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D(2025·江苏徐州调研)
假定你是李华，是阳光中学九年级的学生。你校英文报正组织题为“My dream job”的主题征文活动。请你根据提示，写一篇短文投稿。
【内容提示】1. What’s your dream job? And why?
2. What qualities do you have for this job?
3. How can you do the job well?
【注意】1. 词数不少于 90，请适当增加细节，以使行文流畅.
2. 短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名.
3. 可从下表提供的职业中选择一个，也可以根据自身实际另行选择.
假定你是李华，是阳光中学九年级的学生。你校英文报正组织题为“My dream job”的主题征文活动。请你根据提示，写一篇短文投稿。
【内容提示】1. What’s your dream job? And why?
2. What qualities do you have for this job?
3. How can you do the job well?
【注意】1. 词数不少于 90，请适当增加细节，以使行文流畅.
2. 短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名.
3. 可从下表提供的职业中选择一个，也可以根据自身实际另行选择.
答案
One possible version
My dream job
When I was a small child, my parents would ask me "What do you want to be when you grow up?" My answer was always "I want to be an engineer".
I don't know why being an engineer has been my lifelong dream. My favourite subject at school is Maths and I'm good at it. I also love Science. My friends say I'm serious and well organized. I always work to high standards. I try to make myself get on well with my friends.
I know being an engineer is not an easy job. I must pay attention to every detail. "A miss is as good as a mile," I keep telling myself. I will work hard. I'm sure my dream will come true!
My dream job
When I was a small child, my parents would ask me "What do you want to be when you grow up?" My answer was always "I want to be an engineer".
I don't know why being an engineer has been my lifelong dream. My favourite subject at school is Maths and I'm good at it. I also love Science. My friends say I'm serious and well organized. I always work to high standards. I try to make myself get on well with my friends.
I know being an engineer is not an easy job. I must pay attention to every detail. "A miss is as good as a mile," I keep telling myself. I will work hard. I'm sure my dream will come true!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇初中英语主题征文写作题，解题时首先要明确题目给出的三个核心写作要求：第一步先选定想要描述的理想职业，既可以从题干给出的工程师、青年工作者、作家等职业列表里挑选，也可以自选符合自身实际的职业；第二步依次对应三个问题展开内容：首先点明理想职业是什么，说明自己向往该职业的原因，比如对应工程师职业可以结合自己擅长数理学科的特点说明动因；接着介绍自身适配该职业的个人品质，比如严谨、有条理、做事高标准等；最后说明自己未来为做好这份工作的具体规划，还可以适当加入相关谚语、生活细节来丰富内容，最后收尾表达对实现梦想的信心，同时注意满足词数要求，不出现真实个人信息，保证行文连贯流畅。
【解析】
1. 确定写作框架：本文是题为My dream job的征文，采用第一人称，时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主，全文分为三个部分：
① 开篇引入：点明自己从小就怀揣成为工程师的理想，直接点题。
② 主体第一部分：解释自己向往工程师职业的原因，说明自己在校擅长数学、喜爱科学，同时介绍自身具备的相关品质：性格严谨、做事有条理、始终以高标准要求自己，善于和他人友好相处，匹配工程师岗位的要求。
③ 主体第二部分+结尾：说明工程师岗位需要关注每一处细节，引用谚语“A miss is as good as a mile”强化自己的职业态度，表明自己后续会付出努力，最终点明自己坚信梦想终将实现。
2. 润色调整语句，添加合适的衔接词，保证全文逻辑通顺，词数符合不少于90的要求，规避真实姓名和校名，符合所有题干要求。
【答案】
One possible version
My dream job
When I was a small child, my parents would ask me "What do you want to be when you grow up?" My answer was always "I want to be an engineer".
I don't know why being an engineer has been my lifelong dream. My favourite subject at school is Maths and I'm good at it. I also love Science. My friends say I'm serious and well organized. I always work to high standards. I try to make myself get on well with my friends.
I know being an engineer is not an easy job. I must pay attention to every detail. "A miss is as good as a mile," I keep telling myself. I will work hard. I'm sure my dream will come true!
