2026年实验班提优大考卷六年级英语下册译林版第24页答案
十五、书面表达。(6分)
健康的饮食十分重要。你的饮食健康吗?请你以"My diet"为题,写一篇英语小短文,不少于5句话。
My diet
I have a healthy diet. Every morning, I have a banana, an apple, some bread and milk. At noon, I usually eat rice or sandwiches. In the evening, I often eat chicken and fish. I also like to eat fast food, but I only eat once a week. A healthy eating habit makes me keep healthy and strong.







答案

My diet
I have a healthy diet. Every morning, I have a banana, an apple, some bread and milk. At noon, I usually eat rice or sandwiches. In the evening, I often eat chicken and fish. I also like to eat fast food, but I only eat once a week. A healthy eating habit makes me keep healthy and strong.
归纳总结 频度副词
一般用来表示动作发生的频率,常见频度副词按频率由高到低排列如下:always > usually> often>sometimes>seldom(很少)> never。对频率提问用how often或how many times。注意:频度副词只强调动作的频率高低,任何时态下都可以使用。

解析

【分析】
拿到这道以My diet为题的写作题,首先要明确核心要求:围绕自身饮食情况展开,不少于5句话,主题关联健康饮食。我们可以按照「总-分-总」的思路构思:第一步先开篇直接点明自己的饮食是健康的,开门见山点题;第二步按照早、中、晚的时间顺序依次介绍自己三餐的常规饮食内容,逻辑清晰不容易混乱;第三步补充说明自己对非健康类食物的摄入频率,用上课内学过的频度副词丰富内容;最后收尾点明健康饮食给自己带来的好处,呼应主题,这样写下来很容易满足不少于5句话的要求,也不会跑题。
【解析】
本篇范文的写作步骤完全贴合构思逻辑:
1. 开篇点题:第一句"I have a healthy diet."直接亮明核心观点,开门见山。
2. 按时间顺序铺陈细节:依次介绍早餐、午餐、晚餐的日常饮食选择,内容都是学生熟悉的常见食物,用词简单贴合学情。
3. 补充特殊饮食情况:说明自己虽然喜欢快餐,但每周只吃一次,既体现了内容的真实性,也合理运用了频度副词,符合知识点考察要求。
4. 结尾升华:最后一句点明健康饮食习惯的作用,收束全文,结构完整。
【答案】
My diet
I have a healthy diet. Every morning, I have a banana, an apple, some bread and milk. At noon, I usually eat rice or sandwiches. In the evening, I often eat chicken and fish. I also like to eat fast food, but I only eat once a week. A healthy eating habit makes me keep healthy and strong.
【知识点】
英语话题写作;频度副词用法;饮食类词汇运用
【点评】
这篇范文完全符合题目不少于5句话的要求,整体采用总-分-总的结构,以时间为叙事线索,逻辑清晰通顺,没有超纲的复杂表达,还自然融入了单元核心的频度副词知识点,内容贴合学生日常生活,是非常适合模仿的低年级英语写作范本,同学们写作时也可以参考这种按时间顺序梳理内容的思路,能有效避免逻辑混乱、内容空洞的问题。
【难度系数】
0.7