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第二节:书面表达。
76.英语课上,老师正在组织"一次校园劳动实践给你带来的体验"为主题的演讲活动。假如你是李华,请根据下表你校上周校园劳动日的信息写一篇演讲稿在班上分享。
A Happy Memory from the School Labour(劳动) Day
| 要点 | 参考词汇 |
| --- | --- |
| What did you do? | planted... /cleaned... /cooked... /designed... |
| What's your feeling or opinion? | excited/prd/surprised...
helpful/important/fun... |
| Why do you think so? | improved skills(技能) about... /full of gains... /explored... /experienced... /helped... |
要求:(1)演讲稿中必须包含图表中所有内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2)不得出现个人真实姓名和校名;
(3)词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, my friends!
I am very happy to share my labour experience with you here. Last week,
76.英语课上,老师正在组织"一次校园劳动实践给你带来的体验"为主题的演讲活动。假如你是李华,请根据下表你校上周校园劳动日的信息写一篇演讲稿在班上分享。
A Happy Memory from the School Labour(劳动) Day
| 要点 | 参考词汇 |
| --- | --- |
| What did you do? | planted... /cleaned... /cooked... /designed... |
| What's your feeling or opinion? | excited/prd/surprised...
helpful/important/fun... |
| Why do you think so? | improved skills(技能) about... /full of gains... /explored... /experienced... /helped... |
要求:(1)演讲稿中必须包含图表中所有内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2)不得出现个人真实姓名和校名;
(3)词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, my friends!
I am very happy to share my labour experience with you here. Last week,
our school held a Labour Day. We took part in planting trees. It was really a happy memory.
It was a hot day. We got together and went to the field.
We needed to dig some holes and put the trees in, but the trees were too heavy to carry.
So I tried to give a hand to my classmates. We worked together and planted trees carefully.
Soon, we finished the planting activity.
It was a day full of gains and happiness.
Plato once said, "Happiness springs from doing good and helping others."
When I received my classmates' thanks, I felt really happy.
答案
76. One possible version:
Hello, my friends!
I am very happy to share my labour experience with you here. Last week, our school held a Labour Day. We took part in planting trees. It was really a happy memory.
It was a hot day. We got together and went to the field. We needed to dig some holes and put the trees in, but the trees were too heavy to carry. So I tried to give a hand to my classmates. We worked together and planted trees carefully. Soon, we finished the planting activity.
It was a day full of gains and happiness. Plato once said, "Happiness springs from doing good and helping others." When I received my classmates' thanks, I felt really happy.
Hello, my friends!
I am very happy to share my labour experience with you here. Last week, our school held a Labour Day. We took part in planting trees. It was really a happy memory.
It was a hot day. We got together and went to the field. We needed to dig some holes and put the trees in, but the trees were too heavy to carry. So I tried to give a hand to my classmates. We worked together and planted trees carefully. Soon, we finished the planting activity.
It was a day full of gains and happiness. Plato once said, "Happiness springs from doing good and helping others." When I received my classmates' thanks, I felt really happy.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“校园劳动日的快乐回忆”为主题写演讲稿，需覆盖三个核心要点：①劳动日所做的具体事情（需使用给定参考词汇）；②自身的感受或观点（使用参考词汇）；③产生该感受的原因（使用参考词汇）。解题时需注意：时态用一般过去时（描述上周的活动），承接已给开头，词数约80，不得出现真实信息，确保内容完整、语句通顺，符合演讲稿的积极语气。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，点明上周学校劳动日的活动（如参与种树，对应参考词汇planted）；2. 简述劳动过程（如合作挖坑、扶树），引出自身感受（如开心、有收获，对应参考词汇excited、full of gains）；3. 说明感受的原因，如通过劳动提升技能、帮助同学（对应参考词汇improved skills、helped）；4. 适当补充细节，使内容连贯，覆盖所有要点，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, my friends!
I am very happy to share my labour experience with you here. Last week, our school held a Labour Day. We took part in planting trees. It was really a happy memory.
It was a hot day. We got together and went to the field. We needed to dig some holes and put the trees in, but the trees were too heavy to carry. So I tried to give a hand to my classmates. We worked together and planted trees carefully. Soon, we finished the planting activity.
It was a day full of gains and happiness. Plato once said, "Happiness springs from doing good and helping others." When I received my classmates' thanks, I felt really happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，一般过去时，演讲稿写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，有合理的细节补充，符合演讲稿的文体要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“校园劳动日的快乐回忆”为主题写演讲稿，需覆盖三个核心要点：①劳动日所做的具体事情（需使用给定参考词汇）；②自身的感受或观点（使用参考词汇）；③产生该感受的原因（使用参考词汇）。解题时需注意：时态用一般过去时（描述上周的活动），承接已给开头，词数约80，不得出现真实信息，确保内容完整、语句通顺，符合演讲稿的积极语气。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接给定开头，点明上周学校劳动日的活动（如参与种树，对应参考词汇planted）；2. 简述劳动过程（如合作挖坑、扶树），引出自身感受（如开心、有收获，对应参考词汇excited、full of gains）；3. 说明感受的原因，如通过劳动提升技能、帮助同学（对应参考词汇improved skills、helped）；4. 适当补充细节，使内容连贯，覆盖所有要点，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, my friends!
I am very happy to share my labour experience with you here. Last week, our school held a Labour Day. We took part in planting trees. It was really a happy memory.
It was a hot day. We got together and went to the field. We needed to dig some holes and put the trees in, but the trees were too heavy to carry. So I tried to give a hand to my classmates. We worked together and planted trees carefully. Soon, we finished the planting activity.
It was a day full of gains and happiness. Plato once said, "Happiness springs from doing good and helping others." When I received my classmates' thanks, I felt really happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，一般过去时，演讲稿写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，有合理的细节补充，符合演讲稿的文体要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
