源枯竭、处于危险中，最后列举具体保护措施（节约用水、绿色出行等），结尾呼吁共同保护地球，形成完整短文。
【答案】
Protect Earth
Earth is our home. In the past, it was very beautiful. There was clean water in rivers and fresh air everywhere. There were many green trees and lovely animals. But now, it's in danger. The resources are running out. We must protect it. We can save water by reusing it. We can walk or ride bikes to school. Small actions can help a lot. Let's protect our Earth together!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环境保护话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图，结构清晰，内容完整，准确对比地球过去与现在的状况，提出具体保护措施，语句通顺，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达题，主题为“Protect Earth”。写作需紧扣思维导图的三个核心模块：①描述过去地球的美好状态；②说明现在地球面临的问题；③列举保护地球的具体措施。写作思路为：开篇点明地球是人类的家园，接着对比过去与现在的地球状况，最后提出具体保护行动，确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照写作思路，先引出主题，描述过去地球的美好（有干净的河水、新鲜空气、绿树和可爱动物），再转折说明现在地球资源枯竭、处于危险中，最后列举具体保护措施（节约用水、绿色出行等），结尾呼吁共同保护地球，形成完整短文。
【答案】
Protect Earth
Earth is our home. In the past, it was very beautiful. There was clean water in rivers and fresh air everywhere. There were many green trees and lovely animals. But now, it's in danger. The resources are running out. We must protect it. We can save water by reusing it. We can walk or ride bikes to school. Small actions can help a lot. Let's protect our Earth together!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环境保护话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图，结构清晰，内容完整，准确对比地球过去与现在的状况，提出具体保护措施，语句通顺，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
