根据提示,以“My Space Dream”为题,写一篇小短文。
Daming's birthday gift gave him a space dream. What is your dream? Do you want to be a taikonaut, a scientist, or to build spaceships? What will you do for your dream?
写作提示(Writing Tips):
开头:可以用“I have a dream.”或“My dream is to...”开头。
主体:写出你的梦想是什么,以及你打算为此做些什么(可以写1~2件具体的事)。尽量使用我们学过的单词和过去时来描述你已做的事或计划。
结尾:可以用“I hope my dream can come true!”。
可能用到的单词:dream, taikonaut, scientist, spaceship, model, learn, read, watch, make, study, practise,将来想用“will”,过去的事用“-ed”(如 watched, made)。
My Space Dream
Daming's birthday gift gave him a space dream. What is your dream? Do you want to be a taikonaut, a scientist, or to build spaceships? What will you do for your dream?
写作提示(Writing Tips):
开头:可以用“I have a dream.”或“My dream is to...”开头。
主体:写出你的梦想是什么,以及你打算为此做些什么(可以写1~2件具体的事)。尽量使用我们学过的单词和过去时来描述你已做的事或计划。
结尾:可以用“I hope my dream can come true!”。
可能用到的单词:dream, taikonaut, scientist, spaceship, model, learn, read, watch, make, study, practise,将来想用“will”,过去的事用“-ed”(如 watched, made)。
My Space Dream
答案
I have a dream. My dream is to be a taikonaut in the future.
Last month, I watched many TV shows about Chinese space travel. I also made a small model spaceship with my father, it was very nice.
For my dream, I will study science hard at school. I will also do sports every day to make me strong.
I hope my dream can come true!
Last month, I watched many TV shows about Chinese space travel. I also made a small model spaceship with my father, it was very nice.
For my dream, I will study science hard at school. I will also do sports every day to make me strong.
I hope my dream can come true!
解析
这是一篇符合六年级英语要求的命题写作题,写作要点如下:
1. 开篇可选用提示给出的指定句式,清晰点明自己和太空相关的梦想;
2. 主体部分按照要求,用动词过去式描述已经为梦想完成的小事,再用will描述后续为实现梦想要做的具体计划,尽量使用题目给出的提示词汇,贴合学习过的语法内容;
3. 结尾用指定的收尾句点明对梦想的期许,全文篇幅简短,词汇简单,符合六年级学生的写作水平即可。
1. 开篇可选用提示给出的指定句式,清晰点明自己和太空相关的梦想;
2. 主体部分按照要求,用动词过去式描述已经为梦想完成的小事,再用will描述后续为实现梦想要做的具体计划,尽量使用题目给出的提示词汇,贴合学习过的语法内容;
3. 结尾用指定的收尾句点明对梦想的期许,全文篇幅简短,词汇简单,符合六年级学生的写作水平即可。
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