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五、书面表达
为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你根据下面思维导图，以“My Favourite Book”为主题，写一篇英语短文，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。
注意事项:1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，内容完整；
2. 书名可以用汉语拼音；3. 不少于80词。
My Favourite Book
为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你根据下面思维导图，以“My Favourite Book”为主题，写一篇英语短文，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。
注意事项:1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，内容完整；
2. 书名可以用汉语拼音；3. 不少于80词。
My Favourite Book
答案
写作指导
［审题步骤］
①体裁：本文是一篇命题作文，是一篇记叙文。②时态：应以“一般现在时”为主。③提示：文章应包含所有提示要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的书；第二步，介绍最喜欢这本书的原因；第三步，总结全文，并推荐这本书。
［词汇积累］
①out of the following reasons 源于下面的原因 ②attract me deeply 深深地吸引我 ③run into difficulties 遇到困难
④First, it tells a lot of interesting stories which attract me deeply.（which 引导的定语从句）
⑤I have learned we should be brave when we run into difficulties, and we should be certain about our choice.（that 的宾语从句；when 引导的时间状语从句）
⑥Not only should we have a good heart, but also learn to get more wisdom from our daily life.（Not only ... but also ... 句型）
One possible version:
My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Journey to the West. It mainly tells about four monks' journey to India.
I like it out of the following reasons. First, it tells a lot of interesting stories which attract me deeply. Second, from this book I can learn a lot. I have learned we should be brave when we run into difficulties, and we should be certain about our choice. Finally, it teaches me how to be a real man. Not only should we have a good heart, but also learn to get more wisdom from our daily life. I like this book very much and I advise you to read it as well.
［审题步骤］
①体裁：本文是一篇命题作文，是一篇记叙文。②时态：应以“一般现在时”为主。③提示：文章应包含所有提示要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的书；第二步，介绍最喜欢这本书的原因；第三步，总结全文，并推荐这本书。
［词汇积累］
①out of the following reasons 源于下面的原因 ②attract me deeply 深深地吸引我 ③run into difficulties 遇到困难
④First, it tells a lot of interesting stories which attract me deeply.（which 引导的定语从句）
⑤I have learned we should be brave when we run into difficulties, and we should be certain about our choice.（that 的宾语从句；when 引导的时间状语从句）
⑥Not only should we have a good heart, but also learn to get more wisdom from our daily life.（Not only ... but also ... 句型）
One possible version:
My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Journey to the West. It mainly tells about four monks' journey to India.
I like it out of the following reasons. First, it tells a lot of interesting stories which attract me deeply. Second, from this book I can learn a lot. I have learned we should be brave when we run into difficulties, and we should be certain about our choice. Finally, it teaches me how to be a real man. Not only should we have a good heart, but also learn to get more wisdom from our daily life. I like this book very much and I advise you to read it as well.
解析
【分析】首先明确本题是英语命题书面表达题，主题为“My Favourite Book”，需结合思维导图的三个核心要点（书名、主要内容、喜欢原因）完成写作。解题思路：1. 审题确定体裁（说明文类记叙文）、时态（以一般现在时为主）、要求（不少于80词，语句通顺）；2. 梳理写作结构：开篇点明最喜欢的书，中间介绍书的主要内容，分点阐述喜欢的原因，结尾总结并推荐；3. 运用学过的复合句丰富语句，确保覆盖所有要点。
【解析】写作需遵循以下步骤：①开篇直接点明最喜欢的书，如《西游记》（Journey to the West）；②简要介绍书的主要内容，比如讲述师徒四人西天取经的故事；③分2-3点说明喜欢的原因，可从内容趣味性、学到的道理等方面展开，运用定语从句、Not only...but also...等句式提升表达；④结尾表达喜爱并推荐，确保语句连贯、字数达标。
【答案】My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Journey to the West. It mainly tells about four monks' journey to India.
I like it out of the following reasons. First, it tells a lot of interesting stories which attract me deeply. Second, from this book I can learn a lot. I have learned we should be brave when we run into difficulties, and we should be certain about our choice. Finally, it teaches me how to be a real man. Not only should we have a good heart, but also learn to get more wisdom from our daily life. I like this book very much and I advise you to read it as well.
【知识点】英语书面表达、命题作文、要点式写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语写作能力，要求覆盖指定要点，语言通顺，既考查基础知识运用，又考查逻辑组织能力，是常见的英语书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作需遵循以下步骤：①开篇直接点明最喜欢的书，如《西游记》（Journey to the West）；②简要介绍书的主要内容，比如讲述师徒四人西天取经的故事；③分2-3点说明喜欢的原因，可从内容趣味性、学到的道理等方面展开，运用定语从句、Not only...but also...等句式提升表达；④结尾表达喜爱并推荐，确保语句连贯、字数达标。
【答案】My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Journey to the West. It mainly tells about four monks' journey to India.
I like it out of the following reasons. First, it tells a lot of interesting stories which attract me deeply. Second, from this book I can learn a lot. I have learned we should be brave when we run into difficulties, and we should be certain about our choice. Finally, it teaches me how to be a real man. Not only should we have a good heart, but also learn to get more wisdom from our daily life. I like this book very much and I advise you to read it as well.
【知识点】英语书面表达、命题作文、要点式写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的英语写作能力，要求覆盖指定要点，语言通顺，既考查基础知识运用，又考查逻辑组织能力，是常见的英语书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.6
