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四、书面表达(本题有1小题,共20分)
最近,某英文报正在开展主题为“Love & Help”的征文活动。假如你是李华,请从下面两则故事中选择其一,利用图片所给提示编写情节较为完整的小故事,向报社投稿。
注意:1.需包含所选故事对应图片所示情节,可适当发挥;
2.请展开合理想象,续写故事的结尾;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
4.词数60左右。
最近,某英文报正在开展主题为“Love & Help”的征文活动。假如你是李华,请从下面两则故事中选择其一,利用图片所给提示编写情节较为完整的小故事,向报社投稿。
注意:1.需包含所选故事对应图片所示情节,可适当发挥;
2.请展开合理想象,续写故事的结尾;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
4.词数60左右。
答案
Possible version 1:
My friend Jason ate too much junk food. Day by day, he got fatter and fatter.
Last term, Jason took part in a basketball match. He ran so slowly that he missed the ball for several times. As a result, his team lost the match. He was upset and I encouraged him to make a change.
My words influenced Jason greatly, so he began to have a balanced diet and do more exercise. At last Jason lost some weight. This term, Jason aims to win the coming school basketball match.
Possible version 2:
Last Monday, my friend Sally was absent from school. I phoned her and knew she was ill in hospital. I decided to visit her after school and I bought some flowers on my way to the hospital.
When I saw her, I handed her the flowers. A big smile came on her pale face. Then, I offered to help with her homework during her hospital stay.
A week later, Sally got well and returned to school. Because of my help, Sally behaved well in her study. I felt as pleased as anything.
My friend Jason ate too much junk food. Day by day, he got fatter and fatter.
Last term, Jason took part in a basketball match. He ran so slowly that he missed the ball for several times. As a result, his team lost the match. He was upset and I encouraged him to make a change.
My words influenced Jason greatly, so he began to have a balanced diet and do more exercise. At last Jason lost some weight. This term, Jason aims to win the coming school basketball match.
Possible version 2:
Last Monday, my friend Sally was absent from school. I phoned her and knew she was ill in hospital. I decided to visit her after school and I bought some flowers on my way to the hospital.
When I saw her, I handed her the flowers. A big smile came on her pale face. Then, I offered to help with her homework during her hospital stay.
A week later, Sally got well and returned to school. Because of my help, Sally behaved well in her study. I felt as pleased as anything.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“Love & Help”为主题，从两则故事中选其一，结合图片提示词编写完整小故事。解题思路：1. 先选定故事（如Story I）；2. 梳理图片提示词：eat junk food（描述人物不良习惯）→ run slowly（对应运动表现）→ encourage（体现帮助行为）；3. 补充合理情节：人物因不良习惯运动失利、失落，得到鼓励后做出改变，结尾积极向上；4. 控制词数，避免真实信息，确保符合征文要求。
【解析】
以选Story I为例，写作步骤：① 开篇点明朋友Jason的习惯：Jason ate too much junk food，逐渐变胖；② 中间描述事件：参加篮球赛时run slowly，导致球队失利，他很沮丧；③ 体现主题：我encourage他做出改变；④ 结尾：他调整饮食、锻炼，减重，立志赢下下次比赛。注意用词准确，情节连贯，词数约60。
【答案】
My friend Jason ate too much junk food. Day by day, he got fatter and fatter. Last term, Jason took part in a basketball match. He ran so slowly that he missed the ball for several times. As a result, his team lost the match. He was upset and I encouraged him to make a change. My words influenced Jason greatly, so he began to have a balanced diet and do more exercise. At last Jason lost some weight. This term, Jason aims to win the coming school basketball match.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、词汇运用、情节写作
【点评】
作文紧扣“Love & Help”主题，合理运用图片提示词，情节完整连贯，结尾积极向上，符合征文要求，语言表达准确流畅。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“Love & Help”为主题，从两则故事中选其一，结合图片提示词编写完整小故事。解题思路：1. 先选定故事（如Story I）；2. 梳理图片提示词：eat junk food（描述人物不良习惯）→ run slowly（对应运动表现）→ encourage（体现帮助行为）；3. 补充合理情节：人物因不良习惯运动失利、失落，得到鼓励后做出改变，结尾积极向上；4. 控制词数，避免真实信息，确保符合征文要求。
【解析】
以选Story I为例，写作步骤：① 开篇点明朋友Jason的习惯：Jason ate too much junk food，逐渐变胖；② 中间描述事件：参加篮球赛时run slowly，导致球队失利，他很沮丧；③ 体现主题：我encourage他做出改变；④ 结尾：他调整饮食、锻炼，减重，立志赢下下次比赛。注意用词准确，情节连贯，词数约60。
【答案】
My friend Jason ate too much junk food. Day by day, he got fatter and fatter. Last term, Jason took part in a basketball match. He ran so slowly that he missed the ball for several times. As a result, his team lost the match. He was upset and I encouraged him to make a change. My words influenced Jason greatly, so he began to have a balanced diet and do more exercise. At last Jason lost some weight. This term, Jason aims to win the coming school basketball match.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、词汇运用、情节写作
【点评】
作文紧扣“Love & Help”主题，合理运用图片提示词，情节完整连贯，结尾积极向上，符合征文要求，语言表达准确流畅。
【难度系数】
0.5
