写作任务
假设你是来自云南的李想,你的英国笔友 Peter 给你发邮件向你询问你们当地的特色美食。请你根据下面的提示信息,给 Peter 回复邮件,向他介绍过桥米线。

cooking ways: 1. cook rice noodles in chicken soup
2. add pork, fish and fresh vegetables
Features(特点): delicious and healthy
History: at the end of the Qing Dynasty
Story: A kind wife crossed a bridge to bring her husband the rice noodles every day.
要求:(1)包括所给提示信息,可适当拓展;(2)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;(3)70词左右;(4)邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
There are many delicious dishes in Yunnan and I'd like to introduce crossing-bridge rice noodles to you.
Hope you can come to China one day and taste crossing-bridge rice noodles yourself.
Yours,
Li Xiang
假设你是来自云南的李想,你的英国笔友 Peter 给你发邮件向你询问你们当地的特色美食。请你根据下面的提示信息,给 Peter 回复邮件,向他介绍过桥米线。
cooking ways: 1. cook rice noodles in chicken soup
2. add pork, fish and fresh vegetables
Features(特点): delicious and healthy
History: at the end of the Qing Dynasty
Story: A kind wife crossed a bridge to bring her husband the rice noodles every day.
要求:(1)包括所给提示信息,可适当拓展;(2)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;(3)70词左右;(4)邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
There are many delicious dishes in Yunnan and I'd like to introduce crossing-bridge rice noodles to you.
Crossing-bridge rice noodles are not difficult to cook. First, cook rice noodles in chicken soup and then add pork, fish and fresh vegetables to it. The dish is very healthy and tastes delicious. It first appeared at the end of the Qing Dynasty. Folk tales have it that a kind wife crossed a bridge to bring delicious rice noodles to her husband every day. That was why it was called crossing-bridge noodles.
Hope you can come to China one day and taste crossing-bridge rice noodles yourself.
Yours,
Li Xiang
答案
Crossing-bridge rice noodles are not difficult to cook. First, cook rice noodles in chicken soup and then add pork, fish and fresh vegetables to it. The dish is very healthy and tastes delicious. It first appeared at the end of the Qing Dynasty. Folk tales have it that a kind wife crossed a bridge to bring delicious rice noodles to her husband every day. That was why it was called crossing-bridge noodles.
解析
【分析】这是一封介绍云南特色美食过桥米线的英文邮件,写作时需围绕题目给出的烹饪方法、特点、历史、故事等提示信息展开,使用恰当的连接词让内容连贯,注意邮件格式,确保语法正确、语句通顺,字数符合要求,把要点自然融入到介绍中。
【解析】首先承接开头,说明过桥米线的烹饪步骤:先在鸡汤里煮米线,再加入猪肉、鱼肉和新鲜蔬菜;接着点明其特点是美味又健康;然后介绍它的历史出现在清朝末年;最后讲述名字由来的故事:一位善良的妻子每天过桥给丈夫送米线,因此得名。这样完整覆盖所有提示,语句连贯,符合要求。
【答案】Crossing-bridge rice noodles are not difficult to cook. First, cook rice noodles in chicken soup and then add pork, fish and fresh vegetables to it. The dish is very healthy and tastes delicious. It first appeared at the end of the Qing Dynasty. Folk tales have it that a kind wife crossed a bridge to bring delicious rice noodles to her husband every day. That was why it was called crossing-bridge noodles.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、邮件写作、话题写作
【点评】该作文准确涵盖题目要求的所有提示信息,条理清晰,使用合适的连接词使内容连贯,语法正确,符合邮件格式,完成了介绍过桥米线的任务,符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先承接开头,说明过桥米线的烹饪步骤:先在鸡汤里煮米线,再加入猪肉、鱼肉和新鲜蔬菜;接着点明其特点是美味又健康;然后介绍它的历史出现在清朝末年;最后讲述名字由来的故事:一位善良的妻子每天过桥给丈夫送米线,因此得名。这样完整覆盖所有提示,语句连贯,符合要求。
【答案】Crossing-bridge rice noodles are not difficult to cook. First, cook rice noodles in chicken soup and then add pork, fish and fresh vegetables to it. The dish is very healthy and tastes delicious. It first appeared at the end of the Qing Dynasty. Folk tales have it that a kind wife crossed a bridge to bring delicious rice noodles to her husband every day. That was why it was called crossing-bridge noodles.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、邮件写作、话题写作
【点评】该作文准确涵盖题目要求的所有提示信息,条理清晰,使用合适的连接词使内容连贯,语法正确,符合邮件格式,完成了介绍过桥米线的任务,符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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