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Ⅵ.书面表达。
以Our school为题，介绍学校的过去和现在，畅想学校的未来。
Our school
In the past, our school was
Now, our school is
In the future, our school will be
以Our school为题，介绍学校的过去和现在，畅想学校的未来。
Our school
In the past, our school was
small and old. There was no library. There were no computers. There were not many teachers or students. But There were many trees and flowers. Teachers gave lessons with chalk and textbooks. Students carried all books to school. Cleaners cleaned the floor with brooms.
Now, our school is
big and beautiful. There is a big playground. We can play there. There is a library. There are many books. We can read and write in it. There are many teachers and students. Teachers give lessons with computers. We have art classes in the art room. We have computer classes in the computer room. Cleaners clean the floor with machines.
In the future, our school will be
more beautiful. There will be a swimming pool. There will be a beautiful garden. Teachers and students will grow lots of plants in it. There will be robot teachers. We will study online. We will not carry books to school. All books will be read on a small computer.
答案
参考范文:
In the past, our school was small and old. There
was no library. There were no computers. There
were not many teachers or students. But There
were many trees and flowers. Teachers gave
lessons with chalk and textbooks. Students
carried all books to school. Cleaners cleaned the
floor with brooms.
Now, our school is big and beautiful. There is
a big playground. We can play there. There is a
library. There are many books. We can read and
write in it. There are many teachers and students.
Teachers give lessons with computers. We have
art classes in the art room. We have computer
classes in the computer room. Cleaners clean the
floor with machines.
In the future, our school will be more beautiful.
There will be a swimming pool. There will be a
beautiful garden. Teachers and students will grow
lots of plants in it. There will be robot teachers.
We will study online. We will not carry books
to school. All books will be read on a small
computer.
In the past, our school was small and old. There
was no library. There were no computers. There
were not many teachers or students. But There
were many trees and flowers. Teachers gave
lessons with chalk and textbooks. Students
carried all books to school. Cleaners cleaned the
floor with brooms.
Now, our school is big and beautiful. There is
a big playground. We can play there. There is a
library. There are many books. We can read and
write in it. There are many teachers and students.
Teachers give lessons with computers. We have
art classes in the art room. We have computer
classes in the computer room. Cleaners clean the
floor with machines.
In the future, our school will be more beautiful.
There will be a swimming pool. There will be a
beautiful garden. Teachers and students will grow
lots of plants in it. There will be robot teachers.
We will study online. We will not carry books
to school. All books will be read on a small
computer.
解析
【分析】
这道书面表达题要求围绕“Our school”主题，按照过去、现在、未来三个时间维度完成写作，解题时首先要对应题干给出的思维导图提示梳理写作逻辑：第一步先处理过去部分，全部使用一般过去时，先描述过去学校的整体外观、配套设施情况，再补充过去教师授课、学生上学、校园工作人员工作的具体场景；第二步处理现在部分，切换为一般现在时，对应过去的不足写出现在学校的升级变化，介绍新增的设施和当下的校园日常；第三步处理未来部分，使用一般将来时，合理畅想未来学校的设施升级、教学模式的变化，全程注意不同时间对应的时态不要混淆，把思维导图给出的参考句型合理融入内容，保证语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三个模块分步完成：
1. 过去模块：使用一般过去时，开篇点明过去学校的整体特征，再用There was/were系列句型介绍过去学校的设施情况，之后补充描述过去师生、校园保洁的日常行为，贴合提示的表达框架。
2. 现在模块：切换为一般现在时，点明现在学校的整体变化，用There is/are系列句型介绍现在新增的各类校园设施，再描述当下教师授课、学生上课、保洁工作的新方式，体现校园的发展进步。
3. 未来模块：使用一般将来时，畅想未来学校的整体样貌，用There will be系列句型介绍未来新增的特色设施，再描述未来教学模式、学习方式的变化，内容积极合理即可。
【答案】
参考范文:
In the past, our school was small and old. There was no library. There were no computers. There were not many teachers or students. But There were many trees and flowers. Teachers gave lessons with chalk and textbooks. Students carried all books to school. Cleaners cleaned the floor with brooms.
Now, our school is big and beautiful. There is a big playground. We can play there. There is a library. There are many books. We can read and write in it. There are many teachers and students. Teachers give lessons with computers. We have art classes in the art room. We have computer classes in the computer room. Cleaners clean the floor with machines.
In the future, our school will be more beautiful. There will be a swimming pool. There will be a beautiful garden. Teachers and students will grow lots of plants in it. There will be robot teachers. We will study online. We will not carry books to school. All books will be read on a small computer.
【知识点】
一般过去时用法
一般将来时用法
There be句型
【点评】
本题给出了清晰的思维导图提示和写作框架，大幅降低了写作的跑题概率，学生只需要按照时间线对应匹配正确时态，将提示的句型结合合理的校园场景填充内容即可完成写作，范文逻辑清晰，时态使用准确，完整覆盖了过去、现在、未来三个维度的写作要求，是非常规范的参考示例。
【难度系数】
0.6
这道书面表达题要求围绕“Our school”主题，按照过去、现在、未来三个时间维度完成写作，解题时首先要对应题干给出的思维导图提示梳理写作逻辑：第一步先处理过去部分，全部使用一般过去时，先描述过去学校的整体外观、配套设施情况，再补充过去教师授课、学生上学、校园工作人员工作的具体场景；第二步处理现在部分，切换为一般现在时，对应过去的不足写出现在学校的升级变化，介绍新增的设施和当下的校园日常；第三步处理未来部分，使用一般将来时，合理畅想未来学校的设施升级、教学模式的变化，全程注意不同时间对应的时态不要混淆，把思维导图给出的参考句型合理融入内容，保证语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三个模块分步完成：
1. 过去模块：使用一般过去时，开篇点明过去学校的整体特征，再用There was/were系列句型介绍过去学校的设施情况，之后补充描述过去师生、校园保洁的日常行为，贴合提示的表达框架。
2. 现在模块：切换为一般现在时，点明现在学校的整体变化，用There is/are系列句型介绍现在新增的各类校园设施，再描述当下教师授课、学生上课、保洁工作的新方式，体现校园的发展进步。
3. 未来模块：使用一般将来时，畅想未来学校的整体样貌，用There will be系列句型介绍未来新增的特色设施，再描述未来教学模式、学习方式的变化，内容积极合理即可。
【答案】
参考范文:
In the past, our school was small and old. There was no library. There were no computers. There were not many teachers or students. But There were many trees and flowers. Teachers gave lessons with chalk and textbooks. Students carried all books to school. Cleaners cleaned the floor with brooms.
Now, our school is big and beautiful. There is a big playground. We can play there. There is a library. There are many books. We can read and write in it. There are many teachers and students. Teachers give lessons with computers. We have art classes in the art room. We have computer classes in the computer room. Cleaners clean the floor with machines.
In the future, our school will be more beautiful. There will be a swimming pool. There will be a beautiful garden. Teachers and students will grow lots of plants in it. There will be robot teachers. We will study online. We will not carry books to school. All books will be read on a small computer.
【知识点】
一般过去时用法
一般将来时用法
There be句型
【点评】
本题给出了清晰的思维导图提示和写作框架，大幅降低了写作的跑题概率，学生只需要按照时间线对应匹配正确时态，将提示的句型结合合理的校园场景填充内容即可完成写作，范文逻辑清晰，时态使用准确，完整覆盖了过去、现在、未来三个维度的写作要求，是非常规范的参考示例。
【难度系数】
0.6
