Ⅸ. 书面表达。(共1小题,计10分)
75. 假设你是 Li Hua,你的英国笔友 Tony 想了解你的家及你的社区。请根据以下提示,给他写一封电子邮件。
提示:
(1)你家的位置、房子类型、房间布局;
(2)你所在社区的情况(如:基础设施、环境、邻居等)。
要求:
(1)包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;
(3)80 词左右,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I'm glad to tell you something about my home and my community.






I really love my home and my community. What about yours? Write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

75.【范文】
Dear Tony,
I'm glad to tell you something about my home and my community.
I live in a comfortable apartment on the fifth floor of a building in a great community. My apartment has a living room and dining area. Next to it is a modern kitchen. There are two bedrooms. One is my personal space, and the other is a guest room. Besides, there is a tidy bathroom.
The community is wonderful. People can exercise in a fitness center, and there is a small but beautiful garden for relaxing. The environment is clean and quiet, with trees and flowers everywhere. My neighbours are very nice. We often meet in the hallway and have friendly conversations.
I really love my home and my community. What about yours?
Write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】首先审题，明确写作任务是给英国笔友Tony写邮件，介绍自己的家与社区，需包含家的位置、房子类型、房间布局，以及社区的基础设施、环境、邻居等内容，邮件开头和结尾已给出，中间需写80词左右的内容。接着构思内容：家的部分可描述居住的公寓位置、楼层及房间布局；社区部分可介绍健身设施、花园、环境和邻居情况，使用连接词让内容连贯，确保语言准确通顺。
【解析】1. 开头已给出，直接衔接家的介绍：说明居住在某栋楼五楼的舒适公寓，列举客厅、餐厅、厨房、两间卧室、浴室等房间布局；2. 过渡到社区：描述社区的健身中心、小花园，环境干净安静，邻居友好；3. 结尾呼应题目要求，保持邮件格式规范。
【答案】Dear Tony,
I'm glad to tell you something about my home and my community.
I live in a comfortable apartment on the fifth floor of a building in a great community. My apartment has a living room and dining area. Next to it is a modern kitchen. There are two bedrooms. One is my personal space, and the other is a guest room. Besides, there is a tidy bathroom.
The community is wonderful. People can exercise in a fitness center, and there is a small but beautiful garden for relaxing. The environment is clean and quiet, with trees and flowers everywhere. My neighbours are very nice. We often meet in the hallway and have friendly conversations.
I really love my home and my community. What about yours?
Write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语邮件写作、家与社区话题表达、连贯语句运用
【点评】本题考查学生运用英语介绍家与社区的书面表达能力，范文紧扣所有提示要求，结构清晰，语言简洁通顺，符合邮件的亲切语气，是优秀的参考范例。
【难度系数】0.6