【知识点】
英语主题写作，职业话题表达，英语时态运用
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段高频的生活化主题写作，题干给出的三个提示要点清晰明确，学生不容易出现偏题漏点的问题，同时允许学生自主选择理想职业，给了学生足够的发挥空间。写作时要注意完整覆盖所有提示要点，适当加入细节和适配的英文谚语可以提升作文的得分档次，注意避免生硬翻译要点，做好语句之间的衔接即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇初中英语主题征文写作题，解题时首先要明确题目给出的三个核心写作要求：第一步先选定想要描述的理想职业，既可以从题干给出的工程师、青年工作者、作家等职业列表里挑选，也可以自选符合自身实际的职业；第二步依次对应三个问题展开内容：首先点明理想职业是什么，说明自己向往该职业的原因，比如对应工程师职业可以结合自己擅长数理学科的特点说明动因；接着介绍自身适配该职业的个人品质，比如严谨、有条理、做事高标准等；最后说明自己未来为做好这份工作的具体规划，还可以适当加入相关谚语、生活细节来丰富内容，最后收尾表达对实现梦想的信心，同时注意满足词数要求，不出现真实个人信息，保证行文连贯流畅。
【解析】
1. 确定写作框架：本文是题为My dream job的征文，采用第一人称，时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主，全文分为三个部分：
① 开篇引入：点明自己从小就怀揣成为工程师的理想，直接点题。
② 主体第一部分：解释自己向往工程师职业的原因，说明自己在校擅长数学、喜爱科学，同时介绍自身具备的相关品质：性格严谨、做事有条理、始终以高标准要求自己，善于和他人友好相处，匹配工程师岗位的要求。
③ 主体第二部分+结尾：说明工程师岗位需要关注每一处细节，引用谚语“A miss is as good as a mile”强化自己的职业态度，表明自己后续会付出努力，最终点明自己坚信梦想终将实现。
2. 润色调整语句，添加合适的衔接词，保证全文逻辑通顺，词数符合不少于90的要求，规避真实姓名和校名，符合所有题干要求。
【答案】
One possible version
My dream job
When I was a small child, my parents would ask me "What do you want to be when you grow up?" My answer was always "I want to be an engineer".
I don't know why being an engineer has been my lifelong dream. My favourite subject at school is Maths and I'm good at it. I also love Science. My friends say I'm serious and well organized. I always work to high standards. I try to make myself get on well with my friends.
I know being an engineer is not an easy job. I must pay attention to every detail. "A miss is as good as a mile," I keep telling myself. I will work hard. I'm sure my dream will come true!
【知识点】
英语主题写作，职业话题表达，英语时态运用
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段高频的生活化主题写作，题干给出的三个提示要点清晰明确，学生不容易出现偏题漏点的问题，同时允许学生自主选择理想职业，给了学生足够的发挥空间。写作时要注意完整覆盖所有提示要点，适当加入细节和适配的英文谚语可以提升作文的得分档次，注意避免生硬翻译要点，做好语句之间的衔接即可拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
E(2024·四川广安)
生活里没有书籍，就好像没有阳光；智慧里没有书籍，就好像鸟儿没有翅膀。书香浸润灵魂，阅读陪伴成长。阅读是我们一生的旅程，少年正是读书时，让我们一起读书吧！请根据以下图示及要求以“Reading—a lifelong journey”为题，用英语写一篇短文，倡导同学们读书.
【要求】1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部图示要点，可适当发挥.
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称.
3. 不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数.
Reading—a lifelong journey
As we know, reading plays an important role in our lives.
生活里没有书籍，就好像没有阳光；智慧里没有书籍，就好像鸟儿没有翅膀。书香浸润灵魂，阅读陪伴成长。阅读是我们一生的旅程，少年正是读书时，让我们一起读书吧！请根据以下图示及要求以“Reading—a lifelong journey”为题，用英语写一篇短文，倡导同学们读书.
【要求】1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部图示要点，可适当发挥.
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称.
3. 不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数.
Reading—a lifelong journey
As we know, reading plays an important role in our lives.
答案
One possible version
Reading—a lifelong journey
As we know, reading plays an important role in our lives. We can get knowledge and learn many skills from books. Besides, we can develop interests through reading and make our lives colourful.
There are many kinds of books we can read, such as great books, science books and even newspapers. Magazines about study are also good choices for us.
We can read books in our free time, and it's a good idea to choose a quiet place to read books, like the library. How about joining the Reading Club in our school? While reading, it's necessary to take notes and write reviews. We can certainly share them with our friends in the club.
In my opinion, reading is a lifelong journey. We can see the world in the books. Let's read together.
Reading—a lifelong journey
As we know, reading plays an important role in our lives. We can get knowledge and learn many skills from books. Besides, we can develop interests through reading and make our lives colourful.
There are many kinds of books we can read, such as great books, science books and even newspapers. Magazines about study are also good choices for us.
We can read books in our free time, and it's a good idea to choose a quiet place to read books, like the library. How about joining the Reading Club in our school? While reading, it's necessary to take notes and write reviews. We can certainly share them with our friends in the club.
