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1.假设你是李华，收到好友Tom的电子邮件，Tom倾诉烦恼并寻求帮助，需回复邮件给予安慰和具体建议。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm in great trouble and need your help. I failed my maths exam again, and my parents are really angry with me. I've tried studying hard, but I still can't understand some difficult topics. Now I feel so stressed that I can't sleep well. What should I do?
Tom
要求:(1)回复须围绕上述问题展开,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(2)80词左右;(3)回复的邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
Dear Li Hua,
I'm in great trouble and need your help. I failed my maths exam again, and my parents are really angry with me. I've tried studying hard, but I still can't understand some difficult topics. Now I feel so stressed that I can't sleep well. What should I do?
Tom
要求:(1)回复须围绕上述问题展开,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(2)80词左右;(3)回复的邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
答案
1. One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you're stressed about your maths exam and family's anger—it's totally normal to feel down when things don't go well.
First, don't be too hard on yourself. You've tried your best, and failing doesn't mean you're not good enough. Why not ask your maths teacher for help? They can explain difficult topics clearly. Also, you can make a study plan to review little by little every day.
Talking to your parents calmly might help too—tell them you're trying and need their support. I believe with these steps, you'll improve soon.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
(91 words)
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you're stressed about your maths exam and family's anger—it's totally normal to feel down when things don't go well.
First, don't be too hard on yourself. You've tried your best, and failing doesn't mean you're not good enough. Why not ask your maths teacher for help? They can explain difficult topics clearly. Also, you can make a study plan to review little by little every day.
Talking to your parents calmly might help too—tell them you're trying and need their support. I believe with these steps, you'll improve soon.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
(91 words)
解析
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份给好友Tom写回信，针对Tom数学考试失利、压力大、父母生气的烦恼，需先共情安慰，再给出具体可行的建议，要符合邮件格式，语言连贯，词数达标。解题思路：①承接开头的安慰句，点明Tom的具体烦恼，表达理解；②分点给出合理建议（不自责、找老师、做计划、和父母沟通）；③衔接结尾句，确保内容完整。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：承接给定的“I'm sorry to hear that”，点明Tom的烦恼（数学考试失利、压力大、父母生气），表达共情；2. 中间建议：①安慰Tom不要自责，肯定他的努力；②建议向数学老师求助，老师能清晰讲解难点；③建议制定每日学习计划，逐步复习；④建议和父母沟通，说明自己的努力，寻求支持；3. 结尾：使用给定的句子，确保内容连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you're stressed about your maths exam and family's anger—it's totally normal to feel down when things don't go well.
First, don't be too hard on yourself. You've tried your best, and failing doesn't mean you're not good enough. Why not ask your maths teacher for help? They can explain difficult topics clearly. Also, you can make a study plan to review little by little every day.
Talking to your parents calmly might help too—tell them you're trying and need their support. I believe with these steps, you'll improve soon.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类应用文、英语交际表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，针对Tom的烦恼给出具体可行的建议，共情自然，结构清晰，语言连贯，符合邮件格式，词数达标，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.4
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：承接给定的“I'm sorry to hear that”，点明Tom的烦恼（数学考试失利、压力大、父母生气），表达共情；2. 中间建议：①安慰Tom不要自责，肯定他的努力；②建议向数学老师求助，老师能清晰讲解难点；③建议制定每日学习计划，逐步复习；④建议和父母沟通，说明自己的努力，寻求支持；3. 结尾：使用给定的句子，确保内容连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you're stressed about your maths exam and family's anger—it's totally normal to feel down when things don't go well.
First, don't be too hard on yourself. You've tried your best, and failing doesn't mean you're not good enough. Why not ask your maths teacher for help? They can explain difficult topics clearly. Also, you can make a study plan to review little by little every day.
Talking to your parents calmly might help too—tell them you're trying and need their support. I believe with these steps, you'll improve soon.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类应用文、英语交际表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，针对Tom的烦恼给出具体可行的建议，共情自然，结构清晰，语言连贯，符合邮件格式，词数达标，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.4
