七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共10分)
假如你是Henry,近期你在“树洞聊天室”看到一则Nancy发布的留言,谈到自己在学习和生活中遇到的问题。请你结合下面的图示,给她写一封邮件,帮助她克服焦虑情绪,轻松、快乐地学习和生活。
要求:1.必须包含图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.邮件中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名;
3.80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
I'm sorry to hear about your problems.
Yours truly,
Henry
假如你是Henry,近期你在“树洞聊天室”看到一则Nancy发布的留言,谈到自己在学习和生活中遇到的问题。请你结合下面的图示,给她写一封邮件,帮助她克服焦虑情绪,轻松、快乐地学习和生活。
要求:1.必须包含图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.邮件中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名;
3.80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
I'm sorry to hear about your problems.
Yours truly,
Henry
答案
One possible version:
Dear Nancy,
I'm sorry to hear about your problems. Everyone feels worried or sad sometimes. I hope you can live a happy life.
It's good to communicate with your friends, teachers and parents when you are in trouble. Listening to music or watching movies is another way to help you relax. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself. What's more, exercise can not only make you feel less stressed, but also help you keep fit. Try to smile more at yourself and never keep your problems to yourself. Please do remember: You're not alone.
No matter how many difficulties we face, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours truly,
Henry
Dear Nancy,
I'm sorry to hear about your problems. Everyone feels worried or sad sometimes. I hope you can live a happy life.
It's good to communicate with your friends, teachers and parents when you are in trouble. Listening to music or watching movies is another way to help you relax. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself. What's more, exercise can not only make you feel less stressed, but also help you keep fit. Try to smile more at yourself and never keep your problems to yourself. Please do remember: You're not alone.
No matter how many difficulties we face, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours truly,
Henry
解析
【分析】本题要求以Henry的身份给Nancy写一封建议邮件,帮助她克服焦虑。解题思路:首先承接已给开头表达共情;其次需涵盖图示对应的所有要点(与亲友沟通、听音乐/看电影、阅读、运动等放松方式);接着补充鼓励的内容,如微笑、不独自承担问题;最后总结鼓励她克服困难,确保字数符合要求,不出现真实信息。
【解析】写作遵循“共情→具体建议→鼓励总结”的结构:1. 开头承接:说明每个人都有烦恼,表达对Nancy的理解;2. 给出具体建议:依次列出与亲友沟通、听音乐/看电影、阅读、运动等放松方法;3. 补充鼓励:建议多微笑、不独自扛问题,强调她并非孤单一人;4. 结尾总结:鼓励她克服困难,符合邮件格式与字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Nancy,
I'm sorry to hear about your problems. Everyone feels worried or sad sometimes. I hope you can live a happy life.
It's good to communicate with your friends, teachers and parents when you are in trouble. Listening to music or watching movies is another way to help you relax. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself. What's more, exercise can not only make you feel less stressed, but also help you keep fit. Try to smile more at yourself and never keep your problems to yourself. Please do remember: You're not alone.
No matter how many difficulties we face, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours truly,
Henry
【知识点】英语建议信写作、情绪调节话题表达
【点评】本题结合学生真实生活场景,考查建议类书面表达的写作能力,要求涵盖所有要点并适当发挥,是初中英语常见题型,注重语言的实用性与交际性。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作遵循“共情→具体建议→鼓励总结”的结构:1. 开头承接:说明每个人都有烦恼,表达对Nancy的理解;2. 给出具体建议:依次列出与亲友沟通、听音乐/看电影、阅读、运动等放松方法;3. 补充鼓励:建议多微笑、不独自扛问题,强调她并非孤单一人;4. 结尾总结:鼓励她克服困难,符合邮件格式与字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Nancy,
I'm sorry to hear about your problems. Everyone feels worried or sad sometimes. I hope you can live a happy life.
It's good to communicate with your friends, teachers and parents when you are in trouble. Listening to music or watching movies is another way to help you relax. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself. What's more, exercise can not only make you feel less stressed, but also help you keep fit. Try to smile more at yourself and never keep your problems to yourself. Please do remember: You're not alone.
No matter how many difficulties we face, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Yours truly,
Henry
【知识点】英语建议信写作、情绪调节话题表达
【点评】本题结合学生真实生活场景,考查建议类书面表达的写作能力,要求涵盖所有要点并适当发挥,是初中英语常见题型,注重语言的实用性与交际性。
【难度系数】0.6
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