In my opinion, reading is a lifelong journey. We can see the world in the books. Let's read together.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先梳理图示里所有需要覆盖的核心要点，避免遗漏：第一部分“为什么阅读”的三个要点：获取知识、学习技能、培养兴趣；第二部分“读什么”的三个要点：名著、科普书籍、报纸；第三部分“怎么阅读”里给定的活动：加入读书俱乐部、记笔记、写读后感，剩下的时间、地点两个空白项补充符合日常逻辑的合理内容即可，比如时间选课余空闲时间，地点选图书馆这类常见阅读场所；最后还要补充个人对阅读的看法，发出读书倡议。接下来按照逻辑分层行文：先承接给定开头讲阅读的意义，对应“为什么读”的内容；接着介绍适合阅读的读物类型，对应“读什么”；再讲合理的阅读安排和相关活动，对应“怎么读”；最后表达个人观点，号召同学们一起阅读，保证字数达标，语言通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 谋篇布局：全文分为4个逻辑段落，结构清晰完整：
第一段：承接给定开头，阐述阅读的价值，完整覆盖“为什么阅读”的全部3个要点，适当补充内容让表达更流畅；
第二段：介绍可选择的读物类型，覆盖“读什么”的全部要点，可适当补充同类合理读物丰富内容；
第三段：说明阅读的时间、地点安排，完整覆盖给定的阅读活动要点，补充细节让内容更真实自然；
第四段：输出个人观点，点明“阅读是终身旅程”的主题，向同学们发出阅读倡议。
2. 语言运用：使用besides、such as、in my opinion等连接词让行文逻辑连贯，句式兼顾简单句和复合句，符合初中英语写作的表达要求，字数满足不少于80词的规定，全程不出现个人真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version
Reading—a lifelong journey
As we know, reading plays an important role in our lives. We can get knowledge and learn many skills from books. Besides, we can develop interests through reading and make our lives colourful.
There are many kinds of books we can read, such as great books, science books and even newspapers. Magazines about study are also good choices for us.
We can read books in our free time, and it's a good idea to choose a quiet place to read books, like the library. How about joining the Reading Club in our school? While reading, it's necessary to take notes and write reviews. We can certainly share them with our friends in the club.
In my opinion, reading is a lifelong journey. We can see the world in the books. Let's read together.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，阅读话题表达，应用文写作规范
【点评】
本题属于半开放的提示类英语写作，所有核心写作要点都通过图示清晰给出，仅需要学生补充符合日常逻辑的阅读时间、地点内容，既降低了写作门槛，也给学生留出了合理的发挥空间，既考查学生的要点整合能力和基础英语表达能力，也传递了倡导终身阅读的正向价值导向。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先先梳理图示里所有需要覆盖的核心要点，避免遗漏：第一部分“为什么阅读”的三个要点：获取知识、学习技能、培养兴趣；第二部分“读什么”的三个要点：名著、科普书籍、报纸；第三部分“怎么阅读”里给定的活动：加入读书俱乐部、记笔记、写读后感，剩下的时间、地点两个空白项补充符合日常逻辑的合理内容即可，比如时间选课余空闲时间，地点选图书馆这类常见阅读场所；最后还要补充个人对阅读的看法，发出读书倡议。接下来按照逻辑分层行文：先承接给定开头讲阅读的意义，对应“为什么读”的内容；接着介绍适合阅读的读物类型，对应“读什么”；再讲合理的阅读安排和相关活动，对应“怎么读”；最后表达个人观点，号召同学们一起阅读，保证字数达标，语言通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 谋篇布局：全文分为4个逻辑段落，结构清晰完整：
第一段：承接给定开头，阐述阅读的价值，完整覆盖“为什么阅读”的全部3个要点，适当补充内容让表达更流畅；
第二段：介绍可选择的读物类型，覆盖“读什么”的全部要点，可适当补充同类合理读物丰富内容；
第三段：说明阅读的时间、地点安排，完整覆盖给定的阅读活动要点，补充细节让内容更真实自然；
第四段：输出个人观点，点明“阅读是终身旅程”的主题，向同学们发出阅读倡议。
2. 语言运用：使用besides、such as、in my opinion等连接词让行文逻辑连贯，句式兼顾简单句和复合句，符合初中英语写作的表达要求，字数满足不少于80词的规定，全程不出现个人真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version
Reading—a lifelong journey
As we know, reading plays an important role in our lives. We can get knowledge and learn many skills from books. Besides, we can develop interests through reading and make our lives colourful.
There are many kinds of books we can read, such as great books, science books and even newspapers. Magazines about study are also good choices for us.
We can read books in our free time, and it's a good idea to choose a quiet place to read books, like the library. How about joining the Reading Club in our school? While reading, it's necessary to take notes and write reviews. We can certainly share them with our friends in the club.
In my opinion, reading is a lifelong journey. We can see the world in the books. Let's read together.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，阅读话题表达，应用文写作规范
【点评】
本题属于半开放的提示类英语写作，所有核心写作要点都通过图示清晰给出，仅需要学生补充符合日常逻辑的阅读时间、地点内容，既降低了写作门槛，也给学生留出了合理的发挥空间，既考查学生的要点整合能力和基础英语表达能力，也传递了倡导终身阅读的正向价值导向。
【难度系数】
0.7
